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 Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:50 pm
Name: June
Age: 15
Hair: Dark brown (I mean really dark)
Eyes: Dark blue
Description: A small-town girl with a naive mentality. She just finished her first year of high school.
Her body is shared by the spirit of an angel who was destined to save a parrallel world but failed. Now, the angel periodically takes over her body to finish what she couldn't in her previous life.
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:29 pm
Careful. That type of character can easily become a Mary-Sue. Watch out for that. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:57 pm
Maruul Careful. That type of character can easily become a Mary-Sue. Watch out for that. 3nodding That's what I'm trying to avoid. wink
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 7:32 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 1:30 am
Hmm, I'm not generally a fan of teenage characters, but then, we don't know as yet what she's like or what happens to her. At this stage, could go anywhere.
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:33 am
Nothin' wrong with teenager characters, if they're designed well smile
I like small town people, they're just so...out of place in larger places...without more detail though, it'll be hard to judge the character...so as soon as you think of more, let us now <3
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:30 pm
Yeah, this is just the basics of the basics...
That's one of the main reasons why I was interested in this guild, because I felt that she was a little one-sided. Whereas I'm well aware of my other character's quirks and personalities (they talk to me in my head, etc.) I feel like this character is a stranger to me.
Which is bad, since she's my MC. xp
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 2:12 pm
what does she do first thing when she wakes up?
who is her favorite band?
what makes her cry?
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 5:14 pm
Updated with the character's role in the story.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 4:44 pm
Guess what? I'm not dead! rofl
No, seriously, sorry that I haven't been on in a while. School just kind of snuck up on me all at once. sweatdrop
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