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 Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:55 am
hey sorry about the fact there is alot but i write loads lol so tell me what you think
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:56 am
Number 1
I feel a bit down,
I feel a bit low.
I feel like slashing my wrists...
I just want a go.
I feel the blade,
I feel the pain.
I scream and shout,
And run out in the rain.
I Hide in a tunnel,
I hide in my self.
No one can find me...
I fear for my health.
I am alone.
I fell so cold.
I'm turning to ice...
I know what i've sold
There goes my soul,
There goes my heart,
There goes life.
I'm alone in the dark...
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:57 am
Number 2
You say your my friend
I say your a liar
You say you want to help
I say no thanks
You say you love me
I say yea right
Yuo say you need me
I say...LEAVE ME TO DIE
All life is suffering
Death is the release
This is my war cry
This is my song
Put an end to suffering
Let you self rot
Let the planet dissolve around us
For now its to late
What is the meaning of life
The answer is plain
The meaning is nothing
Life is insane
You say your my friend
I say your a liar
You say you want to help
I say no thanks
You say you love me
I say yea right
Yuo say you need me
I say...LEAVE ME TO DIE
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:58 am
Number 3
were is the light that shines my way?
what is the reason i wake up each day?
why do i wonder about about questions small?
why do i think and live at all?
what is ther reason that i'm still alive?
were will it be that i will thrive?
why do i ask all of these words?
why can't my soul just fly away...just like a birds?
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:59 am
Number 4
everything is born to die
so then why do we try
to stop the clocks
and hold fast the locks
to delay all things fate
and close our eyes to the gate
all things rot berethed of caues
nothing ever will change these laws
so why is it that we strive
to not take that final dive
the last adventure we all must take
since we do it for our own sake
we all will die
so break these ties
and let me leave in peace
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:00 am
Black Heart
Down in the gutter no place to hide.
The people around me look like they've died.
With no one to love and no one to care.
All their hopes and dreams fly in to the air.
To me this aint nothing new.
So I wanna climb out I wanna find you.
I'll give you my heart I’ll give you my soul.
All I ask is for you to keep me whole.
(chorus)
Why do we cause each other so much pain.
When ever i cry its like the rain.
TEARS FALLING FROM THE HEAVENS.
WHILE MY SOUL ROTS DOWN HERE IN HELL.
I NEED TO CLIMB OUT I'VE GOT TO TRY.
'Cause if we don’t try we may as well die.
Who you are is a mystery.
I don't even know if you will love me.
But I wanna try I need to know.
I've been hit from an arrow of cupids bow.
I'll follow you around do anything.
I will do you every whim.
All i ask is that you will love me.
'Cause my love for you is like the sea.
(chorus)
If you would be mine i will keep you well.
But please save me from this hell.
My mind is gone i am in pain
This lack of love drives me insane.
Back down in the gutter no were to hide.
Even I know look like I’ve died.
I tried and failed but no one loves me.
What can life hold...well guess we shall see.
(chorus 2 times fading slowly then echo on last line in chorus to end)
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:01 am
To Hell With Love
Carved in to the flesh,
The name of the person I love.
No mater how hard I try,
When I reach out to try and ask,
My love fly’s away,
On the wings of a dove.
My heart will shatter,
To the sound of drumming,
The drumming of tears and rain.
And as I lie down,
The world goes black,
A warm sensation down my neck.
And I am gone.
Never to return.
Never to try.
That was the last time I lay down to cry.
For in that single flash of pain,
My soul will never love again.
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:02 am
Number 5
heart of ice
mind of lead
heavy and cold
inside half dead
i tear at my self
the pain means im real
inside there is nothing
nothing left for love to heal
i am dead before the world
i am gone in mind and soul
the body rots
i was never whole
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:03 am
This is Our Song
Ian_______Now sit the ******** down hold your girlfriends hand
__________You’re here of free choice so listen to our band
__________Get the I-pods off and the head phones out
__________You may not enjoy us but don’t ******** ignore us
Jam_______we are who we are so leave us the ******** alone
Ian_______These are the songs we sing tonight
__________And let’s make sure we do this right
Both______This is our song no body else’s
__________Get off our backs if you’re not with us
__________This is our song we gotta flaunt it
__________So get the I-pods off and listen to this
Jam_______well guys I’m sorry but she is taken
Ian_______us guys are the same so sorry girls
__________But that’s ok cause were here right now
__________so Listen to our music and have some fun
Jam_______oh yea
Ian_______so lets gets to the end then we can play some more
__________So sit the ******** down and hold your boy friends hand
Jam_______Get the I-pods off and the head phones out
__________You may not enjoy us but don’t ******** ignore us
Ian_______These are the songs we sing tonight
__________so let’s make sure we do this right NOW
Both_______This is our song no body else’s
__________Get off our backs if you’re not with us
__________This is our song we gotta flaunt it
__________So get the I-pods off and listen to this
Jam_______So leave us the ******** alone
__________So leave us the ******** alone
Ian_______Count down to chorus
Both_______This is our song no body else’s
__________Get off our backs if you’re not with us
__________This is our song we gotta flaunt it
__________So get the I-pods off and listen to this
Both_______This is our song no body else’s
__________Get off our backs if you’re not with us
__________This is our song we gotta flaunt it
__________So get the I-pods off and listen to this
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:05 am
Number 6
I may not give the impression,
But i don't need this dark depression.
Suffocating, Slowly killing,
Out of my eyes the tears are spilling.
Now i know, everyone crys,
But i cover up my tears with stupid lies.
I want to dissapear and fade away,
But to me this is just another day.
All i know is pain and sorrow,
I don't wanna live to see tomorrow.
I want to go away and never be found,
Wanna be burried six feet underground.
Don't wanna know, don't wanna care.
I don't give a ******** if you stare.
Get out of my life and out of my sight,
I don't need your help to make things right
Wanna jump of a cliff, know whats its like to fly,
Its never the fall that kills you but when you hit the ground you die.
So leave me alone, with my thought and my mind,
I would be dead right now if the world weren't so kind.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:47 am
thanks for commenting on these stare
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:28 am
mabye i should just leave since nobody cares about my work
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 4:03 am
fine forget it nice knowing you
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:15 pm
lol hey man we're a very SLOW moving guild... No need to get all mopey about it....
You know Your poetry reminds me Alot of the stuff I used to write when I was younger... It's interesting...
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 9:48 pm
#1:
I like the way it flows, it really is a cool poem I like it allot, its not as deep as some things I like but its still ready.
#2
the first part is really powerful I really like it as well, I truly love how your work is, its so dark but still so right.
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