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Perrie Dott

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:19 am


Here are my most recent arts,, please give me some comments. And if you were to buy those, how much would you pay? Thanks anyone..


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I am managing an art shop! It is called The Mermaid's Lullaby.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:25 pm


Give me comments pls....

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:31 am


These art are amazing!
I love the coloring and all the details and work that was placed in the hair.
If I have to say anything bad...I would say...
...... -rattles brain-
Oh! The girls' eyes lack emotion. But that might just be your style.

For the last picture something looks off about the pose.
I think it might be because her torso is so straight but her legs are directly facing the left. I think her right leg should be more hidden behind her body.
Other than that I love everything else. Especially the colors.

Don't ask me about pricing I'm really bad at it. Minimum 30k each?
PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:49 am


AppleStreet
These art are amazing!
I love the coloring and all the details and work that was placed in the hair.
If I have to say anything bad...I would say...
...... -rattles brain-
Oh! The girls' eyes lack emotion. But that might just be your style.

For the last picture something looks off about the pose.
I think it might be because her torso is so straight but her legs are directly facing the left. I think her right leg should be more hidden behind her body.
Other than that I love everything else. Especially the colors.

Don't ask me about pricing I'm really bad at it. Minimum 30k each?


Oh,, thank you applestreet! I appreciate everything u said...

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:22 am


WOW! thats really good now if i could draw like that i would be one happy panda!

in some places some of the colors clash, thats really all i have to about that but its wonderful!

i would pay 50 to 80K tell me when your selling cause i would so buy!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:51 am


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:20 am


OMG is all i have to say they are goergus (yes i probally spelt that wrong..beautiful) and i think the poses, colors, and everything about them is amazing, id do almost anything to draw like that. what kinda art medium are u using (ex. color pencil, crayons, um ink pens, umm idk)

and if i had the cash 100k and in real life umm like again if i had the cash about $100-$250 each or more. amazing im a new fan of u. lol.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:22 am


and they remind me of some of the gaia clothings cool. and EI

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Perrie Dott

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:06 am


Oh thank you rouge! I really appreciate it.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:56 pm


smile smile

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:33 am


Hmmm.... Well they are all quite lovely but I do spot some flaws.

#1: This picture is beautiful, but...Her right hand, her first finger from the thumb is a tad too long being just straight. I suggest bending her finger a bit at a very acute degree so as it looks like she has 3 finger joins instead of just 2. Also the middle finger seems to be a bit cut off when she's holding the clam shell open. I suggest fattening it just a tad is all. Her face is not very symmetrical either. Her right side is a bit wider then her right side. But other then that the facial structure is spot on! Her left arm (our right) is a bit too long. her elbow should stop at her waist, not her hips. Other wise then those minor details you have a very well composed picture.

#2: I like this and can see no flaws in it. Very well done.

#3: This is a very nice picture. Her anatomy is a little off though around the bust and head area. her head doesn't line up with her spine and her right shoulder is much too high for it to be aligned with her left. Her right leg seems a bit off to me. I think it's because it's a bit bigger then the left leg. I also think it should have been lowered a bit to connect with the lower leg better. Other wise the colouring is well done, the shading is good and the detail is magnificent!

#4:Well done I love the flow of this picture. I only wish her hair had more flow. But other then that I love this.

#5:Very cute picture, the colouring is great in this. The only problem I see though is her feet. They're irregularly shaped.

#6: Yet again the only problem I can see is the droopy doll ears and the irregularly bent pinky finger on her right hand. Other wise well done.

#7: Well done. the only thing I see is that the rose stem has no shading. Other then that it's a beautiful picture.

Price wise I would pay...:

head shot: 20k
bust shot: 25k-30k
waist up: 40k-50k
knee up: 55k=60k
full body: 65k-80k

Considering this is for the final ink and colouring job.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:09 am


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:30 am


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:58 am


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:10 am


ihave nothing to say xp
it's very good
luvthe poses and coloring 4laugh
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