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 Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:22 pm
I didn't write this, i just thought this was an amazing poem and wanted to put it on here.
With the razor kissed wrists
this is my bright red scream
as I press down harder blood begins to surface
I convince myself "you don't feel pain, forget it, it's worth it"
You convince yourself that there is no pain
I try to forget
it's just my sick little game
There's white ones, red ones, fresh ones too
I'm ashamed of what I do
As time goes by they get harder to hide
more and more skin with scars on the outside
Hide them with long sleeved shirts, it covers them up but doesn't take away the hurt
It hurts the same when nobody knows; it's just the way it goes
Cut to feel alive, it's something I know is real
It's something I wish I could hide, something I didn't have to feel
When things get too bad it's first instinct to just cut away
Cut away, make some new scars to just get through the day
This time it got out of hand, cut too deep and can hardly stand
Losing way too much blood and I begin to fall
This will be my little secret, I won't say anything at all
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 7:05 pm
aww thats amazaing in that sad kinda way
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:37 pm
i know. I teared up a little while reading the end.
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:55 pm
This is an amazing poem I almost cried when I finished reading it....very beautiful indeed.
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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:01 pm
it's an amazing poem but
really sad.
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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:26 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:37 pm
wow, thats a good poem.. It speaks to me, cause I did the same thing once
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:04 am
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:00 pm
I thought it was very well done. The ending is quite sad, indeed, yet I have written some of those. Too many, to be exact. Very beautiful poem....Loved it, and true is so many ways.
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:59 pm
It's alright I suppose... I don't feel it had the right flow with the words though... That's probably just me being a writer sweatdrop
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