Welcome to Gaia! ::

Silver Moon Poetry

Back to Guilds

Poetry is what gets lost in translation ~Robert Frost~ 

Tags: poetry, writting, lyrics, haiku, poem 

Reply [[POETRY]] - {{Misc.}}
What I deserve Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Ferret Anon

7,650 Points
  • Nudist Colony 200
  • Peoplewatcher 100
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:08 am


>.< Lotsa problems. I misspelled loud. Stupid computer just because they're both words doesnt mean it's right!! I'll fix it...
oh shiz you're right. Thanks for catching the "cast" and tense. thanks agian for all the help.

Yeah it was more or less, "How can you deny there is a God when I have had such an experiance?". She said something along that lines, and specifically brought up the two religions as wrong for doubting or not having a god. Siiigh we spent a whole hour on the subject...

Yeah I prefer to write with inspiration because I find good ideas just pour in one after another. I admire people who can write well with tank on empty.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:22 pm


Sylphiah
>.< Lotsa problems. I misspelled loud. Stupid computer just because they're both words doesnt mean it's right!! I'll fix it...
oh shiz you're right. Thanks for catching the "cast" and tense. thanks agian for all the help.

Yeah, that's the problem with spell checks. They don't clear out all the typos. Anyway, I should have guessed you meant "loud," though. The context made it pretty obvious. Now I feel particularly braind dead.

And no problem. ^^


Sylphiah
Yeah it was more or less, "How can you deny there is a God when I have had such an experiance?". She said something along that lines, and specifically brought up the two religions as wrong for doubting or not having a god. Siiigh we spent a whole hour on the subject...

Ah, she's one of the "my personal experience is proof of the supernatural" types. Fun. That argument always makes me laugh, though, because there are people who "experience" alien abductions and encounters with ghosts and any other number of weird, unprovable things, yet I'm sure your teacher would write them off as crazy. Anyway, if she ever tries to take up class time with her own personal opinions, you or your parents or someone should probably complain to the principal or something. She really doesn't have the right to waste class time like that.

Sylphiah
Yeah I prefer to write with inspiration because I find good ideas just pour in one after another. I admire people who can write well with tank on empty.

Inspiration makes things flow better, that's for sure.

haunting heaven

Prodigal Mage


LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:50 pm


I don't know to much about sonnets. -_-

But "Oh fatal lust why must you be a sin?" that really stuck out for me. heart
PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:14 pm


^^ That's okay. Thanks for the compliment

Ferret Anon

7,650 Points
  • Nudist Colony 200
  • Peoplewatcher 100
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
Reply
[[POETRY]] - {{Misc.}}

Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum