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Don't Tell Me I'm Not, Cause I Am

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midsummerpuck

PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:17 pm



This was something I wrote a few weeks ago. Not my best work, by far, however, there was something about it I liked. Please, share your thoughts.


Don’t tell me I’m not cause I am.
Denying it won’t do any good.
Don’t tell me I’m not cause I am.
Ignoring me won’t make things better.

Delude all you want
But the fact is
I am what I am what I am.
Fat, ugly, and weird
Crazy, bipolar, and depressed
Emotional, stubborn, and frustrating.

Why can’t you just embrace it?
It’s not like telling me “no”
Makes it not true.
I can’t make my faults go away,
So accept them.

So don’t
Please, for me, don’t
Don’t tell me I’m not cause I am.
Just accept me for me…

The only problem is...


I can’t…

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:24 pm


I like it. It's different, but that makes it stand out on its own. Nice job.

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