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 Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2013 9:39 am
Not bad! I really like how you did the eyes. c:
I'm not the best artist, but I have some tips.
1: Since her face is head-on, her nose shouldn't look like it's sideways, a small little 'u' or something would work for a better nose, than the 'L' with head-on shots.
2. You should work on lighting and shadows. The only thing in this picture that seems to have it is the hair and eyes. The bow would look much better if it had darker parts to show it's folds and such. c: But it's pretty easy to learn once you get a hang of picking a source of light.
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Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2013 2:21 pm
I screenshotted your avi so that if you do want to change it, you're free do so. c:
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Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:51 pm
Awesome :3 Thank you so much :3strawberryalice I screenshotted your avi so that if you do want to change it, you're free do so. c:
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:45 am
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:47 am
Chemism Not bad! I really like how you did the eyes. c: I'm not the best artist, but I have some tips. 1: Since her face is head-on, her nose shouldn't look like it's sideways, a small little 'u' or something would work for a better nose, than the 'L' with head-on shots. 2. You should work on lighting and shadows. The only thing in this picture that seems to have it is the hair and eyes. The bow would look much better if it had darker parts to show it's folds and such. c: But it's pretty easy to learn once you get a hang of picking a source of light. I plan on watching some tutorials on lighting and will be taking in all feedback to practice. Thank you for your honesty and feedback. c: I always feel when drawing noses that it's awkward. I kind of rushed on that sample but I'm going to redo it from scratch and see how it turns out with smaller eyes, and lightin and shadows taken into effect.
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2013 12:21 am
Oooh, I love the avi emotion_bigheart So pretty emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2013 12:23 am
Thank you so much! heart emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2013 1:23 am
You're welcome- and it got so much more adorable and sensual! emotion_kirakira strawberryalice Thank you so much! heart emotion_kirakira
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