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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:01 am
Alright, I feel I might as well show off my stuff, since I've seen a lot of other people post their work. So here's a few of my poems. A lot of the stuff I do is kind of dark. . .
Red Tears
On a dark night When black velvet stretched across The sky, I came walking down the street. Trees stretched over my head All of them gnarled and bare, And the moon shone high above. My feet took me to a park, And I came across a man Who cried red tears. He gazed upon me with age-old eyes Set in a face Beautifully cold like glittering diamonds, And more terrifying than the fiercest demon. I looked into those eyes And knew he was the one who drew me here. I know I should have been afraid, But all I felt was pity for this being Who wasn’t really a man. And because I pitied him, I sat beside the man who cried red tears Under the black velvet sky, And asked how he had lived Since the night he lost his life. He told me in his quiet voice Of the piercing bite he was given To bring him to the other side, And of the same bite he now used to kill. He said it was all for the blood, That crimson life moving through the body. And he could not live without it Flowing down his throat In sweet, delicious swallows. And those red tears rose in his eyes As he told me of the centuries he had spent Hiding from the light. For once it came he had to hide, Only the living can come out in the day. That was when I realized Why he had come. For there was a pink rim forming to the west, The sun was rising. And the man who cried red tears would die, Just like he wanted to. So I asked my last question, Why he had brought me here And he smiled as he said to me That he had wanted to talk, Just once more. And give away all the secrets He had kept these long years. Then the sun burst over the horizon In a rainbow of violent color, And the man who cried red tears Died for the final time.
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:06 am
The Only Way
Love and joy Everything I am and not Hate and fear, All that I wish to run away from. Yet I keep coming back No matter how hard I try.
Love me hate me Do as the others do ‘Cause it’s all the same to me Everything is in the pain.
So give me the metal I’m the only one who can take it. Beat me down Then say you love me ‘Cause that’s the only way I’ll go.
It’s the only way to find some love But it’s all that I’ve come to fear. Love and joy Fear and hate Makes the world go round. So step on up and take a ride.
‘Cause it’ll be fun I can promise you that. Tie me down and tear me up, Fly me through the night And tell me it’ll all be fine. That’s the only way I’ll go.
So. . . I have NO idea where this piece came from in my head, or what its about. All I can say is that the inspiration came from Mudvayne's Determined, Pushing Through, and Happy? off the album Lost and Found.
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:08 am
Fly In Fright
One little word a small friend tells me I feel for a boy. I try to deny, But this word only pushes to reach me where I lie. In fright I fly to my nest to hide. Only to see questions rolling through my mind. I fly to be rid of them And return with answers. Mostly yes Yes to this little word I supposedly feel for a boy. Yes that terrifies me, So that I wish to fly. But there is a no. A sole no against all others. Still I fly to cry in delight to the sky No! And get back yes. All answer yes. In fright I fly to my small friend where I cry One question for her to know. With one little word in return.
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:21 am
I do indeed quite enjoy your work, you pull off a sense of gothic mystique in your poetry that is neither cliche nor boring. Thanks for posting biggrin
I feel quite privileged to have such talented prose authors (inlcuding yourself) within this guild smile .
Cheers!
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+[Unholy_Rage]+ Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:00 pm
Thank you! I post my stuff everywhere it seems, my myspace, deviantart, gaia journal, and now here. But I don't always get a response from it. . . confused Which confuses me when i see other's post their work, with tons of responses.
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 6:59 pm
OH HOLY s**t!
Your writing style is very unique in many ways, the flow, the words, the rhyme scheme, It's amazing! It paints a vivid picture in my mind as I read the words you wrote its amazing! I really am amazed right now, I'm also happy to find so many people here with amazing artistic abilities. I love reading other peoples poems, It makes me feel as if I'm getting a little peak into their soul Heehee ^ ^
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:51 pm
The Fire
This soul is too far gone Dragged under by the drugs and alcohol. Heart shriveled and mind twisted, Nothing is whole anymore.
The others gave up long ago Eyes turning away from this thing That once was human, Before he fell from the world.
So they shut him away In the room so dark. Left with only pounding, The music filled with screeches and pain.
He turns it up And takes another hit. Dives into his bottle for another swim, But no one comes to drag him out.
The music reaches its screaming climax As his heart bumps for the final time. The drugs shot him too high, as the drink dragged him under. Crash, he fell into the fire.
. . . The inspiration for this poem was an odd mix of Jones Soda, NOZ, and jogging to Stone Sour for 20 minutes. Oh, and the most important part, Zee Crazy Hobo's SYOTOS. . . I wonder how she's gonna feel about that! *laughs*
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:22 pm
((Untitled))
Schizophrenia growing Like a growth within the mind. Make the sane stay away, The disease could be contagious.
The sickly sweet voices Tell me to drink it all away. Then the pain will disappear As I find solace with a delicious bottle.
But I know that twist will kill this mind, And so I ignore every voice, Turning up the metal that will pound through my mind In beats and screeches that drown out the world.
Its not my only worry though, as the room grows dark with night I made the prison to save the others, Only to have the monsters come instead. Their eyes are glowing and their teeth are dripping.
My heart is pounding with fear As adrenaline becomes the drug of choice. It makes the blood pump to the beat of drums, As I run from the monsters Who would devour every piece of me If they could.
I don't know where to run, And no one can save me from them all. But I feel the music pounding And this poor soul rises with the solo.
Then its one last gasp as the monsters get their meal, The voices are saying "I told you so" As the thought runs through my mind, For once the sane did what they were told, Leaving the schizophrenic alone.
Yeah. . .Same inspiration. I have to remember to get these all in my poetry journal.
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:54 pm
Um. HI?? No more people. . .Sad. crying
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:59 pm
...Dark blood spilled, as your sins fill... My God!
I've never seen such a talented Poet before! Your writing style is so interesting, and when you write, it's so descriptive and it has a very dark edge to it, along with a taste of insanity.
I LOVE IT!
...The hatred in my heart, as your family I killed...
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:09 am
XD Thanks!!
I think its partly from where my inspiration comes from. For the past two poems it was a lot of things that are bad for my body, culminating in 20 minutes on a treadmill and some Stone Sour. . . I think anyone's writing would be a little insane after that!
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