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chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 7:38 pm


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Stefana - - - - - - - - - - saish - - - - - - - - - - soon to come new character :3

It took about two weeks for Stefana to recover fully from the challenge. She did not realize how weak you get if are immobile a few days. She was normally very athletic and it annoyed her that she wasn’t able to get up and move around and that she was so weak. What Saish hadn’t told her was that she was actually asleep for about a month after coming out of the challenge. Saish for some reason didn’t have the heart to tell her that much time had passed. They spent the next few months studying and practicing magic.

A surprising result however, to them both, was after Stef had emerged from her slumber her eyes had turned to purple, the same color as the warrior magi was reputed to have centuries ago.

“Saish, why is it that you have stopped my lesions?” Stefana asked after she had took a book away from her for a full week.

“Because contrary to what is taught over on the main isle you don’t learn from a book, knowledge comes from experience. If all you do is read you will never be strong enough to actually use your skills if needed. You must stay active in both mind and body especially if you are to build up your muscles again. Especially your arms as they were completely stationary during the challenge.” Saish motioned for Stefana to follow her outside the house.

“I understand that, I’m just glad that I’m not as weak as I was when I first woke up” Stef replied “and I’ve gotten stronger in my arms than I was when I first came to live with you.

“Yes you found that out the hard way, as I said before, normally apprentices are killed in the process of searching for their true name, I still can’t believe that your father was foolish enough to not warn you of that.” Stef remained silent; she had a pretty good idea why he hadn’t. He was most likely afraid for her and would not tell her outright in fear of jinxing or frightening her. Stef started to notice that they were not walking along the normal paths that they would take; they were instead walking for quite awhile clearly going somewhere.

“Saish?” Stef asked, “Where exactly are we going? We’ve walked quite a ways…”

“I was hoping that you would notice,” Saish smiled “we are going on a bit of a survival training. You’ve lived here all your life so I don’t have to delay it like I would with my previous students. One of the things that the main isle lacks is a connection to the world, they enclose themselves in stone yet they do not notice that it is of the earth nor appreciate the beauty and the sacrifice the woods and animals would have made for the things around them.”

Stef was used to Saish ranting about the main isle, it made her wonder if the place was truly as bad as she made it seem to be. She always thought back on what the note had said, ‘go to the capital of Sartorn and present yourself to the grand magus’ Saish already admitted once that she would have to go there eventually, to make friends and connections at the very least and to round out her education, And especially for Stef to see the world outside the forest. News was very rare, there would hardly be anyone who would venture to the center of the woods anymore not even pilgrims dared to enter the forest unless they were zealots and even then most would not have news of the outside, especially since most would be dead before getting to the center.

Lost in her own thoughts Stefana barely avoided running into Saish when she stopped. They were standing on the edge of a cliff overlooking the endless view of the forest. Stefana hastily backed away. She never liked heights unless she was holding on to something solid. Trees were the only high things she ever went on and she knew that they would not topple or break easily like a rope or fence could.
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 4:55 am


Nice. *looks at the new comer* Can't wait! >.<

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chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 6:24 am


sadly I'm not entirely sure how exactly they are going to meet just yet... sweatdrop the time for her to come in isn't too far off but I'm just not entirely sure how to go about it...
PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:07 am


I know how that feels.

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chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:31 am


oh!!! i almost forgot i got some info about the lays that i never put in. (as a foot note)

Lay of fire the island that is the least populated of the fie lands. These people are split into two groups. Those that live on the shore and are fairly safe from the lava flows. And those that are nomadic and travel the interior of the land, the only peoples that do not fear the dragons of that land. Those that live on the shore build close to the water to keep as close to safety as possible while the nomads have a few ancestral homes that they return to once a year mainly to trade and bury any of their dead.

A densely forested land with few passible roads between villages. Villages are close knit community's mostly cut off from the outside world. Save from walking only routs in and out is through magic and few other means

a series of small islands only a few are big enough to actually build anything upon. Instead these people create their homes upon barges and anchor themselves to the land or to neighbors. The seas in this area are calm and the people rarely see any storms. But when there is they detach from the land and ride the storm out in their homes.

Lay of air are towering mountain peaks in the middle of the oacian almost constantly pounded by the oceans bellow. The only refuge is the top of the peaks above the clouds there the people make their homes within the peaks themselves.

Center of the middle isle, Power of those of soul and spirit the unofficial either lay it’s the only land that is truly habitual by humans and is densely populated land with many citys. Satorn being the biggest. It is called the land of either because of the phenomenon of the starts shining brightly in the night sky as well as the aura bursts from the star stone that resides in the capital

whacha think?
PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:43 am


Very nice. 3nodding

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chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 6:27 pm


“We make camp her for tonight” Stef was about to protest but thought better not to test Saish when she was testing her. “Gather wood for the fire and then we shall talk, only gather enough for a small fire” Stef nodded and went out into the woods, looking for dead wood and returned with the correct amount. She was about to start the fire with flint when Saish stopped her

“Remember we are testing, therefore we are also practicing.” Saish sat back again with amazement as Stefana struggled to bring forth a flame and maintain it on the fire. Saish had to correct her every once in awhile when her flames started to turn violet. “When you are around others they will notice the color and know that you are unique you don’t want that, only drakborns have the ability to control all four elements, even then they are only able to do so to a point.”

“Yeah I know, its hard though, sometimes I wish that things would just turn green like when I first did magic” Stef laughed

“Then if they saw that you were having a green flame they would lock you up just as much as if you had a blue flame, don’t show any abnormalities. I’m glad that you are able to keep the spell for green over your eyes by yourself, even when asleep. If you did not have that ability then there would be no way I would send you to sartorn.” Saish laid in some rock potatoes and other vegetables she apparently got while Stefana was out looking for wood.

“What’s it like learning over there? You’ve always described what it looks like and what’s wrong with the school, but you never said what it was like to learn over there” Stef asked propping herself up and giving Saish a puppy look. Saish sighed with a slight smile.

“I had no choice in disguising what I was, darkborns are very rare as there aren’t many of the dark that would just rape a women and leave her alive. And then even rarer is those women that would choose to keep the child after birth. My mother was blind, and poor, and she did not know that the beast that raped her was an actual beast of the night. By the time I was born and she found out what I was a product of she had grown attached and would not give me up even after learning the truth. She was exiled from her village. After I grew I learned that I was to keep covered my eyes and body. I often went with my mother as a blind girl as well. It was my disguise; I was able to see the world without my eyes something that I’ve found no other have been able to do. A few years after my conflict of souls, and my mother’s death, the grand magus approached me and took me in under his wing. I was protected by him, basically adopted by him.”

Saish poked the coals, obviously struggling with memories. Stefana was worried for a bit that she wouldn’t continue. This was the first time that Saish talked to her so openly. Usually she would only get snippets of information. Saish fished out a few of the vegetables and handed one to Stefana.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:06 pm


“It was really hard at first, I had to fight the teachers mentally constantly, they would always challenge what I’ve learned and find any excuse or fault to fail me and get me kicked out of the classes. To become a drudge for the rest of my life. A few of the teachers didn’t even want to give me that fate, my alcamy teacher I swore he would give me nixes that I would have to correct, he wanted me to blow myself up or transform me into an insect so that he could kill me.” Saish laughed “but I loved to read, I loved to study I was lucky that the archivist teacher and librarian loved me and my enthusiasm. I was the latest darkborn to come into the school and survive my conflict intact and I was the one who basically wrote the old books on the darkborn.”

“Did you make any friends there, Other than the teachers?” Stef asked hoping to get Saish to give her more, she was drawn into her past, mainly because she knew that she might live the same type life if her secret was ever found out.

“Eventually yes I gained… a few… it took quite awhile for both me and everyone else to learn to trust. They were afraid of me, I was of the dark and of course they would fear me. Most when I joined had wanted me to be shipped to the otherside , once I almost was by force. But my friends and the grand magus had saved me. But those that tried to just ship me away now seek after my life with their families support as well. They were kicked out of the school, so close to graduation they did not become drudges but they neither were recognized as mage’s nor earn their color. And one of them was the grandson of the lav magi and was planning on inheriting his grandfather’s post. He was quite put off that their plan had failed” Saish sighed. And poked the coals once more. And then decided to bank the coals signaling to Stef that she was done talking for the night. Disappointed Stefana cleared a spot near the fire and was startled when Saish continued to speak.

“Whatever you do Stefana, do not reveal your name ever, I made that mistake, and now I rely on my other half for my magic. We’ve always had a very unstable balance; you do not have another half of your soul to rely on. Do not trust people so lightly, even your friends are suspect in that place. Even with the best intentions can prove disastrous” She then fell silent for the last time and slept.

Stefana pondered for a bit and finally understood just why Saish refused to hear her name. Staring out across the woods beyond she wondered just what type of place Satorn was as she drifted to sleep

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Those that do not graduate or are found to not be able to earn or control their magic are made into a drudge to keep them under watch and to keep the secrets of magic safe

Otherside is the western side of the planet, where creatures of the dark are held at bay by the elemental points made by the elemental isle’s a land that is the home of demons. Not much is known about this land. But it is sealed by four small islands atuned to each 4 elements and lands.



so what do you think? took me a long time to push this little bit out.

chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:04 am


I like it. You learn more and more about things. >.<
PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:19 am


yes the first paragraph was fun to write whee and it took me awhile to figure out why exactly saish was being hunted sweatdrop i didn't really know why when i started writing sweatdrop

chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:05 am


That happens to me...like that man with white hair was just thrown into the clan story. ^^; Slowly, things start to work out. mrgreen I love it. >.<
PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:25 pm


i have a block gonk i can't think of anything!

chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:08 am


I have a name! Xylia -pronounced ZYE-lee-ah- in greek it means woodland or wood-dweller... I love that name...kinda wish that my ma named me it. ^^; I don't know. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:42 pm


Raxle
I have a name! Xylia -pronounced ZYE-lee-ah- in greek it means woodland or wood-dweller... I love that name...kinda wish that my ma named me it. ^^; I don't know. sweatdrop
OH i like that! maybe thats stef's cover name User Image

chrissy_of_hailfire
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:14 am


It's a nice name. >.< um...I try to come up with names, but it sometimes never works..so, I go to thinkbabynames.com -i think that is it o_o- lol! Feel free to use it. I'm not even sure with the stories that I write. ^^;

Glade you like it. >.<
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