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 Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:13 pm
"Either way it was funny." I smiled he's a big dork but I like him for that. I was able to find 20 names. "We've got our first people." I showed him the list.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:27 pm
Shinji read the list of names. "So do we go and find these people, or are they coming to us?"
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Ace The Black Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:30 pm
"These are people were going to ahve to fidn I haven't told the people to find us I told them we'll seek them out." He nodded we gathered up what belonging we had. (for me nothing hardly)
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:56 pm
It wasn't a bad thing to have to seek these people out, but Shinji would have prefered it if they didn't have to wander around to find these people. For all he knew, they might not even live in Midgar. (After all, Shinra did have influences all around the world...) He gathered his things, which were his pistol, his chunk of fire materia, and his combat jacket.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:02 pm
I had a jacket a PDA and that was it. The whole day we found the people nerby we ended up only getting 10 people the other people would have to wait. We found another hotel to stay in that night. I looked outside. Thinking hard about everything.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:09 pm
Shinji wasn't used to all the moving around. It had been a long time since he had to move around so much. But it didn't matter so much to him at the moment. He kept dwelling on the idea of helping those who the Shinra had hurt. The ruin they had created was widespread. He didn't know how many people could be helped. If possible, Shinji would want to help them all, but without knowing how many people needed help, that goal was far from reachable at the time.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:15 pm
Well a few nights passed with same format get some names find a few people give them some money and repeat until you find a hotel. Well it was a week in. I was out on the blacony type thing. Looking at the sky. Then all the sudden I hit the floor. It felt like cardiac arrest. I spit blood and gasped for air. Shinji ran out onto the balcony. It was starting..
"s**t....." was all I could say before more blood came up.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:21 pm
Needless to say, Shinji was freaked out. At first, he was to freaked out to realize what could be happening. Then it hit him. (The stigma...) All he could do at the time was help Deneria to a bed, help her clean off the blood, and hope that medical facility could find a cure in time.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:27 pm
I stopped spitting up blood but I went into cold sweats. Shinji was holding me but needless to say it wasn't going to fix anything. The next morning all I could do was sleep. I woke up at random intervals but I culdn't stay awake for long I couldn't eat much either. Shinji just looked so damn worried.
"I'm gonna be ok I have faith in them you should to." I said very weakly but still smiling.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:45 pm
Try as he might, Shinji couldn't erase the look of worry from his face. He wanted to think, to believe that Deneria would be ok, but miracles weren't something that often happened in his life.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:59 pm
I grabbed his hand. We waited to hear word from the medical specialist. Latley I don't wake up for days. I can't stay up for more then 3 seconds without pain. It's getting worse I did wake and I looked at a calender. OMG two days left till the month was over. I belive I'm in a hospital now. Shinji was sitting next to me. It looked liked he'd been crying. I felt pain coming again I grabbed my chest. It was far worse then the others.
"Kiss me..." which he did. Then i felt pain but I lost my grip. "Goodbye..." Then I shut my eyes.
(For the sake of finishing this rp)
~Shinji's view~
There she goes. I burst into tears. Three doctors rushed over and put a needle in her arm. Liquid flowed out of it.
"I think it's to late." I choked out.Then the monitorpicked up she gained some color I think I saw some of the stigma disapper. She woke up.
"I'm alive?" Then i hugged her tightly.
"Shinji your breaking my back." I let go before I killed her.
"Well I've gotten my second chance now lets help the other stigma people." All I could do was smile.
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