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 Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:13 pm
Alright I just got off of the phone with Greg and his judgment stands, and I'm just letting you know, he aint going to waver on this Orchid, so the best I can say is suck it up, make you RPC atleast 18 and just deal with it. Akura prepare yourself, because Gregar's wrath is coming your way next, he said he's going to have a talk with you about that Hokage's age.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:34 pm
Gregar828 @Kumari: Were you accepted for Aburame? Darkness is not a chakra element. Add shinobi special skills. That weapon..........It makes no sense. That wouldnt even be a weapon, thats more like a custom technology. And any weapon that has a special ability must be submitted as a custom weapon. 1. Yes I was accepted for the Aburame clan. 2. I will look. 3. It is a custom technology and I got it approved and will work with that. PS Please spell "Kumurai" correctly.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:44 pm
fox_demon_nightmare2 I know that Senada is not a clan in naruto, but i do not want to be part of a Original clan from the series because it doesn't go with me all to well. Then leave it off, follow the rules... fox_demon_nightmare2 Senada would have been my own custom clan if you would allow me to create it, but it seems like that is not the case at the moment. Because too many clans are already in the guild, join one of the custom made clans that are not within the anime... or just own with a non clanner. fox_demon_nightmare2 I didn't add special skills because i wanted to develop them while rping. special skills are what you get from your Shinobi type/class, and your clan/bloodline/demon... fox_demon_nightmare2 And for the Taijutsu, a Taijutsu learner, should have at least the basics of the style they are learning or at least one of their styles technique. You start out as a Raw student... Like a newborn. When you are born you don't come out spouting off famous literature, or the language that will become your primary language... So you know nothing, besides the three basic jutsu, be happy you have those, those are something that Rock lee couldn't learn.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:49 pm
Wow guys, I'm quite surprised at the nerve to challenge the guy who has been approving these profiles for, oh, OVER 50 PAGES NOW. I'll say this once, do not try and correct me when I make a judgement about something like this.
@Foxdemon: I know senada is your last name, but that does nt make it a clan. You only put your clan there if it gave you clan jutsu and raised your chakra. For simplicity, please take it off.
Special skills are what you inherently get based from your ninja types, you dont develop them. Please put them down.
YOU START WITH NOTHING EXCEPT THE BASIC 3 NINJUTSU. Thats how it's been, thats how it's gonna stay.
@Akura: Dont do that again, all you are doing is creating unnecesary OOC that makes it harder for me to read the profiles.
Also, that is incorrect. Gaara was 13 in the first arc, and 16 as Kazekage. This would still be extremely young, except for the fact that he possessed the Shukaku, and had access to all it's abilities, making him mush stronger than any average shinobi. But since we have no Jinchuuriki Kage's, 16 is still to young.
@Malfrost:...............no, I said I would have a talk with the HOKAGE about his age. You misheard (thats what you get for calling me while I'm driving)
@Orchid: I had been aware of the 17 year old Raikage and 16 Tsuchikage, but a 15 year old Hokage? I think I'll have to have a talk with all the Kage's about ages, as well as the other auto ranks.
And for the age, a 14 year old Kage is the equivalent of a 4 year old academy student (Probably even lower age than that). I dont care How much talent, discipline, training, determination, or willpower any shinobi has, NO ONE CAN BECOME A KAGE LEVEL SHINOBI AT AGE 14. When the Konoha council was deciding on a Hokage in tsunade's absence, The Konoha Council thought Kakashi would be "Quite Young" to take the job, and hes 30 years old! Even Minato was at least 24 years old at the time he was Hokage. The only Kages who were named Kage that weren't in their 20's were Gaara and possibly the Yondaime Mizukage Yagura, both of which were Jinchuuriki. So no, I will not allow a 14 year old Kage. THE ABSOLUTE MINIMUM is now set to 18, and I will be PMing all other Kage's about this (if they arent reading it already). My descision is final.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:51 pm
IF YOUR NAME IS NOT GREGAR828, DO NOT COMMENT ON PROFILES!!!!!!! IT CREATES TOO MUCH OOC!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:20 pm
Alright I'll change my age to 18 then, also Shira's rpc will have to change her age since she's the older sister..
Now that all that is settled are my jutsus ok now?
(will edit age after this post)
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:34 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:51 pm
Well.......theres so much OOC that is's been pushed back to where I cannot see it in the "post reply" menu. Please repost.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:12 pm
I'm sorry, but the ninjutsu used to repair the gourd would have to count as well, despite it being only in conjunction with that weapon.
For element control, please specify sand defensive or offensive as the element.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:18 pm
The one for the gourd isn't learned yet >.<
>.< but you said i can have element control for ether Sand Ninjutsu or Sand genjutsu when we talked about it... wow nothing is going how people originally told me..
Ill pick a different ninja type then...
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:23 pm
I think I've discussed this with you multiple times. This will be the last time I say it: SAND OFFENSIVE AND SAND DEFENSIVE ARE DIFFERENT ELEMENTS THE SAME WAY FIRE AND WATER ARE DIFFERENT ELEMENTS. The only way you could have elemental control for both is is elemental control way your only ninja type.
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:31 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:14 pm
Zane Hajime
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Zane Hajime
Nicknames: Terror of the Dunes
Age: 23
Birthdate: 12/17
Gender: Male
Village Sunagakure
Race: Hispanic
Rank: Kazekage
Shinobi Profession: Kazekage
Ninja Type: Medic, Elemental Control (Sand Offensive)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: Puppet Petrification
Current Bloodline Stage: Head
Chakra Color: Crimson
Chakra Level: High
Chakra Element: Medical, Sand, Wind
Battle Strength: Sand jutsus, Puppetry, Medical Jutsus
Battle Weakness: Fire and Ice
Fights Won: 12
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. Increased medical abilities, including restoration (healing), medical attacks, and medical knowledge. The ninja also learns medical jutsu faster then most ninja, and has slightly increased regenerative capability.
2. Elemental prowess over Sand +1 rank to jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element
-Completed Missions-
S Rank: 3
A Rank: 5
B Rank: 7
C Rank: 6
D Rank: 20
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type: Puppets
Boss Summoning: N/A
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Head
Headband Style: Standard
Headband Color: Brown
Flack Jacket Style: N/A
Flak Jacket Color: N/A
Backpack Style: Standard
Backpack Color: Black
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: Back hip
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Brown
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
-Tenkuu Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Walking on Air)
-Kage Bunshin No Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Ninjutsu
Medical (Mastery):
-Shindan (Diagnosis)
-Life Preservation Technique [Ichimei Hoyou no Jutsu]
-Quarantine Technique [Shadan no Jutsu]
-Kiyomaru (Cleanse)
-Shiatsu (Massage)
-Teikouryoku (Power of Resistance)
-Tekishutsu (Extraction)
-Gantai no Jutsu (Bandage Skill)
-Fleshbinding Technique [Ikimi Baindingu no Jutsu ]
-Fleshrending Technique [Ikimi Tekiyaku no Jutsu]
-Numbing Technique [Jinto no Jutsu]
-Sansokyoukyuu(Oxygen Supply)
-Keksuki Gyouko (Blood Coagulation)
-Jokyo Dokubutsu (Poison Removal)
-Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui (Healing Hands Technique: Minor)
-Anatomic Analysis Skill [Kaibougaku Aneraiza no Justu]
-Circle of Restoration [Bankai no En]
-Circle of Regeneration [Taisha no En]
-Ondochousetsu (Temperature Control)
-Summon Medical Tools
-Kigusuri Souzou (Medicine Creation)
-Chishio Tensou no Jutsu (Blood Transfusion Skill)
-Chiyute no Jutsu (Healing Hands Technique)
-Chakra Enjintou (Chakra Scalpel)
-Zesshi Nensan (Fanged Tongue Acid)
-Souzou Dokubutsu (Poison Creation)
-Chakra Senshin (Chakra Concentration)
-Hone Chiyu no jutsu (Bone Healer Skill)
-Chakra Poisoning Technique [Chakra Gekiyaku no Jutsu]
-Dead Soul Skill [Shikon no Jutsu]
-Life Link [Itonami Musubu no Jutsu]
-Hekirekite no Jutsu (Thunder Hands Technique)
-Satsugaite no Jutsu (Killing Hands Technique)
-Chuusuusei Shikeikiden (Central Nervous System Electrical Shock)
-Chiyute No Jutsu: Ichidanto (Healing Hands Technique: Major)
-Ninja Kigusuri Souzou (Ninja Medicine Creation)
-Saisei no Saibou (Cell Regeneration)
-Biransei no Jutsu (Poison Gas Technique)
-Shinzou no Suiryoku no Jutsu (Heart thrust skill)
-Shinreitejutsu (Psychic Surgery)
-Saisei (Regeneration)
-Shinkeitsuu (Neuralgia)
-Circle of Enlightenment
-Souzousaisei (Genesis Rebirth)
Wind
-Boufuu Bakuhatsu Bunshin no Jutsu (Wind Explosion Clone)
-Kyoushu no Tosshin (Assassin’s Rush)
-Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
-Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
-Tei Hakusha (Air Riding)
-Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu (Low Air Pressure Technique)
-Tatsumaki Wana (Tornado Trap)
-Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo)
-Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Dragon)
Sand
-Suna Shoryu (Sand Dragon)
-Gakidou Sabaku (Hungry Desert)
-Chiisai Bunshin Yamada (Small Clone Projectiles)
-Sabaku Kyuu (Desert Coffin)
-Kyoubou Suna Arashi (Raging Sandstorm)
-Sabaku Sousou (Desert Funeral)
-Sabaku Bakuhatsu (Desert Explosion),
-Suna Arashi Bunshin (Sandstorm Clone)
-Ryuusa Bakuryuu (Quicksand Avalanche)
-Sabaku Taisou (Desert Imperial Funeral)
-Sabaku Kousenchitai no Jutsu (Desert Warzone),
-Sabaku Kyodaikaibutsu Nezame (Desert Behemoth Awakening)
-Suna Futoiude (Great Arm of Sand)
-Suna Tsuka (Sand Mound)
- Suna Shunshin (Sand Instantaneous Body Skill)
-Suna Taihou (Sand Cannon Technique)
Taijutsu Styles
-Infinite One Master (Co creator in Rp)
-Kugutsu Master (Bloodline)
Bloodline Jutsu:
* Water Jet - Fires a Powerful Jet of Water
Rank D
* Flamethrower - Creates a powerful jet of Flames.
Rank D
* Lightning Cannonball - Fires a Cannonball of Lightning.
Rank C
* Shuriken Cannon - Fires a round of Several Kunai's Harder to dodge than normal Kunai's.
Rank C
* Chakra Sheild - Blocks an Jutsu below B rank Will block up to three jutsu's lasts untill three jutsu's have been blocked. having the shield makes it harder to dodge so the jutsu's will hit the shield.
Rank B
* Field of Traps - Fires out a Web of Wire witch can hold the enemy and then will detonate causing alot of damage.
Rank B
* Crushing Pressured Water - Fires a Constant jet of Highly pressured water witch can cut through solid rock.
Rank A
* Jet of Fire - Fires a Jet of Fire witch can cut through solid rock also cause great damage.
Rank A
* Poison Mist's - Creates a mist of Poison witch can kill if inhaled (Takes 15 posts to kill) last's 5 post's Once the 5th Post is over the poison will be absorbed into the Skin of the enemy Shinobi. Doton Jutsu's Will absorb some poison's it would take two Doton jutsu's to completly absorb this jutsu, Fuuton jutsu's Simply spread the Poison's Katon Jutsu's will engluf the Poison's but not completly disperse it. Suiton Jutsu's do nothing to the poison's. unless its a suiton armour Jutsu.
Rank S
Puppets
Karasu - The Crow
Kuroari - Black Ant
Mokujin
Akagahara
Sanshouuo
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: Zane has a caring nature and has a strong urge to protect those close to him. Although he has a lot of potential, his lazy and carefree nature often gets in the way and he often avoids battles when possible. Despite this, he is ussually the first one to attack due to the fact that he would rather fight than let his squadmates fight.
Nindo: You don't need a reason to help people
Height: 5"9
Weight: 200
Original Eye Color: Red
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Background Information╫
Zane was originally a Mist shinobi, a carefree and rather lazy one at that. It was because his grandfather that he even joined the academy. During this time he befriended the Ushio clan, mainly Luo Ushio and became squadmates alongside Tares Damascus. As they progressed through the years and became stronger, Zane, Luo and LT became chuunins and it was now the time when they chose what kind of ninjas they wanted to be.
Unfortunately, his lack of knowing water jutsus prevented him from advancing in Kirigakure. With the permission of the Mizukage, Zane traveled to Suna in order to learn and master wind jutsus. While there, the Kazekage himself trained him in the art of puppetry and wind and sand jutsus. Taking it a step further, Zane experimented upon himself and became a puppet himself.
Years later, a plot to take down the Mizukage and the Kazekage simultaneously was deployed by a rogue group of shinobis who succeeded in this feat. Teaming up with another Mist shinobi and his best friend Luo Ushio, Zane defeated the rogue group and decided to become a traveler, and continue the training his former master and Kazekage began. After a long time of traveling, the Suna council finally found him and was offered the position of the new Kazekage.
As Zane prepares to begin his first day as the new Kazekage, he wonders how his best friend is doing back in Kirigakure. He will make sure that the ties between Kiri and Suna remain stronger than ever before.
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:15 am
Very nice, except.........Puppet petrification isnt a registered bloodline, therefore wouldnt give you high chakra.
We dont use the chakra control section underneath chakra color anymore.
Shinobi special skills are wrong.
Sand offensive and defensive are treated as two separate elements, and you have some from both.
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