Okey, and now, following my own advice. Tada!
Marked Beginning StoryMarked and the world they live in are my own creations. There are many species of the same dog-like creature that live in this realm, but the Marked are outcasts that are 'mixed' where two of these separate species bred. As they mature their coat changes and they go through painful spasms. These spasms are actually their own body tearing itself apart. For some reason (havnt figured it out yet) starts to separate when they mature, and the two different DNA sequences force eachother apart and end up killing the Marked. There are three ways to go when one is a Marked. Surviving until the spasms are only minutes apart, when the pain kills you. Dieing from drowning, burning, or other such thing because a spasm comes at the wrong time. Or suicide.
The MarkedA Day at the ZooJust... sat down and started writing this one <.< >.>
Rishal Fight SceneA trade for a picture with my sister. She wanted a fight scene with her character Rishal, gave me some specifics, and... I did <.< >.>