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Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:27 pm


I'm looking for a reason to continue to be active. Ya'll know how I feel about some of the recent events, so there's no need for me to go there. I'd like a battle with someone who is very capable. Mak, Vicious(who I need to avenge anyway), Teezy, Silver, Durrtyboi, Spades, Vedic, Jceaz(who OWES me a battle), Phoenix, Strife, or anyone else who will provide a nice challenge. It's time to get LG back where it belongs... ON THE ******** TOP.

I've made this thread tonight, but I wont drop until tomorrow.. I've been drinking. XD But I'd like a nice battle. I'll check back later on for someone to accept.

-1 round.
- No more than 10 bars, no less than 5.
-Two lines per bar.
-Preferably done by Wednesday(Being generous)
-5 votes to win. 4-0 is a TKO.
-No feeding.
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Jaiden Stryker
This kid couldn't be an obstacle even as a MOVING screen.*
Raise your D, and STILL get crossed like it's written as a movie scene.
So basically, I'm saying all you've screened out was your victory.
The only way to beat me is if voters hopped on your meat like hickory.** (Dickriders)
Now look at this, instant kill with my first two bars.
I burst through stars. A supernova that'll hearse you far
to deliver you to your final destination.
I'll stop my procrastination... battling you gives me no dignation.
Cuz there's no sense of accomplishment for battling an incomplete emcee.
A screen with no glass, letting your losses seep through for new defeats, see?
Prolly not, cuz you couldn't foresee this win making me boast much.
You're so blind, you can't even see why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch!
Stryker can turn the punches on and off, and not be at risk.
But you've been dazed BEFORE the bell. Somebody give this kid some Brisk.***


-A moving screen is a form of illegal defense in basketball*
-Hickory Barbecue sauces is pretty popular**
-Brisk is iced tea. One particular commercial had Rocky in it, and was rejuvenated for the fight by drinking Brisk***

Screen6
Drunk please, ill put you in a leash then come at ya like a disease yea that’s my bliss
Just freeze, ill feast on ya body with my beast like diss and you remiss starting to hiss
Lemme show ya how my rhymes cause an attack, lemme see ya how ya take my assault
See my lines crush ya strikes with a smack, Flee my flows that cause punches to fall in a fault
Stryker punches couldn’t strike my screen like defensive, tear you up yea that’s my offensive
Stretcher comes ready with my lines apprehensive, show this drunk how to be comprehensive
Yes its my verse they reherse even in reverse minus the curse cause this flows to be fine
Killing edge at every intersperse, thrilling rage at the very worst cause this blows to shine
Stupidity kicks in as alcohol enters the mind, making open challenges make sure your mind’s inclined
Reality comes in as the intoxicant seeps out the mind, laying out punches feign by suds start the decline
Be careful what you put, your spits might still be slurred double vision affecting your brain
Clouded judgment cause your punch to be soft, I take advantage and turn this into your bane
So why don’t you hush before my lines crush and flush, put you in a cage like a thrush*
No need to rush, you can rest first you lush**! then ill take you out with my straight flush
And appreciate don’t try to negotiate, low rats I desecrate and decapitate, you cant make it
Wait for a stable mind state, let the fluids conjugate and procreate cause you need it

* Songbirds characteristically having brownish upper plumage with a spotted breast
**A person who drinks alcohol to excess habitually
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:14 am


ok ill take you on.

Amplifyd


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:04 pm


Hey. Sorry to say, but I'm not really in the battling mood. I can't think of anything to say since I'm not as pumped up as I was before. Lol. But I'll drop in just a few regardless. I'll probably have to rematch you eventually.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:17 pm


Sorry for the wait, Screen. I can't recall seeing any of your battles, so I'm a bit unsure how to approach you level-wise. XD But I'll see if I can make this enjoyable nonetheless.




This kid couldn't be an obstacle even as a MOVING screen.*
Raise your D, and STILL get crossed like it's written as a movie scene.
So basically, I'm saying all you've screened out was your victory.
The only way to beat me is if voters hopped on your meat like hickory.** (Dickriders)
Now look at this, instant kill with my first two bars.
I burst through stars. A supernova that'll hearse you far
to deliver you to your final destination.
I'll stop my procrastination... battling you gives me no dignation.
Cuz there's no sense of accomplishment for battling an incomplete emcee.
A screen with no glass, letting your losses seep through for new defeats, see?
Prolly not, cuz you couldn't foresee this win making me boast much.
You're so blind, you can't even see why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch!
Stryker can turn the punches on and off, and not be at risk.
But you've been dazed BEFORE the bell. Somebody give this kid some Brisk.***


-A moving screen is a form of illegal defense in basketball*
-Hickory Barbecue sauces is pretty popular**
-Brisk is iced tea. One particular commercial had Rocky in it, and was rejuvenated for the fight by drinking Brisk***

Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain


Amplifyd

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 5:42 am


Yess my first battle here. And it’s with Stryker xd



Drunk please, ill put you in a leash then come at ya like a disease yea that’s my bliss
Just freeze, ill feast on ya body with my beast like diss and you remiss starting to hiss
Lemme show ya how my rhymes cause an attack, lemme see ya how ya take my assault
See my lines crush ya strikes with a smack, Flee my flows that cause punches to fall in a fault
Stryker punches couldn’t strike my screen like defensive, tear you up yea that’s my offensive
Stretcher comes ready with my lines apprehensive, show this drunk how to be comprehensive
Yes its my verse they reherse even in reverse minus the curse cause this flows to be fine
Killing edge at every intersperse, thrilling rage at the very worst cause this blows to shine
Stupidity kicks in as alcohol enters the mind, making open challenges make sure your mind’s inclined
Reality comes in as the intoxicant seeps out the mind, laying out punches feign by suds start the decline
Be careful what you put, your spits might still be slurred double vision affecting your brain
Clouded judgment cause your punch to be soft, I take advantage and turn this into your bane
So why don’t you hush before my lines crush and flush, put you in a cage like a thrush*
No need to rush, you can rest first you lush**! then ill take you out with my straight flush
And appreciate don’t try to negotiate, low rats I desecrate and decapitate, you cant make it
Wait for a stable mind state, let the fluids conjugate and procreate cause you need it

* Songbirds characteristically having brownish upper plumage with a spotted breast
**A person who drinks alcohol to excess habitually
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 3:54 pm


im changing my name after this biggrin

Amplifyd


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:04 pm


Lol, tired of your name, eh?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:53 pm


EDIT: In my honest opinion screen 6's lines were waaaaaaaaaaay too long drawn out and boring

VOTE: Jaiden Stryker

The Cinnamon Toast Crunch line was nice too xd

Durrtyboi


ImShizzle
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:05 pm


Durrtyboi
EDIT: In my honest opinion screen 6's lines were waaaaaaaaaaay too long drawn out and boring

VOTE: Jaiden Stryker

The Cinnamon Toast Crunch line was nice too xd


Same reason

I vote for jaiden.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:08 pm


2-0

Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain


Amplifyd

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:52 am


yea im tired of this name. and i was reading a dictionary when i made my verse so yea, i cant resist putting some other words. xd
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:10 am


Once again, Jaiden explains s**t to us like we're a bunch of 6-year olds. We all know what a moving screen is *****. xd I'm sure we all understand the expression "hop on your meat" too. lmao. But getting to the point, I didn't even know where to start looking for a flow in Screen's verse. Speaking of getting to the point, Screen beat around the bush way too much. You had some nice vocab, but the majority of your punches (the ones that I could call "punches") weren't direct at all. neutral I think I saw maybe two name references in both of your verses actually, but Jaiden used some nameplay. and Screen, when you've got a name like that, you've gotta see that s**t coming and work that much harder to make up for that disadvantage.

But yeah, Jaiden's lines hit harder, while Screen seemed to do a lot of gloating. (I'll break that down in your bars if you want me too).

vote- Jaiden Stryker

Better flow, structure, and overall punches. Props for your vocab though Screen. 3nodding

Terrence Urameshi


Amplifyd

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:18 am


yea another reason of changing my name 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:06 pm


vote please? so i can change my name? sweatdrop

Amplifyd


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:30 pm


rofl I didn't ALWAYS break down simple s**t. But there have been some incidence that someone would claim something didn't make sense, and/or claim not to "get it." XD You've seen a few of my battles, I'm sure. And with that, you probably saw that being complex isn't one of my goals. So when people still don't "get it," it gets under my skin. XD So now I've resorted to this, sadly. sweatdrop

Oh, 3-0.
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