Um...I like to role play. I would like some opinions on some posts of mine. I'm really mediocre at role playing so expect my posts to be stinky.
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Walking outside, she could feel the cold air kiss her cheeks as the breeze blew in her direction. Pulling her hood over her head, she walked towards the woods. Amaya stuck her hands into the pockets and walked on. She knew that if she walked too far then she would get lost in this new place but she didn't want to be close to the house either. So, she walked on. With the house still within sight, she stopped at a spot where she could look up and see the sky. Looking at the clouds, stars and moon, her eyes began to fill with tears as her inner emotions began to overwhelm her.
A rich family, a model's figure, a prodigy's mind and everything that was concluded as the perfect girl with the perfect life. What does it all mean? What does it all matter if it only belongs to a girl who has destroyed her mom's life? To a girl who ruins everyone's lives. To a girl that burdens with thoughts of being the devil that ruined her family's life, it meant nothing. Nothing at all.
A rich family, a model's figure, a prodigy's mind and everything that was concluded as the perfect girl with the perfect life. What does it all mean? What does it all matter if it only belongs to a girl who has destroyed her mom's life? To a girl who ruins everyone's lives. To a girl that burdens with thoughts of being the devil that ruined her family's life, it meant nothing. Nothing at all.
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Amaya woke up to a dark room. Last night, she had come back to the house and went to bed. Lying flat on the bed she raised her arm and placed it over her eyes. Her eyes felt like they were burning. ‘Probably the result from the tears last night…’Amaya thought. She let her hand slide down as she opened her eyes and looked at the clock. “Time to wake up” Amaya whispered to herself.
She dragged herself out of bed and went to her window. Amaya pulled the curtains aside and looked outside. Everything was a it foggy and the clouds were grey. “Looks like it’s going to be a cold day. Mom’s going to be frantic then.” Amaya mumbled to herself. Amaya’s mom was always a bit hysterical on cold days. It was because of Amaya’s condition and all. Amaya knew this so she always tried her best to keep her mom calm and herself out of harm’s way. Her head was already beginning to hurt and she hadn’t even stepped outside yet. Then a thought occurred to her. “Today’s Momo’s birthday. Mom would let me stay home and sleep all day today if I asked but it’s Momo’s birthday…I guess I can survive a few hours in this weather. Just have to make sure I’m extra warm today.” Amaya thought as she began to think about the upcoming day.
Amaya turned on the lights and went to her closet. She had her first day at the new school today. Some of her relatives also went there. Amaya pulled her uniform off the hanger and got her undergarments. Opening and closing her door, she went to the bathroom. Entering the bathroom, she locked the door and set down her stuff. Turning the shower on, she stripped herself and went into the bathtub. After using a lavender scented shampoo, she rinsed and turned the water off. Grabbing a towel off the rack, she wrapped it around her. Drying herself off, she looked into the mirror. Her eye’s still burned a bit but you couldn’t tell for the whites of her eyes weren’t red. The pupils of her eyes were strange though. It was black but slightly red just of the little rim of her pupil. Her hair was as white as pure snow. The features that made girls envy and guys stare. All a gift from the curse.
She quickly dressed herself and went out the bathroom, only to return back to her own room. The uniform included a skirt. That was going to be a bit of a problem but Amaya thought she could deal with it. Pulling on knee-high socks, she looked at herself in the mirror again. Brushing her slightly damp hair, she concluded to let it stay down. She went into her closet once more and grabbed a black embroidered wool belted coat. It was a nice fitting and snug coat. More importantly, it kept her warm.
Sitting down at her desk, she made sure that she got everything she needed. She reached across the desk opened a box where she kept her jewelry. She had a variety of rings, bracelets and necklaces. Grabbing a simple looking necklace, she put it on. She wore this almost all the time. It was a simple silver necklace chain that belonged to her mom. On it was a simple silver ring. On the inside of the ring, it had engraved words. The words said ‘I love you’. The ring was her father’s. It’s the last thing that she has of him. It was the ring that her mom had given him. He had given it back the day he left forever. It was a treasured thing of Amaya. Grabbing a ring that looked like a snake, she put onto the middle finger of her left hand. It was a symbol to Amaya. A symbol of imprisonment. A sign of how the curse had forever captured her in it’s grasp. Grabbing another ring, she put it on her wedding finger on the right hand. It was a small little thing with a butterfly on it. It was always set on her wedding finger. The wedding finger was the finger that lead to the heart and with a butterfly set on it, it symbolized her dreams. Her heart’s wish of being set free from the curse. To fly free like a butterfly. That was why she wore it. Of course, no one knew about this symbolism stuff. Everyone just thought that Amaya wore the jewelry because she liked it. Then reaching once more into the box, she pulled out a smaller box. It was wrapped in the pretty silver wrapping. It was the present for Momo. Inside, a small bunny bracelet laid among the tissue paper. Amaya spent a lot of time on this bracelet for Momo and had hoped that she would like it.
Slipping the box gently in her bag, she stood up and went out of her room. Closing the door gently to not disturb anyone still sleeping, she went to the front door. Slipping on her shoes, she put on her coat and stepped outside. The cold air met her face as she walked to Maiko’s house. Momo was bound to be there. She looked at the sky and saw the clouds had gotten worse. “It might rain soon. “ Amaya said softly to herself as Maiko’s house came into view. Amaya could see Momo standing in front of the door. “Momo~!” Amaya shouted at Momo as she came within hearing distance.
She dragged herself out of bed and went to her window. Amaya pulled the curtains aside and looked outside. Everything was a it foggy and the clouds were grey. “Looks like it’s going to be a cold day. Mom’s going to be frantic then.” Amaya mumbled to herself. Amaya’s mom was always a bit hysterical on cold days. It was because of Amaya’s condition and all. Amaya knew this so she always tried her best to keep her mom calm and herself out of harm’s way. Her head was already beginning to hurt and she hadn’t even stepped outside yet. Then a thought occurred to her. “Today’s Momo’s birthday. Mom would let me stay home and sleep all day today if I asked but it’s Momo’s birthday…I guess I can survive a few hours in this weather. Just have to make sure I’m extra warm today.” Amaya thought as she began to think about the upcoming day.
Amaya turned on the lights and went to her closet. She had her first day at the new school today. Some of her relatives also went there. Amaya pulled her uniform off the hanger and got her undergarments. Opening and closing her door, she went to the bathroom. Entering the bathroom, she locked the door and set down her stuff. Turning the shower on, she stripped herself and went into the bathtub. After using a lavender scented shampoo, she rinsed and turned the water off. Grabbing a towel off the rack, she wrapped it around her. Drying herself off, she looked into the mirror. Her eye’s still burned a bit but you couldn’t tell for the whites of her eyes weren’t red. The pupils of her eyes were strange though. It was black but slightly red just of the little rim of her pupil. Her hair was as white as pure snow. The features that made girls envy and guys stare. All a gift from the curse.
She quickly dressed herself and went out the bathroom, only to return back to her own room. The uniform included a skirt. That was going to be a bit of a problem but Amaya thought she could deal with it. Pulling on knee-high socks, she looked at herself in the mirror again. Brushing her slightly damp hair, she concluded to let it stay down. She went into her closet once more and grabbed a black embroidered wool belted coat. It was a nice fitting and snug coat. More importantly, it kept her warm.
Sitting down at her desk, she made sure that she got everything she needed. She reached across the desk opened a box where she kept her jewelry. She had a variety of rings, bracelets and necklaces. Grabbing a simple looking necklace, she put it on. She wore this almost all the time. It was a simple silver necklace chain that belonged to her mom. On it was a simple silver ring. On the inside of the ring, it had engraved words. The words said ‘I love you’. The ring was her father’s. It’s the last thing that she has of him. It was the ring that her mom had given him. He had given it back the day he left forever. It was a treasured thing of Amaya. Grabbing a ring that looked like a snake, she put onto the middle finger of her left hand. It was a symbol to Amaya. A symbol of imprisonment. A sign of how the curse had forever captured her in it’s grasp. Grabbing another ring, she put it on her wedding finger on the right hand. It was a small little thing with a butterfly on it. It was always set on her wedding finger. The wedding finger was the finger that lead to the heart and with a butterfly set on it, it symbolized her dreams. Her heart’s wish of being set free from the curse. To fly free like a butterfly. That was why she wore it. Of course, no one knew about this symbolism stuff. Everyone just thought that Amaya wore the jewelry because she liked it. Then reaching once more into the box, she pulled out a smaller box. It was wrapped in the pretty silver wrapping. It was the present for Momo. Inside, a small bunny bracelet laid among the tissue paper. Amaya spent a lot of time on this bracelet for Momo and had hoped that she would like it.
Slipping the box gently in her bag, she stood up and went out of her room. Closing the door gently to not disturb anyone still sleeping, she went to the front door. Slipping on her shoes, she put on her coat and stepped outside. The cold air met her face as she walked to Maiko’s house. Momo was bound to be there. She looked at the sky and saw the clouds had gotten worse. “It might rain soon. “ Amaya said softly to herself as Maiko’s house came into view. Amaya could see Momo standing in front of the door. “Momo~!” Amaya shouted at Momo as she came within hearing distance.
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