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 Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:22 pm
In the middle of the courtyard, sits the batousai. He eagerly awaits his oponent cross-legged on the wet floor. The students take little notice of him, as he seemed to've appeared out of thin air. The onlookers begin to increase however. It is not often that the manslayer puts on a show for his students, but today obviously was different....as he prepares to spar with another guild captain. An S-Class battle no less..
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:35 pm
A.D walks amongst the crowd smiling at the on looks. As she heard one say in a whisper, "Who would fight Sensei Batosai..." She smirked and replied, "One would wonder." She walked into the clearing to face her oponent, she walked with grace and sifted her hair behind her ear, "Greetings Batousai." Said the only female captain of the guild.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:42 pm
Angelic Demon A.D walks amongst the crowd smiling at the on looks. As she heard one say in a whisper, " Who would fight Sensei Batosai..." She smirked and replied, " One would wonder." She walked into the clearing to face her oponent, she walked with grace and sifted her hair behind her ear, "Greetings Batousai." Said the only female captain of the guild. The batousai breaks his meditative state in order to lock eyes with his oponent. He wearily stands upright, as he is fully aware that as a guild captain, her skill level must be off the charts. Cracking his neck, as he eases into his familiar stance. An all too familiar smile escapes his lips as he gestures toward his oponent- Ladies first..
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:55 pm
batousai Angelic Demon A.D walks amongst the crowd smiling at the on looks. As she heard one say in a whisper, " Who would fight Sensei Batosai..." She smirked and replied, " One would wonder." She walked into the clearing to face her oponent, she walked with grace and sifted her hair behind her ear, "Greetings Batousai." Said the only female captain of the guild. The batousai breaks his meditative state in order to lock eyes with his oponent. He wearily stands upright, as he is fully aware that as a guild captain, her skill level must be off the charts. Cracking his neck, as he eases into his familiar stance. An all too familiar smile escapes his lips as he gestures toward his oponent- Ladies first.. She smiled at him and began to slowly walk towards him. She pulls out a small stone and mummbling under her breath as she attached the stone to her katana . She held her weapon against her face placing a kiss on the cold steel as the wind around her became uneasy, she started running towards him. Her blade becoming an extension of her body as she launched a blow at him bringing down her weapon upon him.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 5:13 pm
The manslayer's glance became as cold as the very steel she sought to strike him with. The manslayer simply side stepped to the right, leaving his oponent wide open. Seeing this opening, the manslayer swiftly struck her in the back of the neck, using his sword's sheathe...
Your sentences began to run on. I had to do a little editing, without change to the actual action you were attempting. I just added a few periods. As always, the 10-10 rule will be used here..
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 5:24 pm
"Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 10:04 pm
Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent..
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:35 am
batousai Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent.. She flipped over his leg, landing with out a sound, she whrilled around to try and place her blade on his side with her blunt blade to gain a point.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:49 am
Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent.. She flipped over his leg, landing with out a sound. whirling around to place her blunt blade on his side to gain a point. Wincing in pain, the manslayer merely grabbed hold of the blunt object, leaving his oponent somewhat open. With her left hand detained, the batousai unleashes a massive diagonal strike on his oponent's right shoulder.. Use periods. Your sentences are running on
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:16 pm
batousai Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent.. She flipped over his leg, landing with out a sound. whirling around to place her blunt blade on his side to gain a point. Wincing in pain, the manslayer merely grabbed hold of the blunt object, leaving his oponent somewhat open. With her left hand detained, the batousai unleashes a massive diagonal strike on his oponent's right shoulder.. Use periods. Your sentences are running on To avoid his attack, she cast a lightning spell upon herself. By doing so she created a distraction as the bolt hit the ground where she stood, and she let go of her sword. Aso the lightning caused a flash of light. With the bright light it may slightly blind the manslayer for a small about of time (few min. maybe). In the past when she casted the wind spell she gained a slight speed increase, so she was able to move out of the way from her own attack in time. She quickly placed herself behind him and tapped the back of this neck.
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:25 pm
Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent.. She flipped over his leg, landing with out a sound. whirling around to place her blunt blade on his side to gain a point. Wincing in pain, the manslayer merely grabbed hold of the blunt object, leaving his oponent somewhat open. With her left hand detained, the batousai unleashes a massive diagonal strike on his oponent's right shoulder.. Use periods. Your sentences are running on To avoid his attack, she cast a lightning spell upon herself. By doing so she created a distraction as the bolt hit the ground where she stood, and she let go of her sword. Aso the lightning caused a flash of light. With the bright light it may slightly blind the manslayer for a small about of time (few min. maybe). In the past when she casted the wind spell she gained a slight speed increase, so she was able to move out of the way from her own attack in time. She quickly placed herself behind him and tapped the back of this neck. Having now been in posession of his oponent's weapon, the manslayer let a slight smirk escape him. He decides though, to play fair by tossing the weapon up some 20 ft. If you want it, it's up there. Also, I find it interesting how fast you whipped out that lightning spell, seeing as how even the most advanced magics take longer than 5 seconds. Anywho, I'll bite
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:33 am
batousai Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon batousai Angelic Demon "Of course Headmaster. I apologize. I cast a wind spell upon my blade so it will not cause any damage, but maybe a bruise or two. 1-0" Her blood was pumping as she was getting excited my the challenge. Firmly gripping the metal sheathe with his left hand, the batousai ducks low, attempting a leg sweep at his oponent.. She flipped over his leg, landing with out a sound. whirling around to place her blunt blade on his side to gain a point. Wincing in pain, the manslayer merely grabbed hold of the blunt object, leaving his oponent somewhat open. With her left hand detained, the batousai unleashes a massive diagonal strike on his oponent's right shoulder.. Use periods. Your sentences are running on To avoid his attack, she cast a lightning spell upon herself. By doing so she created a distraction as the bolt hit the ground where she stood, and she let go of her sword. Aso the lightning caused a flash of light. With the bright light it may slightly blind the manslayer for a small about of time (few min. maybe). In the past when she casted the wind spell she gained a slight speed increase, so she was able to move out of the way from her own attack in time. She quickly placed herself behind him and tapped the back of this neck. Having now been in posession of his oponent's weapon, the manslayer let a slight smirk escape him. He decides though, to play fair by tossing the weapon up some 20 ft. If you want it, it's up there. Also, I find it interesting how fast you whipped out that lightning spell, seeing as how even the most advanced magics take longer than 5 seconds. Anywho, I'll bite "Lightning is the fastest you can summon. Depending how long you've played with magic and where you summon it from." She held out her wrist and and removed her glove so show a small stone embedded in her flesh. "Runes." She looked up to the sky as she was walking backwards slowly, "Crap...". As she backed away several feet she knowing her weapon would drop any minute, she didn't take any chances. She desired a good distance from her challenger. She summoned the element of fire, and created a wall of flames in front of her as s defensive wall.
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 8:44 am
**the sudden crackle of thunder echoed into the long halls of the Headmaster's office. His attention sufficently peaked, Smoke rose from his dwarfing seat and stepped toward the lone window in his office. Peering out over the crowds, his eyes focused on the contolled chaos at hand. Crossing his arms behind him, Smoke righted his posture and glared intensley. As the Manslayer bested his opponet wit han opening salvo, a rather amusing though found SMoke and he chuckle aloud softly**
So quick to battle Manslayer.
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 4:49 pm
The manslayer felt the presence someone watching from afar. Someone with great strength. Never losing sight of his oponent through the wall of flames, the batousai leapt a mighty leap some 60ft into the air. Grabbing the young lady's sword on the way up...
I'm sorry, but with this many ppl watching, I can't possibly take it easy on you..
Having leapt well over the massive flame wall, the batousai's spiritual energy pour forth from his back. The batousai's silver luster looked rather brilliant in the eyes of the sun. Having such a display pour forth only accented it. The energy manifested itself as wings. Wings of somewhat light purple flame. With a thunderous clap of such forces mounted on his back, the manslayer rains down 2 massive bolts of energy toward his oponent..
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:34 am
-walks from the tree area-
hmm i wonder how big this place is?
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