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 Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 8:33 pm
もっと上手になるためにこの歌を書いました。終わらなくても、どうぞ…
「ｆｌｏｗ」
踏み出したら、直ぐに運び去られる
拾う物は手の間におちる
君が映して、現実面に
歪な笑顔を探してる
全て遅く過ぎ去って
だんだん黒々に成ってゆく
またファミリアなふちで
外の世界を見つめている
ねえ、この頃…あの頃のよう？
生まれる時から、この世界から
そっと剥がされた物は一滴のような
少しな嬉しさをくれたことが
生活の織物を破り取った
全ては遅く過ぎ去って
だんだん黒々に成ってゆく
またファミリアなふちで
外の世界を見つめている
ねえ、君も…去ること
What do you think?
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:09 am
Though I would normally lock this refer you to one of the Japanese speaking threads, this intrigues me. I will observe and see what people posts.
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 3:12 pm
Koiyuki Though I would normally lock this refer you to one of the Japanese speaking threads, this intrigues me. I will observe and see what people posts.
It isn't just Japanese speaking is it? It's more like writing. smile
I wonder if anyone will be able to understand what I'm trying to say. x.o;
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:26 pm
LIFEphemeral Koiyuki Though I would normally lock this refer you to one of the Japanese speaking threads, this intrigues me. I will observe and see what people posts.
It isn't just Japanese speaking is it? It's more like writing. smile
I wonder if anyone will be able to understand what I'm trying to say. x.o;You could provide a translation, if it concerns you.
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:10 pm
Koiyuki LIFEphemeral Koiyuki Though I would normally lock this refer you to one of the Japanese speaking threads, this intrigues me. I will observe and see what people posts.
It isn't just Japanese speaking is it? It's more like writing. smile
I wonder if anyone will be able to understand what I'm trying to say. x.o;You could provide a translation, if it concerns you.
But I'll answer any questions about what certain words mean like ふち which I purposely did not use a kanji for.
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