They are nice pictures... But you really need to work on the hands. The hands look too flat.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=6736667And for some kissing scenes, if you want to make one really hot, here is a link:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=6736667And a link to help with perspective since one of the pictures looked a little off with it. It wasn't compleatley bad, but it was kind of noticable for me.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=4327185It's very nice, but the hands unfortunaitly kind of ruin the drawing. It's ok, I myself and many other artests have a huge problem drawing hands. One of the reasons is because our hands have the most bones. And with most people, the hardest things to draw is the head and or hands, the head having many complicaited muscels. It just takes some time and practice. Well, I hope that these links will help you.
Oh and Gaia doesn't allow any rated r things even if it is through pm. It is only because Gaia has to protect minors from perverted ***** who want to be sick freaks.