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 Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 3:18 pm
tiera (tee-air-ah)
-m.f.c. in my story 'little rabbit'.
*note: 'little rabbit' is rated r for mature themes, but the character descriptions will be pg 13 at most*
tiera was an abused slave of one of the most sadistic leaders in the city, and (of course) this affects her every moment.
physically: small, big green eyes and long curly brown hair, curvy body
emotionally: timid, cries easily, speaks rarely, never smiles, pliant and submissive for everyone
family: unknown- kidnapped as a small child and raised as a slave
friends: none
fears: everything- upsetting people, drawing attention to herself, loud noises, raised voices, surprises, big animals
peculiarities: she wasn't raised with the rules of modesty, she doesn't understand affection/love or "choices" (she wasn't raised to think for herself), she does what she is told to do
*the story picks up with her running away*
throughout the novel, she becomes more self-reliant, confidant and finds strength in her character.... all because of a boy
(a/n: i know, i know...... i'm a romantic, so sue me razz )
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 12:19 pm
I'm not gonna sue, but romance is good! smile heart
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:00 pm
This is cool, what would she do if the boy died? How did he make a difference in her life? How did he change her is more like it...
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:00 pm
honestly, by then end of the story she would kill herself if the boy died and left her.
he was the first person who cared about her enough to stick around. he's attracted to her but he won't make the first/any move because she's been abused by everyone she's come in contact with.
hrm... he gave her a need for courage, a reason to be strong, a safe space to be weak, acceptance of her flaws and yea.
mhm.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:41 pm
What does she give him in return question
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:05 pm
she gives him absolute devotion and someone he can actually protect.
they meet in the first scene when tiera is running away and runs into riat. it's a dark scene, but yea.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 12:30 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 2:07 am
hrm. good question.
she ran away because she was told to. it was definitely not a thought that came from her, she was too controlled and trained to think for herself. someone in the castle thought tiera's life was in extreme danger and told her to leave. she did without thinking, and was running before she remembered that slaves are killed when they are caught running away.
so yep.
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 2:13 pm
How are you going to present that? In a flash back while she's running or what?
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