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xxSaspra

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:13 pm


This is a PRP for me and Naysha Ayasha.


Naysha Aysha
Ebonypaw would never normally talk back to a warrior, but this one was wrong.
"Ha mouse brain I do believe one must have a naming ceremony before training any other way goes against Starclan!!!" She turned to her mother knowing full well that Darkpaw had been doing a few apprentice things before he was supposed too. "I'm not even sure why, I'm being called an apprentice before I am one, or why some other kits are getting trained already, but that is not my problem, its the leaders!!!!" Ebonypaw made sure she got past Foxheart and into the den this time. She curled in her nest and began to cry, it wasn't fair on many levels.


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Swiftcloud slowly walked into the apprentice den and sat down next to Ebonypaw. "Are you alright?" he mewed in a gentle tone.


Naysha Aysha
Ebonypaw turned away from him a bit to try and had her crying. "No..."
She sniffed a bit trying to stifle her crying before she spoke again.
"It's not fair.Dark has started his training, but Phantomgaze and I wait for the naming ceremony.And while it seems Moonstar has time to train and enemy apprentice, she doesn't have time for a ceremony that is stopping progress on training. It sounds cracked to me." Ebonypaw's crying stopped suddenly and she looked at Swiftcloud with watery eyes. "Why is Moonstar so unjust? I bet my father would have a cow over everything that is happening. Where is he?"


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Swiftcloud looked at her with sympathy "I'm not quite sure why all this is going on." he mewed slowly. "But don't worry, when Phantomgaze starts your training I'll ask him if I can help too, that way you'll get twice the training." He wondered where their other leader, Chaosstar, was at. "As for your father, I'm not sure where he's at."
PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 2:46 pm


"I'd like that..." Ebonypaw looked to the ground thoughts where whirling in her head not all of them pleasant. "I wish he would come back, I think he is a better leader then the.....soft hearted....unjust...scatter brained Moonstar." She growled her claws unsheathing she gasp at her own aggression and she turned from Swiftcloud once more. "She didn't even bother to take care of my fit or yelling right or wrong on her own. She ignored me.....no she was to lazy to take care of it herself." What was going on with Ebonypaw, she didn't even know, but seeds of hatred or of distrust had been planted in Ebonypaw against Moonstar. Hopefully those seeds would not grow.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:35 pm


"Yeah, I wish Chaosstar would come back too." He sighed. He went closer to Ebonypaw and started to lick her ears to calm her down. "You don't need to say that about Moonstar." He mewed. Although every part of him wanted to scream that he agreed. Their clan was falling apart without their other leader. "She loves you." He mewed "... I love you." He mewed, wondering how she would react to him.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 4:26 pm


Ebonypaw seemed to calm as he licked her ear. Even though she really didn't agree with some of the things he was saying. She had a feeling there was a lack of conviction in his voice when he said she didn't need to speak about Moonstar that way.

"I'm not sure that she........" Ebonypaw had started to reply when the words I love you echoed in her ears. What did he mean? I love you as a sister, a daughter? Or I love you love you? What could she say? Yes she really liked Swiftcloud, but was it love? She wasn't sure, she was young, but it hadn't been long since Swiftcloud was an apprentice she had heard. He wasn't much older then her. Ebonypaw looked at him with shocked speechless purple eyes.
What should she say?

"You love me?" She whispered.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 4:43 pm


Swiftcloud stared at her intently. "I do love you." He mewed. "When I first met you... I couldn't fall asleep that night because I was thinking about you." He stopped. Was he going too far? He really did love her but did she feel the same way about him? Those were questions he wanted answered, but he was also afraid of the answer too...

Several heartbeats later he stared down at his paws then stared back into Ebonypaw's eyes. He awaited her responce as much as a kit wanted to be a warrior.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:30 pm


"I don't know what to say, Swiftcloud." Part of her wanted to say she loved him, but another thought it was all to fast.

Her head was spinning all the mess with her family now this. Not that this was a bad thing, but it left her rather flustered and Bewildered. She looked at her paws as she thought hard about what to say. She didn't want to hurt him by saying the wrong specially if she did love him.

"I...I think I might like you too, it its just a little fast for me." Ebonypaw said at last her eyes meeting his.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:33 pm


Swiftcloud looked into her eyes and nodded slowly. "I'll wait for you for as long as you need me to." He mewed. Slowly he got up and exited the den and walked into the warrior's den.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:51 pm


Ebonypaw nodded still a bit shocked. "Good night Swiftcloud." She whispered then she curled into her nest to sleep.

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