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cyanide_ash

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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 8:43 pm

Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:13 pm

I really like the lighting in this picture.
I'm not so sure about how she is placed. She could extend her neck so we can see it and turn her face a bit toward the camera.

Overall, I love it. I think the picture has this soft and calming feeling. Like I said, I love the lighting, background, clothes, and the model.

Good job biggrin

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petitefromage
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Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:47 pm

I really like this photo, but I think that the model could have had her face more towards the sunlight, the shadow doesn't go very well with the rest of the warmth of the photo.
Excellent job, keep up the good work!

Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 6:17 pm

wow...both first commenters said what i wanted to say...
so yeah...the picture has a really gentle kind feeling to it...so the shadow does kind of ruin the picture a bit... if the light had just hit her head and have her face illuminate then it would look like an angel decending from the skys...then i think it would be amazing...
overall: good job smile

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petitefromage
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 7:26 pm

Aznanimegurl14

wow...both first commenters said what i wanted to say...
so yeah...the picture has a really gentle kind feeling to it...so the shadow does kind of ruin the picture a bit... if the light had just hit her head and have her face illuminate then it would look like an angel decending from the skys...then i think it would be amazing...
overall: good job smile

ha ha, sorry for stealing what you were going to say.
and yeah, I agree, there's a nice feeling that the viewer sees in this picture. good job, though.

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