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 Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:55 pm
Raiton: Shirorai (Lightning release: white lightning)
Jutsu description: The user channels chakra, usually in the exterior limbs, the channeled chakra begins to rotate like a coil which magnetizes the air around the limb. The chakra then draws in the positive electron particles to the exterior of the limb, the the negative electron particles are then discarded as a small bolt of electricity towards a near by target, if no target is in proximity the discarded negative electron then returns to the positive charge. With the built up electricity in desired limb the user then attempts to make physical contact with a target. The jutsu has two effects, and receives its name from the arc of negative electrons appears as a white bolt of electricity.
Rank: C
Cp: 30
Damage: 1-15 + chk mod for small lightning arc, and + 1-15 lightning damage added to first physical combat hit.
Requirements: Chakra control 70+, Lightning affinity, 25+ chk
Training: 5 days
Special: The first stage of this jutsu acts like a basic ninjutsu, if the first stage misses the damage full is automatically returned to the user, if it hits the the second part adds lightning damge to the first physical hit of the user, if the user does not hit a target in the turn following the first stage the damage is returned to the user.
Owned by: Isagawa Raisuke
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:39 am
So if you miss, you take the damage when it comes back to you? Hmmm actually this jutsu isn’t that bad. Damage is incredibly low though. This is more like a spark or something rather than an ark of electricity. But for that much CP, its about right… hmmm
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:27 am
....dam ...dont got much to say against this one.
the damage is preety freaking low....has that diablo esque thing to is the low min and high max for lightning damage XD...back to point has low damage....but its two jutsu...for somewhat high cp...your missin one thing....you dont have any traning days for it!
I suggest like....hmm 5 training days, ...is rai gonna learn this?....as well as why do i have the idea that this is the first one of other techniques to use this?
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:12 pm
Updated. And yes, the damage is returned to you if you miss.
Yes Rai is going to learn it. Because it won't exist until he creates it.
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Distinct Conversationalist
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:26 pm
Nothing to say to correct it, I would just like to say ask something... where you thinking about Byakurai (White Lightning) when you made this? xD
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:17 pm
Whats Byakurai? Who used that jutsu?
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Distinct Conversationalist
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 3:46 pm
It's a basic Hadou in the Bleach Manga/Anime series used first by Kuchiki Byakuya. Idk if anyone has used it other then him though. xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:12 pm
One a**l-retentive OCD comment.... it's an 'arc' of electricity.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:14 pm
Gotcha.
Emily is being a grammar nazi? >.>
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:16 pm
I have to.... crying I'm sorry, but I almost cry every time I see a mistake like that.... And I find them in a lot of places, but I don't fix them 'cause it'd be rude... And now I'm on super-pills, and I'm tired, and I'm still in pain, and I'm all but high... And I'm sorry crying
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 12:07 am
There hasn't been any real criticism on this.. so is it passed?
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:07 pm
i thought of a second ..possibly third stage for it!!! <_< >_>
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:18 pm
Let me worry about getting this passed first. >.>
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:19 pm
you could get to past at same time? <_< >_> yes yes one at a time
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:28 pm
Rai's gonna teach Shuiro, right? ^_~
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