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 Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:26 am
(Please bare with me, this story is still in progress..thank you.
Also to note :: Some language may not be suitable for some users, so if you have a hard time liking some words, then this story may not be for you.
The Characters within this story and title are mine, so please do not use them unless you ask. Thank you.) Darkness slowly swept over the land of Heleke, five mutli colored orbs floated about aimlessly within the forest. Slowly, one by one, each orb slowly took shape. Within a clearing, a head full of orange red hair looked about, signaling others to follow. One by one, each followed the first into the clearing, all making sure that nothing had followed. It was a silent night, where nothing made a noise, neither crickets nor animals were out. Stars slowly made a silent prayer, as all five beings stood in a circle. "This has to stop," stated a femine voice. "The people can not handle this any longer." "Ashlin, you know well as I that they can handle themselves." Stated a man with jade green hair, his emerald eyes re focused on an insect that was slowly crawling over a fallen leaf. The female looked up, as her aqua colored hair fell over her misty blue eyes. "After all, they did survive the last attack." "They never even knew about the last attack Marko! They never even knew that it was even happening," Ashlin cried out, it was always the same. Marko would bring up how the humans could survive without their help, and she would fight against him. No matter what, they would do, it would never really help the humans by fighting each other. "Knock it off you two!" Ordered a man with jet black hair that had a purple shine to it. His onyx eyes looked as if they were tired. A heavy sigh escaped his lips as his head was leaned backwards. his forehead was semi resting on a tree trunk. "It never fails, you two always go at it. Down each other throats and one of us would have to break you two apart." "Jade, let the two love birds be," laughed a man who looked identical with Jade. But instead of the black hair, his was an opal color. A small grin slowly crept its way onto his semi tanned skin, as both Marko and Ashlin crossed arms and turned their heads a different direction from one and another. A man with deep ameythest hair and molten gold colored eyes could not help but to laugh along side with the other male, to this, Jade did not like. No matter what, everyone just seemed to laugh while man kind itself was on the brink of death. Jade just glared at the two as the other two who bickered seemed to stop.
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 7:28 pm
*snaps fingers*
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:15 pm
milliwilli *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* *snaps fingers* are you trying to tell her to hurry? lol i kinda want to see what the next part is as well.
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:24 am
eek I'm sorry!!! Between work and school, its a little hard for me to write more. *bows head* I'm sorry. Here is a bit more.
It was as if the one who glarred made everyone stop, leaving nothing but silience in its wake. "Come on Kar, I was only joking." Jade said in a quiet tone. Kar said not a word as he continued to look at the four. If one wanted something done, then they usually look towards Kar. The man always seemed to get things done, then again, noone wanted to mess with the man.
"Ashlin is right, we need to do something and we need to do it now." For one who gave off a negative vibe, he had a voice of an angel. "Shin," the on who looked identical to Jade looked right at Kar. Shin gave an unknowingly look as he nodded his head. Shin was the one who always seemed to know what Kar was thinking, though the man rarely talked, his actions always seemed to speak more than the words that flew out of his own mouth. Kar nodded his head as well, it was as if the two were the twins and not Shin and Jade themself. "Find six who deem worthy enough to weild the ancient power, and bring them to this spot."
Nodding his head once more, Shin went off into a blinding light green light. Kar's words were always the final say, but Marko never even liked most of his ideas, causing the man to go off the deep end, "Kar, you can not be serious," Marko started, he moved to stand infront of the other. "Finding six humans to weild the ancient power, its dangerous for them!"
"Shin is the only one to see if one could or could not be corrupted by the power," the man sighed as Marko continued to go on. "We all know that."
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:38 am
o3o looking good!
:3 i should put my story up
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:45 am
Takes me a while. My friend wants me to write her a story as well. Who knows, I might make one for the clan... All characters within this story is mine... if I do make a clan, all memebers have a right to their own character. I will in no way mess with them. mIt is rude. ))
"But they are humans! Humans alone can not control that sort of power, never have and they never will," Ashlin sighed lightly, Marko was always trying to keep the humans from having power. But he was always over ruled by the others.
"Then it will be a test," stated Ashlin as she stepped forward, Kar, turned from the two and looked at the entrance of the woods. Marko could not help but to glare at the only female within the group, "it is true Marko, they need new protectors and you know it as well as I."
"No," he grounded out, as both arms were crossed over his chest. "You remember last time, those who had the ancient power abused it and nearly killed the entire human race." Ashlin huffed lightly as she too crossed her arms, it never failed between the two to fight, and for that; nothing ever really gotten done.
"And because our stupidity, one human has the last power that we have forgotten, I all ready know this," Ashlin's arms fell down to her side, as Jade slowly turned Ashlin away from Marko, giving the man a disaproved look.
"We have to try one more time Marko," Kar stated as he faced the three. "This is the last time that we will ever do this, and pray to the higher heaven that this will be the final battle." Marko sighed heavily as he looked down at the forest floor. "Let us also pray that Shin will find the right ones."
Several months later, things have never really changed. The darkness continued to seep into the hearts of man kind, causing fights to break out between different kingdoms. Shin kept his head down, causing his opal hair to cover his onyx eyes. It was something that no human should know about when it came to both Shin and the other unearthly beings, and he hoped that he could keep it that way until he can find the right humans to weild the power that he is now holding. But to keep hidden from the one who wants nothing but destruction among man kind itself, licking his semi parched lips, Shin continued his search.
Elsewhere, a figure cloaked in black sitting on a throne held a crystal ball within his hands could not help but to smile as its crimson red eyes were glued onto the orb. Within the orb showed Shin who kept his head down within a crowd. "So," the voice started, the sound was masculine and masked with hatred; "the elders think that they can hide the rest of the anicent power from me. I beg to differ... Kiliar, Gargin!"
"Yes master?" Coursed the two as they bowed down infront of the cloaked figure. The man could not help but to smile once more as he gave out his orders to his two best men, both laughed as bowed once more then disappeared.
'Ah yes soon, soon all of the ancient power will be mine,' thought that cloaked figure as he slowly stood up. "And once I have this power, this entire world will be mine, then nothing can stop me!"
Shin sighed lightly as villagers passed him by, everyone that he came acrossed never seemed to care, or that hatred had seeped so deep into their hearts that if they were indeed to recieve the ancient power; they would indeed cause trouble. Slowly, the man had pulled back his opal hair into a low tail. Maybe they could not be found within the northern kingdom, that they could probably be found within one of the other kingdoms or a small village of some sort. Shaking his head, he continued forward, using his own energy to check out the villagers.
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:50 pm
woot!!! another part! its getting really good! i'm going to defiantly put up mine!
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:04 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:49 pm
when i snap fingers that means like bravo but in like poetic way
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:14 pm
It was something that he hated, but yet he had to do, if not, the entire world would be completly covered in darkness; with another sigh, he continued to search, only to stop when he felt something sending him chills that went down his spine. Onyx eyes scanned the area, no human being could have such power that made the man stay alert. With magic and certain powers, yes, but this, this was something much different. It felt almost as if it was the same type of power that they have forgotten to remove from the man that had it from before. Now alert, Shin quickly made his way towards the excit the village, if he was indeed correct; then that man would be searching for the power that he was sent by Kar to give out. All ready it has been months, and the man some how found him; and he had yet to find the humans he was sent out for. Quickly into the woods, Shin made his way towards the river. Rusling could be heard from both sides as darkness slowly swallowed the light that surrounded Shin. Taking in deep gulps of air, the man continued to run, his opal hair slipped out of its bindings as he dodged tree branches and bushes alike. This could not be happening, he was to be helpinig the humans, not get captured. Eyes slanted, he jumped over a fallen tree, laughter could be heard as the darkness continued to follow Shin. If he faild this, then Kar would not be able to help anyone, let alone free their fathers from the one who holds onto this power. It was unbelievable to know that darkness could hold so much power, so much that he was able to capture the higher elders by tricking them into the human world just to capture them. Shin needed to find humans and fast! No matter who or what they were, just as long as he was no longer holding onto the ancient power.
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Jade snapped his head up rather quickly, causing his black hair to hit Marko in the face. His onyx eyes were full of pain as he scanned the room. Something was wrong, something was wrong with Shin. Standing up, Jade
continued to look about, Marko, on the other hand could not help but to watch Jade.
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 9:54 am
biggrin its getting really interesting!
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:09 am
I try. ..when I am not swamped (sp?) with things. ^^'
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 10:03 am
hey just to let you know, me and kajaro have implamented a rule that if a story is being build up in parts to put in the title what part (story post) is up. like how my thread has two so far, and so you would have part 4.
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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 2:45 pm
Hmm, I will have to shorten the post. But I can do it. ..may take me a while, but it will get done.
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:29 pm
With a heavy sigh, Marko watched as Jade quickly walked out of the room, there was a time when he could remember where Shin had done the same thing; but that was when Jade was in danger. ... Remembering what the twin did back then, made Marko tense, it was something that everyone would fear. They would everyone feard for the worst, not every elder was amune to human tactics. Facing each other would cause some serious damage to them all. Even if it were the twins to face them or each other was never a good thing to think about.
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Laughter could be heard in a near by village, little kids ran about as adults were walking to and fro with baskets, some seem to stop and talk amongest each other. Trying ones best, a young adult was trying to dodge little kids who were running around her. A small smile appeared on her face as she watched the kids while at the same time, keeping hold of her own basket. It was an everyday thing for the young adult who helped out with the village, she lost her family at a young age and was taken in by the elder of the village, there, she had learned more about herbs and much much more than she had when she was ten. Now elven years later, the young adult remembers little about her family, but at the same time has gained a new one. Long pink hair was tied in a low tail, as violet eyes looked straight ahead. "Lady Shanti are you able to go with us to the river?" Asked a young girl with smile.
The young woman could not help but to smile lightly at the children, as she slowly patted the young ones head. Ever since she lost her family, Shanti refused to talk, causing others to think that she had lost her voice at a young age. Some even gave her self pity, something that she hated.
Battered and bruised, Shin slowly made his way towards the village. He had hoped that his brother would have made it in time, but sadly he did not. Afraid of death, Shin looked up at the village which seemed happy at the moment. With his left hand over his busted right arm, the young looking adult tumbled to and fro; hoping that he could make it to the village before darkness consumed his vision.
Jade was becoming frantic, his brother was, no, is close near to death; and here he is sitting, doing nothing but waiting for Kar to allow him to search. His brother, his only living kin was dying, and Kar would not allow him to go and help. Not only was worry within his blood stream, but so was anger. Anger towards Kar because he allowed Shin to go by himself, and he was not allowed to leave the safe-hold. Could his day become get any worse?
Shanti blinked lightly, as she heard the villagers become worried. They normally would never run about, but tonight, tonight they were acting as if something bad had happened. "Lady Shanti, Lady Shant," several kids chanted, as they dragged the young adult towards the entrance of the village. A soft gasp escaped her lips as she spotted Shin's motionless body at the entrance. How he ever found the village was beyond her, the elders always stated that no one would be stupid enough to even walk within the forest by themselves. "What is wrong with him Lady Shanti?" The little child's voice had reved her out of her thoughts, causing her to shake her head. As if an unkown force caused the young woman to run towards the man, her pink hair slowly slipped loose as she crossed the distants.
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