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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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 Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:23 pm
Okay, here I'll post my own set of poems so that people can see how my poetry is.
I hope to God, that I won't see any of these under another person's name in the near future.
Feel free to comment in these forums.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:30 pm
Reverse Haiku #1
Creating A Guild.
Is Difficult to Do.
When no one helps you.
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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:15 pm
The Unknown Shadow Reverse Haiku #1 Creating A Guild. Is Difficult to Do. When no one helps you. Haiku #1 Haiku more for me and more for you but Enough for two Haiku #2 Out of whack is what I am feeling at this moment, now. Haiku #3 I understand now How to create Haiku so Simple in doing.
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:04 pm
It's been so long since I've written a Haiku. God Almighty!!!
Work
Work is exhausting
I have no time for
Gaia anymore.
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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:32 pm
I wrote this one a long time ago, I don't know if it's any good, you be the judge keep in mind that this is a little R-rated:
Father
As a child, you left me
As a teen, you didn't care
And as a 'tween you got the best of me
Father you were never there
I tried to live up to your expectations
Lord knows that I did
But instead of the respect and action I deserved
You always treated me as a kid
You were drunk
You never cared
You were a punk
That embarrassed, harassed, and bared
Father, I have cut you off
Like a lost and rotten limb from a tree
I have gotten you out of my life forever
Father, just let me be
I have become better than you
The times have changed
You, who tried to screw
And become deranged to me
I have bested the best
Belittled the rest
And yet, I will succeed
And become dressed in success
Goodbye Father
Die like the rest
And when you're in Hell
Tell that Pollock that raised you: I'm the best
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Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 2:26 am
While watching the moon headed people bounce from the sky, I flick my cigarette into the ashtray of the world.
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The Unknown Shadow Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:26 pm
The Unknown Shadow I wrote this one a long time ago, I don't know if it's any good, you be the judge keep in mind that this is a little R-rated: Father
As a child, you left me
As a teen, you didn't care
And as a 'tween you got the best of me
Father you were never there
I tried to live up to your expectations
Lord knows that I did
But instead of the respect and action I deserved
You always treated me as a kid
You were drunk
You never cared
You were a punk
That embarrassed, harassed, and bared Father, I have cut you off
Like a lost and rotten limb from a tree
I have gotten you out of my life forever
Father, just let me be
I have become better than you
The times have changed
You, who tried to screw
And become deranged to me
I have bested the best
Belittled the rest
And yet, I will succeed
And become dressed in success
Goodbye Father
Die like the rest
And when you're in Hell
Tell that Pollock that raised you: I'm the best Wow...This one is very deep.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:19 am
Yay Shade, I mean Shadow! Grand poems.
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