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+[Unholy_Rage]+
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:36 pm


Eh, 'bout time I show y'all my attempted artistic side. So here is something I've been gradually working on for a few weeks now, it's by no means finished and honestly I don't know when it'll be complete. It's the product of my insomnia and inexplicable rejection of a proper sleeping pattern. Enjoy.

Namenloss (Nonsense from an Insomniac)


I saw the figure of a man, standing in the shadow of a hill
Behind the bladed grass that swayed along with the chill
He walked toward me
And told me what I was doing could kill
He said it was time
That I fell from that monumental thrill
Before I make my weak little self ill.

So he picked me up by the scruff
Declared my lifestyle a bit too rough
Before slapping a rusty studded manacle around my cuff
Apparently they'd had enough.

So he led me toward this blazing fire
Where these poor souls sat 'round
Singin' about their ire
Til one broke an instrumental string
So the fat one could no longer sing
About some foolish angel with broken wings.

Then the horned one rose, voice tentative and hoarse
'Now we're all here but not by choice!
We never got a chance to say
Why the hell we're all this way
Nor defend ourselves against the accusation
That we abandoned our goddamned stations
And rejected your indoctrinations
That led the gates to break per se
And those winged fiends loose to fly away'

Inquiring eyes turned to me like embers glowing
To ask me about where was I going
I replied, the man who'd chained me never bothered showing
So I had no real way of knowing
That my vital signs were surely slowing

Entrapped by weight of their cumbersome stares
I was struck on the head caught unawares
I swirled and I spiralled into the Dark Pit of Nowhere.

I woke to the sight of an imp at my feet
He took me by the ear and said 'glad we could meet!'
Upon his little black face were hollows for eyes and two rows of teeth
He parted his lips with a sigh of relief
Then sent me on my way and yelled 'you, take your seat!'

I sat in the aging rickety chair
Taking in a gulp of damp air
Ran a shaky hand through my hair
Still wondering what I was doing here...



(c) Unholy_Rage 2009


 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:15 pm


(firstly, i LOVE your choice in music in your signature kittie is awesome)

and secondly.

HOLY ********! Your an amazing writer! Do you make money off of your poetry? you should! The way you make all the words flow together is beautiful!

--KoRn-Iz-Jashin--


Eklypse_Peregrin

PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:53 pm


Wow, I love it!! This piece flows like a dark version of the Canterbury Tales. . . I just hope you don't end up like Geoffrey Chaucer (the guy who wrote the poem) because he died before he could finish it. . . crying
PostPosted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:23 am


--KoRn-Iz-Jashin--
(firstly, i LOVE your choice in music in your signature kittie is awesome)

and secondly.

HOLY ********! Your an amazing writer! Do you make money off of your poetry? you should! The way you make all the words flow together is beautiful!


Thankyou so much biggrin ! I really appreciate your comment.

And LOL yeah if only I had enough material to make money of my rambles, that'd be awesome ^_^

PS: Hell yeah! Kittie are a great band!

+[Unholy_Rage]+
Vice Captain


+[Unholy_Rage]+
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:25 am


Eklypse_Peregrin
Wow, I love it!! This piece flows like a dark version of the Canterbury Tales. . . I just hope you don't end up like Geoffrey Chaucer (the guy who wrote the poem) because he died before he could finish it. . . crying


Thankyou very much as well ^_^. Hehe, oddly enough I never drew a parallel to Canterbury Tales, but thankyou for that comparison. To be compared to the likes of Chaucer is a huge honour and compliment biggrin . LOL fingers-crossed I don't cark it before my time like Chaucer did... haha.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:05 pm


Oh yeah, I agree with you on the dying before my time thing, that would suck. I always feel so sorry for the people who die in the middle of their project, because they never get to finish what they started. . . If that happened to me, I'd end up as a ghost finishing my project!!

The first time I head Kittie, I thought my friend was nuts for listening to them - some of their music is just odd! Since then though, she has slowly been corrupting me. I'm gonna need some Kittie for myself! xd 3nodding

Eklypse_Peregrin

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