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 Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 9:37 pm
I knwo this will probly be moved to the Fan fic sub foram(But no one gose to thouse crying ) I found two enjoyable Fanfics for my favoret ships(Tokka, and then my crackship Sokkla) And I wanted to get some other peoples appion about it befor its moved so HP and Seira Dont move it for a little bit, 3 days Is all I'm asking, If thats too much I understand This on is the Sokkla Sokkla fanficAnd this one is the Tokka one(negi, just look away man,Just look away) Tokka ColorsI'm more of a fan of the Sokkla one but thats only becuse its longer and more efford was put into it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:12 am
I'm sorry I mainly noticed one thing... did you purposely spell opinion that way? (sorry future teacher here)
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[Hollow Point] Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:26 am
Angel, gtfo.
Mods:
Leave this here so people can see it.
Kakashi, I fixed the name. smile
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 10:58 am
gtfo? what does that mean?
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 10:58 am
[Hollow Point] Angel, gtfo. Mods: Leave this here so people can see it. Kakashi, I fixed the name. smile Thanks man I'm so glad to get to deal with fluffy side of you crying So so glad I havent in cured the Raith. xd thanks agin
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:00 am
Dark_Angel05 I'm sorry I mainly noticed one thing... did you purposely spell opinion that way? (sorry future teacher here) No sadly my spelling is Horrable, most people around here have kind of gotton use it, though I still get some flack for it, I dont mind, Good luck with the teaching thing 3nodding What did you think of them? I'm rather fond of the Sokkla one.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:02 am
Lord-god-kakashi Dark_Angel05 I'm sorry I mainly noticed one thing... did you purposely spell opinion that way? (sorry future teacher here) No sadly my spelling is Horrable, most people around here have kind of gotton use it, though I still get some flack for it, I dont mind, Good luck with the teaching thing 3nodding What did you think of them? I'm rather fond of the Sokkla one. sorry I didn't mean to be rude or anything lol just becoming a pet peeve lol... I dunno I couldn't get into them, I guess I'm just not interested enough
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:20 am
Dark_Angel05 Lord-god-kakashi Dark_Angel05 I'm sorry I mainly noticed one thing... did you purposely spell opinion that way? (sorry future teacher here) No sadly my spelling is Horrable, most people around here have kind of gotton use it, though I still get some flack for it, I dont mind, Good luck with the teaching thing 3nodding What did you think of them? I'm rather fond of the Sokkla one. sorry I didn't mean to be rude or anything lol just becoming a pet peeve lol... I dunno I couldn't get into them, I guess I'm just not interested enough Damn that sucks, and it wasent rude, you asked in a polate enough manner, It works for me I hope it works for others
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[Hollow Point] Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:49 pm
Angel, gtfo means Get The ******** Out. As in convey your opinions/ideas/sentences in a better manner or I will make you GTFO, with my foot.
Not everyone has as good spelling as you evidently do, and I commend you for wanting to become a teacher, just make sure you stay out of Hawaii. I mean god knows that we need better teachers here, but the kids basically run everything. All the good teachers leave within a year because the systems here sucks, the kids basically run everything because teachers here don't like to teach, all hold this liberal ideal that "punishment" is ignoring whatever the kids do. My second grade teacher tried to take this kid to the principal once and he actually grabbed a pair of scissors and start slashing, kicking, etc. He went eventually but that woman cried several times that year. She was a great teacher as well. I wish there were more like her. Hell, half the teachers here don't even like to teach, let alone like kids.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:27 pm
-Sigh- 8 post and no ones read any of them crying
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:47 pm
Lord-god-kakashi -Sigh- 8 post and no ones read any of them crying I read them. ^.^ Well, the tokka one. I liked your idea about toph and colors, but i thought the very end ( like, the last sentence) was a little cliche.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:48 pm
Lord-god-kakashi -Sigh- 8 post and no ones read any of them crying I have yet to read the Tokka one, but the Sokkla seemed out of character, for both of them. Written well enough, the dialogue needs some flare beyond just simple dialogue.
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[Hollow Point] Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:51 pm
Rosabelle334 Lord-god-kakashi -Sigh- 8 post and no ones read any of them crying I read them. ^.^ Well, the tokka one. I liked your idea about toph and colors, but i thought the very end ( like, the last sentence) was a little cliche. Just alittle bit but still I enjoyed it
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:53 pm
[Hollow Point] Lord-god-kakashi -Sigh- 8 post and no ones read any of them crying I have yet to read the Tokka one, but the Sokkla seemed out of character, for both of them. Written well enough, the dialogue needs some flare beyond just simple dialogue. enjoyed, I dint think it was too out of chareater, exspcaly when someone is faced with there own mortalty(you know what I mean)
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:53 pm
I'll read it when my head isn't going to explode Dx I'm much too sick to read anything longer than...I don't know. My brain is not functioning well.
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