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An Aristocratic WiP (Sketch Fixed and Coloring now)

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Wicked V

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:53 am


Hello and salutations~!
I think this is my second time posting here (the last time was two years ago >.<; wink
I think I have gotten a lot better than what I was before!

Anyways to get to the point.
I need help on this sketch!
The Character (Peregrine R. Faust) is a narcissistic, arrogant, and rebellious Demon Noble, and the current main villain in the story/up-coming Roleplay Clockwork World.

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I am having problems with His hands, his left leg/foot, and his the placement of his coat. (He is sitting on a chaise-type chair)
...And maybe the his frilly arm cuffs.

The picture will be colored as a cleaned up sketch, so I am willing to change everything and such!

Thank you very much for reading this and possibly helping me out~!

EDIT
I fixed what mistakes where pointed off to me by Sotalean-san before Sunday, (I started to color on Sunday)
Now I think I might need abit of help on that background...
That carpet...
...I need a color or an idea of something that would well... Work!

Again I really Appreciate the help and here's the WiP now!
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:35 am


The first thing that I noticed was that his arm holding the wine glass is way too long. His elbow should only go to his mid waist but it's almost reaching his hip. o.o There was also the way he was holding the glass... usually if it's a wine glass you hold from the base of the cup. That the legs were just slightly out of place for a relaxed position like this but it wasn't that big of a deal. razz

As for his ruffs... I personally think that they look good the way you have them but you can try giving them a bit more gravitational pull. lol. That's the only thing I can think of for that.

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Wicked V

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:28 pm


This helps SOO much~!
I mean... this is what I get for not researching poses *slaps hand*

Thank you very much~
I'll try and fix everything with using your red lines~
PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:48 am


His face could use Improving

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Wicked V

PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:48 pm


Ghum
His face could use Improving

If I may ask, How?
I'd love to hear how I can improve better n_n
PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:28 am


Aizoku Nekoi
Ghum
His face could use Improving

If I may ask, How?
I'd love to hear how I can improve better n_n
i think he may be refering to the nose,it seems to me that it is a bit to large.But for the rest the face looks just right to me (=

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