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 Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 3:37 pm
Hey all!
I figure it's about time I made a thread in regards to my story.
I mean, after all this time of talking about it, and alluding to it, it's only fair someone gets to read it to understand what goes on!
So! it's right here, on fanfiction.net:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4886713/1/The_TSD_Kids_The_Nine_Stones
I'd love to hear of any feedback from you guys about it!
What your favorite part is, who your favorite character is... stuff like that!
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:00 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:39 pm
Thanks for the link! I'll try to start reading it later tonight.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 4:50 pm
tl;dr Uhhhh.... That was awesome! Good work!  I'll read it later, I promise. xd
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 6:07 pm
It moves a little fast, the battles are kinda quick and one sided for a kid in his first battles, and it is a little sunshiny, but otherwise I enjoyed it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:01 pm
Thanks!
I'll be sure to put up more of them.
Those early episodes are kinda tame at first glance, but the ones to follow will pick up.
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:30 pm
Pretty good, T.
Can't wait for more. =D
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:10 am
Okay!
episodes 14-17 are up now!
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:53 am
Great jorb T! Although it's rather... You know... Generic... You need something original about it I think.
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 9:03 am
After some re-working, I put up an updated version of the pilot episode.
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Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:35 pm
I'm still tooling around with the first episode
Yes, butchering it and sewing all the parts back into place, with fleshed out parts.
Bear with me... the operation is intense.
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Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 8:04 pm
I'm sorry, I can't get past it T. Are you adamant about calling them the "TSD Kids"?
You see....I'm Dyslexic... so every time, I always read that as, "STD Kids" redface
I just get the wrong image from it.. burning_eyes
(Also, I haven't had the chance to read it yet. Sorry! sweatdrop )
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:54 am
Hobo Scruffy I'm sorry, I can't get past it T. Are you adamant about calling them the "TSD Kids"?
You see....I'm Dyslexic... so every time, I always read that as, "STD Kids" redface
I just get the wrong image from it.. burning_eyes
(Also, I haven't had the chance to read it yet. Sorry! sweatdrop )
While I cannot avoid that, I want to keep it as TSD, for it's the abbreviation of Toshinden, part of the name of the game several of the chars are derived from.
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:45 pm
TtheHero Hobo Scruffy I'm sorry, I can't get past it T. Are you adamant about calling them the "TSD Kids"?
You see....I'm Dyslexic... so every time, I always read that as, "STD Kids" redface
I just get the wrong image from it.. burning_eyes
(Also, I haven't had the chance to read it yet. Sorry! sweatdrop )
While I cannot avoid that, I want to keep it as TSD, for it's the abbreviation of Toshinden, part of the name of the game several of the chars are derived from.
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 5:51 am
Hobo Scruffy TtheHero Hobo Scruffy I'm sorry, I can't get past it T. Are you adamant about calling them the "TSD Kids"?
You see....I'm Dyslexic... so every time, I always read that as, "STD Kids" redface
I just get the wrong image from it.. burning_eyes
(Also, I haven't had the chance to read it yet. Sorry! sweatdrop )
While I cannot avoid that, I want to keep it as TSD, for it's the abbreviation of Toshinden, part of the name of the game several of the chars are derived from.
I never meant that in the sense of disablilties. I merely meant the twisting of the title.
TSD, STD, get it? Like if it were to be spoofed on Mad TV or some other junk.
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