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Ryuka Navali Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:16 am
 Rules:
~ No posting in a test thread unless it's your test.
~ Limited to 4 posts. You can use less.
~ You have 2 weeks to finish your rp.
~ Must use the battle field type assigned to you.
~ You create a monster of your choice, unless a different rule is specified for that test.
~ Have fun!
1~Ice- Pretty simple with this one. The floor becomes solid ice. There are random chunks of ice protruding from the floor. And of course, you have little to no traction.
2~Desert- Pretty much nothing but massive sand dunes. You sink down into the sand, which slows you down a LOT. If the wind blows, the sand gets kicked up, which obscures vision.
3~Open Field- A plain grassy field with nothing on it.
4~Ocean- A mini ocean about 40 feet deep. There are five floating platforms for battlers to stand on. The plat forms bob around and it's really hard to keep your balance on them.
5~Dense Forest- The arena is packed from wall to wall with dense, tropical trees. As in any tropical jungle, there are lots of vines and other such things to get tangled up in.
6~Land of Fire- Parts of the arena floor sink away, leaving behind pits of lava. Also, pillars of fire erupt from the floor periodically.
7~Concrete- A plain concrete floor.
8~The Abyss- Near complete darkness engulfs the arena. Dark energy is abundant in this field.
9~The Sanctuary- Opposite of the Abyss. Light energy fills the arena. Its very bright!
10~No floor- The floor drops away leaving a pit filled with spikes. There are levitating platforms at varying heights, going all the way to the top of the arena. It's hard to jump from platform to platform, and trust me, you don't want to fall.
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Ryuka Navali generated a random number between
1 and 10 ...
1!
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:18 am
Your testing room is:
1~Ice- Pretty simple with this one. The floor becomes solid ice. There are random chunks of ice protruding from the floor. And of course, you have little to no traction.
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Ryuka Navali Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:13 pm
May looked around shivering from the cold air the ice helped create. "I hate the cold." She wined as she took a step. "Ah!" She fell flat on her butt and automatically jumped back up. "Cold, cold, cold!" She pulled her wand out of her bag and casted a spell. "Cold winter, cold night grant me some warmth in the light." She began to glow as must warmer clothing appeared on her. "Much better." She smiled and started to walk around. She slipped many times before she got the hang of the ice.
A creature watched her from a distance with its ice cold eyes zoomed in on her. The creature resembled a wolf, but twice the size and ten times the power. Its white hair helped it stay hidden among the frozen ice land. The tail was spiked with ice needles ready to be lynched at any moment. The ice wolf dug its sharp claws into the ice before it leaped off its perch.
May stopped when she heard something hit the ice floor. She turned her head to see that an ice that had protruded from the cold ground had broken. She let out a sigh of relief and turned her head back around. "Uha..." She looked at the ice wolf that now stood a few feet from her. "Oh, no." She bit her tongue to keep herself from panicking. She blinked and then realized the ice wolf wasn't there anymore. May looked around frantically. 'Gr. Where did it go?' She thought. Then something clicked and she looked up. "What..." She started to move wobbling as she did. "Woo..." She caught her balance just as something caught her eye below her. "No way!" Some how the ice wolf got into the ice.
The ice wolf stared up at May with an intense glare as he showed his fangs. May was in shock and the ice wolf took his chance. He bounded out of the ice floor and attacked May. Making her fall down and slide across the cold floor.
May was now crying from the pain. "Ah! It hurts." She wined as she made herself stand up. "Ow, ow." She gritted her teeth and quickly pulled out her wand. "Hell fire." She pointed her wand up as fire shot out from it. The fire rose and came back down as fireballs. The ice wolf dodge one after another and this made May really mad. "You icy hell beast!" She cursed as her spell stopped. "Take this!" She pointed her wand right at the ice wolf. A ball of red light began to form at the tip of it. Once she felt it was big enough, she shot if off at the wolf. This made her slip as she shot had a kick. "Not fair." She mumbled while getting her balance back. "This is going to be harder then I thought." She smiled. 'Yes, a challenge!' She thought cheerfully as she wiped away her tears. Her personality had switched and now she was truly ready to battle.
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 11:09 pm
May stared down the ice wolf as she thought of what spells to use. She took a deep breath and casted a protection spell by only thinking about it. "Okay." She was quickly to pull out her bow and arrows. At this time she ice wolf charged her. She panicked as she got the bow ready. "Ah!" She ducked as the wolf tried to pounce on her. She calmed herself enough to shoot the arrow, but not add a spell. "Yes." She grinned when the arrow hit the ice wolf in the leg.
The ice wolf stared coldly at her as he made his tail stiff. May began to back away as the ice needles on the wolfs tail spiked up. Then in one swoosh of it's tail, the needles shoot off heading for May.
May gasped and placed her hands in front of her. A shield formed and protected her from most of the needles. Her clothes got a little tore-up from the needles, but she wasn't bleed. 'That was close.' She sighed and only saw the arrow she shot. "It's back in the ice?" She looked below her and sure enough there was the wolf. Her eye twitched as she slowly made her way over the arrow. But wright before she could get to it the wolf had it.
"Hey!" May frowned as the wolf broke the arrow in two. "Come on!" She took her wand out again. "Apollo's Ring." The wolf let out a painful howl as a ring of fire appeared its left front leg. "Burn." She said lightly. She dashed over to the wolf as it tried to get back in the ice. "No!" She grabbed the tail and held on. The wolf turned around and snapped at her. "Ah!" She let go and fell to the ground. "Ow." She rubbed her arm. May turned and looked at the wolf that was messing with her wand. "No! Leave that alone!" She hissed as she got up. She wobbled her way over there and pointed her finger at the ice wolf. "Engulf!" She said and the ring of fire completely cover the wolf.
Cries of pain could be coming from the ice wolf's mouth. It quickly phased into the ice making the fire disappear leaving water puddles behind. May frowned and picked up her wand only to drop it. 'Hot, hot.' She placed her hand on a piece of ice to cool it down. She stuck out her tongue as her hand felt better. May heard something that made her turn around. "Eh..." She jumped to the side and landed hard onto the ice, but avoided the attack of the wolf. 's**t I majorly pissed it off.' She thought getting back to her feet. 'Dang it with the way this is going. I don't think ether me or the ice wolf will fall.' She bit her lip. 'But I have all ready fallen hundreds of time and I don't think my body can take anymore physical damage.'
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:30 pm
May gritted her teeth and dismissed her warming spell. The warm clothes she had disappeared leaving her in her dress. She began to shiver from the cold. "Cold... so cold." She said under her showing breath. "Come on!" She hissed charging at the ice wolf. She had a good grip on her wand as lightening sparked from it. The ice wolf growled at the girl and then charged at her as well. Closer and closer they came to each other. The ice wolf raised it paw and cut up Mays arm just as the tip of her wand came in contact with the wolf.
May fell to the icy ground and slid until she hit one of the protruding ice sickles. She cried out as her arm bleed and her back began to hurt. "Ah! God it hurts!" Her cries turned to sobs as she forced herself up to her feet. "Ah... ah..."
The ice wolf fell to the icy ground while his limbs shook from the lightening that had been sent into his body. It had also left a burn mark at where it entered. He gain his composure and got to his feet with his tail and ears still twitching.
May looked through her tears at the ice wolf. 'I can't think.' She fell to her butt. 'Must not give up. Mustn't.' She thought shaking her head. The wolf made its way over to her having a bit of trouble walking and actually fell a few times. May wiped away her tears and watched the wolf. An idea popped into her head.
May pressed her feet against the protruding ice sickle and pressed off of it. This made her go sliding across the floor at the ice wolf. She went past him and frowned deeply. 'Oh, missed.' Her shivering got worse as her fingers felt a little numb. Once she stopped sliding, she got to her feet. Clapping her hands together, a summoning circle appeared below her glowing bright red. "I summon the avenger of evil deeds... Alastor!" She slammed her hand on the cold ice.
The ground began to shake making it hard for both May and the ice wolf to stay standing. Some of the protruding ice began to break around them as Alastor began to appear. Ice started to melt that was around Alastor, creating a curator once the summoning was over. May smile and spoke in a strong tone. "Alastor! Attack the Ice Wolf!" She pointed at the ice wolf as she sat down. She didn't stay seated for long. "Cold!" May wined as stayed standing.
Alastor looked at May. "That child summoned me again?!" He said in a bit of shock. 'Oh well. I have to do as told.' He shrugged his shoulders. Alastor stool a good seven foot tall with a eight foot wing span. He had dark red hair that went past his shoulders, tan skin, and his eyes where a poison green and gave off the feeling of dread. With his dark wings flapping, he took to the air knowing he would have a better chance there then on the slippery, cold ground.
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:09 pm
May clinched her fists. "Come on! Get the beast!" She wined as she shook her arms. "Ow!" She stopped and looked at her arm. She let that arm relaxed and just started to use just her good one.
Alastor glare at May and then rolled his eyes. 'Stupid child!' He flew straight for the ice wolf. The grip he had on his sword tightened as he got closer. Gritting his teeth, he slammed his sword into the ground right in front of the wolf. A huge explosion took place leaving a giant hole in the icy ground.
Once the smoke cleared the ice wolf was at the bottom of the hole and Alastor was in the air. "Huff. Easy." He said as he went over to May. "Now you can send me back." He said frowning at her. "Don't ever summon me again you brat."
May began to cheer. "Go! Go!" She grinned, but that quickly went away. "Eh...!" She put up a simple protection spell to guard from any ice shards that would come her way. "Alright! That's how its done!" She smiled until she fell on the ice. "Ow." She frowned and looked up at Alastor. "Good job..." She fell silent and nodded her head. "Yes, sir." She dismissed the summoning. Getting to her feet, she saw the badly damaged ice wolf come out of the ice. "Oh, s**t." She said. "It's not over."
The wolf started to walk towards her while limping. "It looks so pitiful." May frowned out of sadness. She raised her wand and whispered. "Apollos Ring... Burn this beast to ashes." She started to cry. The ice wolf couldn't even escape into the ice like i had done many times before. May covered her ears as the cries from the ice wolf started to tare away at her. Once it was all finished, she uncover her ears and looked at the ashes. "I beat it. That was the best fight I have had so far." She smiled. May walked off the battling ground while holding onto her arm genitally.
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:23 pm
Length and Pacing: the length of your posts remained consistent, the pacing flowed properly.
General grammar rules: Your grammar was intact a good portion of the time, just be sure to spell check a couple of words every here and there
Personality: You involved your character and showed dislike for the environment, but you made it work and your character had depth.
Use of Environment: You described and utilized the environment as it wouldve affected any battler.
Details: you put effort into describing what was happening and your attacks, good job there
I'm giving you an 80, or an A-
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:03 pm
Gin's gonna move this test too.
O;
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