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I wrote an RP a long time ago for another website, but never posted it. I might do it here, but this is the profile for my character (made some edits).
The RP is about a war over the heir to the Northern Empire of Guardia. After the Walz-Goznath Conflict (Uprising), NEG characters (Officers, dignitaries, nobles, ambassadors) are invited to the Guardia Palace to celebrate the victory, though there is danger that the characters are about to face.
There are several backgrounds, with elements tapping into Final Fantasy, war movies, and anime, so you could say it was a type of War RP.

Anyways, here's my character:


Name: Roland "King" Zinfadiyl
Race: Human / Male
Age: 24
Nationality: Northern Empire of Guardia
Profession/Rank: Guardia Mage / Captain
Look - Please highlight areas: Roland's hair is gray, as all Guardia Mages soon experience after losing their rights as civillians to join the Northern Empire's army, and is cut short, but spiky, leaving his sideburns short down to the earlobes. His eyes, though they give an empty look, if searched emit a scarlet glow, another memento from his Mage training. His body build is that of an adult male's if they trained in the arts of taking pain through repetitive exercise, with muscles that rip at the skin, but bruises and scars over his torso and arms. Roland's clothing was nothing more than a deep, dark green duster coat, with red inner lining, a black cotton shirt, a pair of black, worn out slacks, and black, overused dress shoes, with visible scuff marks. An accessory that Roland carries is his Ruby ring, signifying his family heritage.
History: At the age of 17, which was the legal age for those with adept abilities in magic to be recruited into the Northern Empire of Guardia's army, Roland was taken from his family and trained to kill. Because the age for legally using Magic in public was 18, Roland spent the whole year to put his emotions aside to complete a mission.
A month before he turned 18, Roland killed his first person, in the training program that pit Guardia Soldiers against Qori Slaves. It was in this battle that Roland first used magic, the Summon spell, which brought forth a demon from the earth. Though the Qori people were known for their abilities to exclusively use the Summon spell, the anger which arose from Roland blinded him to the point that his summoned creature destroyed the Qori Slave and their own summoned creature.
Roland's training, as supervised by his superiors, did not go to the usual training of Black/White magic, but with more emphasis on his special ability to summon. Though no other Mage could be taught this type of magic, his special supervision was dropped, and what he thought of as a curse soon became a parlor trick among his fellow soldiers, giving him the nickname "King" for the number of creatures he could summon.
After 6 years, Roland has served the Northern Empire of Guardia in the Walz-Goznath Conflict, and is now done with his duties.
Due to his efforts in the Walz-Goznath Conflict, his invitation to the Guardia Palace was waiting for him on arrival to his barracks...
Personality: Though Roland is outgoing and easygoing, when it comes to his duty as a Guardia Mage, he becomes reserved and cold. Deep down inside, there's still some anger from his Qorian blood. This conflict also brings shame of being a Guardia Mage, in his subtle ways to hide his allegiance in public.
Weapons - 2 Maximum:
Primary - Guardia Captain's Sword, an ornate long sword with an inscription on the blade that absorbs magic if used by the properly trained.
Secondary - Guardia Mage's Wand, a short wand given to all Mages upon successful completion of their training. This wand allows for basic control in Black Magic, though specialization magics are not limited by this wand.
Specialty Magic - 2 Maximum(Magic Ability with: Profession Skill OR Another Magic Abilitiy):
Qori Summoning - Based upon their surroundings, the Summon ability creates creatures from any element/item that the Summoner wishes.
Fire Magic [Guardia Training] - Fire Magic that can be casted at will. With Guardia Training, Mages can throw bolts of fire without the use of wands.


This is my profile of Roland "King" Zinfadiyl. I don't know if I should re-use this or just post my RP... But first a critique would be nice smile

Thanks!

Yeah, I'm seeing if I can make this into an RP here, I just want to take out an unnecessary element from the story. razz

I'd agree that it is a bit bunched up but its pretty good