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 Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:00 pm
Update October 12
Well the Haiku kind of came to a screetching halt so now I'm opening this topic up to any kind of poetry or short (very short) stories basically all you need to do is follow the same rules and have fun being evil. You can still post haiku following those rules listed below or make new versions of haiku mix it up and be wackey; like do a haiku with 5 words-7 words-5 words anything that comes to your evil little mind. Have fun and happy posting.
*end edit*
Ok...maybe I spelled that wrong...maybe not...well I figured that since we have an evil story going that maybe we should get some evil haiku going. (correct me if that is spelled wrong) For those of you who don't know what haiku is, it is a form of poetry which consists of three lines. the first line is 5 sylables the second seven and the third five. True haiku has nature as a metaphor or is compared likewise therein. Now I don't expect all of them to be true haiku but please try.
RULES:
1. No spamming!
2. No page streching
3. Be polite to other posters.
4. If you have no constructive critisism then don't critisize.
5. All haiku must comply with the guidelines above. (or not)
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:02 pm
Since this is my topic I suppose I should go first.....
The wind through your hair
the plunge of a cold steel knife
your betrayal
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 8:27 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 4:57 pm
Winters final breath
your bloody hands on my chest
a new season
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 6:39 pm
the strongest of gales
always begins with the shift
of a single leaf
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 9:00 pm
When I see shadows I look deep into my soul What I see is death
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 9:43 pm
Beautiful Seagull
Flies gracefully until it
Eats Alka Seltzer
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:37 pm
the wind in your hair
is like the sunshine's laughter
a cause for battle
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:51 pm
a drop of water
becomes swallowed amid the
chaos of the sea
Blarg! This one sucks. xp Mr. Lombardi would be ashamed of his "Haiku Master."
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:52 pm
Forced to watch Fargo
A dagger shoved through my mind
defying nature
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 3:46 pm
nighttime fantasies
your endless srieking wails
a new moon rising
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 7:51 pm
Reflect on my life
You would see disturbing things
See terrible beasts
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 6:02 pm
Wow Jc that was actually really good.....not that all of the other ones weren't but that one stuck out.
One more rotting corpse
as the river flows along
forgotten at last
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 10:06 pm
Worldsend Wow Jc that was actually really good.....not that all of the other ones weren't but that one stuck out. One more rotting corpse as the river flows along forgotten at last Cheers, You have done this before no? I can see myself But thats not what you can see You cant see the truth
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Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:05 am
your festering flesh
cherry flavored antacids
wet and bloody tears
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