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 Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:07 am
 Rules:
~ No posting in a test thread unless it's your test.
~ Limited to 4 posts. You can use less.
~ You have 2 weeks to finish your rp.
~ Must use the battle field type assigned to you.
~ You create a monster of your choice, unless a different rule is specified for that test.
~ Have fun!
1~Ice- Pretty simple with this one. The floor becomes solid ice. There are random chunks of ice protruding from the floor. And of course, you have little to no traction.
2~Desert- Pretty much nothing but massive sand dunes. You sink down into the sand, which slows you down a LOT. If the wind blows, the sand gets kicked up, which obscures vision.
3~Open Field- A plain grassy field with nothing on it.
4~Ocean- A mini ocean about 40 feet deep. There are five floating platforms for battlers to stand on. The plat forms bob around and it's really hard to keep your balance on them.
5~Dense Forest- The arena is packed from wall to wall with dense, tropical trees. As in any tropical jungle, there are lots of vines and other such things to get tangled up in.
6~Land of Fire- Parts of the arena floor sink away, leaving behind pits of lava. Also, pillars of fire erupt from the floor periodically.
7~Concrete- A plain concrete floor.
8~The Abyss- Near complete darkness engulfs the arena. Dark energy is abundant in this field.
9~The Sanctuary- Opposite of the Abyss. Light energy fills the arena. Its very bright!
10~No floor- The floor drops away leaving a pit filled with spikes. There are levitating platforms at varying heights, going all the way to the top of the arena. It's hard to jump from platform to platform, and trust me, you don't want to fall.
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ginseku generated a random number between
1 and 10 ...
10!
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:20 am
And your testing room is...10~ No floor- The floor drops away leaving a pit filled with spikes. There are levitating platforms at varying heights, going all the way to the top of the arena. It's hard to jump from platform to platform, and trust me, you don't want to fall.
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:38 am
May landed on a platform and it started to wobble a bit. She got down low to the point she was on her belly and inched her way to the edge. Her eyes widened at the high she was at. "Ah! I don't like this!" She screamed as she quickly got away from the edge and to the middle of the platform. "I hate this. I hate... hate... hate it." She began to shiver out of fear. May is deathly scared of being up in high places without some kind of support or something to keep her from falling. She slowly stood up and looked at the other platforms wondering where the monster was. When the platform began to wobble she ducked down again. 'I'm going to lose this fight. I just know it.' She thought. Something slimy it her shoulder, she touched it. "Ew." She clean off her shoulder. 'Oh dear... God!' She looked up to see a dragon staring down at her. "Um, hello." The dragon let out a loud roar that sent May running. 'What worse? Dragon or platform?' She thought to herself. She stopped at the edge. 'Has got to be the platform.' She looked down and started to feel dizzy. She shook her head and opened her purse. "Broom. Where are you?" She looked behind her and then jumped as the dragon was just a few inches from her.
She reached out and grabbed a hold of the next platform before she could fall. She took her other arm out of its sling and began to pull herself up. "No." She started crying as pain screamed wildly in her hurt arm. "Ow." She got herself up onto the platform. "Broom! Get out here now!" She looked into the bag. 'I should have never put a spell on that thing.' She made her way away from the edge. 'It's defiantly the platforms.'
The dragon landed on the platform to make it tilt. May got a hold of the edge that was being tilted up. Then she saw a fire ball heading for her. She moved herself out of the way, but part of her dress got burned and was on fire. "Ah!" She swotted at the fire with her good hand to make it go away. The fire was finally put out just as her weak arm let go of the platform. The dragon quickly moved out of the way to let May fall to her death. "Broom! Help me for gods sake!" She screamed as she fell.
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:03 pm
May's broom finally come out of her bag. "Oh there you are! Catch me!" She ordered. The broom caught her. "Ow!" She held onto the broom as it lifted her back up to a platform. "You..." She started, but the roar of the dragon made her go quiet. She then positioned herself and got control over the disobedient broom. She turned sharp and headed up as the dragon chased after her. 'What can beat a dragon of darkness? I can't remember... no!' She thought as she flew under a platform. 'I want this to stop now. I want it to be over.' She looked around and then down at the spikes. 'I bet I could use those.' Slowly she began to lower herself down to where she was no less then a foot away from the spikes. 'If this doesn't work then I'll just cut the wings up.' May pulled her bow and arrow out of her bag and aimed at the dragon that was tailing her. She held her breath and steadied herself before firing the shot. She added no spell to the arrow know good and well magic had no affect on dragons. Her arrowed missed the dragon so she pulled out another. "Your not dodging this one." She hissed under her breath. She took aim and shot with out blancing herself. The arrow cut through the dragons wing making it roar in pain and lose blance. May quickly put her bow up and crossed her legs under the broom. With a quick movement she was up-side-down and flying over the dragon.
May moved quickly and unlocked her legs from the broom. Then she slamed her feet onto the dragons back. "Heavy as a stone..." She said aloud as she thought about being as heavy as a big stone and casted a small spell that would last only so long. It helped and she pushed the dragon down into spikes, but sense the spell really did make her that heavy she lost her grip on the broom and fell down in to the dragons back. She blacked out for a bit, but shortly woke-up. She looked to her left to see a spike right next to her. "Oh s**t..." She said sitting up."Thank the heavens." She sighed. May then saw her broom floating above her. Grabbing it, she climbed on and exited the testing room.
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:04 pm
I'll drop a 60 on this, or a C-
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:42 pm
Scoring:
A- 85 credits
B- 75 credits
C- 65 credits
D- 45 credits
F- 20 credits
Length and Pacing: WAY TOO SHORT and there was no pacing really
General grammar rules: You need major improvements. Harsh as this is, I'm being nice. Get a spellcheck if you need to or go back to english class, I'd say about 6th grade maybe.
Personality: So May is a chicken who gets lucky....mmk. Needed more
Use of Environment: You used it...
Details: Very poor. That's all I'm going to say.
45 or a D
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:16 pm
Grade 1=60
Grade 2=45
Final grade=52.5(<53)
Credits earned=53
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