Hey.... I thought i needed the publics help. Do you like my story so far?
(only 1 out of the MANY stories iv wrote.) Theif Masters
CHAPER 1
It was dark outside as a boy made his way down the dark streets of Sudlan.He looked about 13 or 14. His feet made no noise as they made there way down the cobble stone street.There robes, much as I can say, were darker than night its self. Moving toward the old house where no one lived.They opened the door quietly and slipped inside. They were greeted by a little boy no older than 5, and another girl about 10.There names were Benny and Moon."Where have you been Tun?" Benny asked as the two boys took off there hoods to revale a handsome face and sleek black hair.They looked like twins the 2 boys.The boy "Tun" smiled and opened a sack bag to show Rich Jewls He,Tun, age 13, had picked the Jewlery store lock and stole them, smiled.
CHAPTER 2
"I went and got them."Tun said."Not hard to pick the lock.Say Ben,How would you next time like to go with me when i rob the side store?"
Benny was awsering Yes oh yes please,please! but in the middle the girl stopped and said with fright,"No.He will not be going.He's only 5! Risking his life and ours!"
Ok so its mainly about 3 boys and a girl who live on picking locks and swiping things from pockets in the paris city of folks.Back farther in time thought. What do you think so far?Im working on the rest right now and will post and update when i get it done on every chapter.Like it?
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