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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:04 pm
{I will catch up on these tomorrow... sorry all, it's hard to approve everyone else's stuff and attempt to submit all my own. Doing the best I can before I have trained others to do it as I have.}
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 12:48 am
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|_________RPC Description & History________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Name: Yasukawa Zenko Nickname(s): N/A Age: 19 Birthdate: October 31st Gender: Female Sexuality: Bisexual Relationship Status: Single Ethnicity: Caucasian
Height: 1.65 m (5'5”) Weight: 48.6 kg (107 lbs) Body Build: Voluptuous, Toned Eye Color: Ocean Blue Hair Color: Purple
Physical Description: With clothes that just about stick to her figure, it's very hard to mistake her level of fitness. Absurdly toned muscles, in part due to her Konaga lineage, do their best to keep excess fat to a minimum, allowing her to show off her figure to its fullest. Zenko sports a healthy bust of 36DD, the cleavage of which is more often than not, exposed by a daringly open top. Further down, she has proportionately wide hips with a round bottom. Even though she has no problem with openly flaunting her looks, Zenko doesn't show that much skin. She fancies long skirts which usually fall to a foot above her heels, and at the front, it stops mid-thigh, allowing her legs more freedom than a normal, long skirt would. She has long, straight purple hair which flows level to her bottom, and a pair of ocean blue eyes.
Personality: Zenko isn't exactly the talkative type, and tends to keep quiet whenever it suits her. However, that doesn't mean that she's afraid to voice her opinion. She isn't afraid of anyone, despite how things may seem sometimes, and rarely holds respect, even for those that are higher than her. She's terribly interested in dark humor, and isn't aware of how taboo it may be to some people, because she simply doesn't care. The well-being of others isn't above her own.
Behavior: Alone, she likes to amuse herself with any type of scenario she can think of in her head, often times bordering on sexual themes. She knows that she looks good, and takes advantage of it when she can, often trying to worm her way out of getting things whenever possible. In combat, she likes to keep a humorous attitude most of the time, belittling her opponent, and keeping an open mind for any opening that she can abuse. Dirty blows aren't a problem for her, so often, she will aim for one's groin, or attack someone while their down. If one mentioned her conscience, she would mention that she is her own conscience, hence, she has no guilt for any action she does.
Nindo: “Rules are a binding contract, often, with no loopholes. If you choose to follow them, welcome their restrictions with open arms. I'll sit over there and revel in my complete freedom.”
Theme song: Paralyzer – Finger Eleven
Character History: [x]
Village: Otogakure Akatsuki
Rank: Chuunin
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Ninja Characteristics & Shinobi Skills__________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Clan/Bloodline: Konaga – [x] Stage: N/A
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Tweak: Drop Kenjutsu ( B-Rank) for Taijutsu.
Attributes:
Primary Attribute: Sexy
Benefit: Ninja with this attribute are so attractive, that anyone who would normally be attracted to the user`s gender will be unable to lie to the user, and will be much more likely to believe what the Sexy Ninja is saying. This makes any Genjutsu used by a Sexy ninja to act as if it were one rank stronger against a susceptible foe.
Combat Ability: Once per combat, a sexy Ninja can utilize the "Sexy Barrage" ability, a pose or otherwise flirtation to distract and knock the opponent off balance, thus gaining the upper hand. The sexy barrage works to make an opponent's attack miss, or mesmerize their opponent long enough to give them a higher chance of getting their own attack to hit their enemy.
Secondary Attribute: Speed
Benefit: Speed Ninja receive a +1 rank bonus to their speed, but can even outperform those above their rank by a fair amount. As a Genin, they would be faster in their movements then even the average Chuunin, requiring somewhat of Sp. Jounin to keep up with or catch up to them. Their speed makes their movements blindingly fast, but it does not increase their reaction speed, and therefore does not increase their ability to evade incoming attacks. Higher level ninja with this attribute have been described as simply disappearing only to re-appear closer without showing any sign of movement in between.
However, not just movement speed is enhanced, but attack speed and tactile manipulation as well. With such an increase to the movement speed of their arms and hands, the deadliness of their strikes is enhanced, making such attacks difficult to keep up with as their movements seem like only a blur.
Tertiary Attribute: Toughness
→ Even as a woman, Zenko knows how to take a hit, mostly due to her Konaga genes, but that's not the point.
Specialties:
Tactical Support: All techniques, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu/Bloodline etc... require 3 fewer posts to learn. In combat, they are particularly adept at evading incoming attacks (+1 to Evade) and they can easily identify the tactics and abilities being used by their opponents in combat (allowing them to identify tactical maneuvers and the breadth and power of the jutsu an enemy is signing). Teammates under a tactical support specialist's leadership gain +1 rank bonus to Evasion and Speed, and can combo more effectively, allowing their allies perform two jutsu per post... so long as they have had the plan laid out to them directly.
Combo: Whereas the average shinobi can only perform a single Nin-/Gen-/Tai-/Ken-jutsu in a post, Combo Specialists can perform 2 such jutsu in any combination they wish. In addition to this, when jutsu are performed back to back, one immediately after the other, both attacks always occur. The first attack can be blocked, dodged, or parried, but it cannot be negated or diverted in such a way that the second attack no longer occurs. The second attack always occurs after the first, making the Combo Specialist's opponent forced to deal with both attacks.
# Chakra Elements: 3
Primary --> Raiton Secondary --> Suiton Tertiary --> Fuuton (Jounin)
Chakra Color: Purple
Total Chakra: ∞ Total Stamina: 85
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|______Squad Information & Mission Logs____________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Squad Name/number: N/A Sensei: Konaga Sai Team Mate: N/A Team Mate: N/A
Completed Missions Log:
Total Mission Points (MP) acquired: N/A
E-rank Missions: 0 D-rank Missions: 0 C-rank Missions: 0 B-rank Missions: 0 A-rank Missions: 0 S-rank Missions: 0
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|._______________Jutsu Information________________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Non-Elemental Rank E - (Basic)
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) • Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Untying Technique) • Anrokku no Jutsu (Unlocking Technique)
Rank D - (Genin)
• Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique) • Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique) • Kyou Masukingu No Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)
Rank C - (Chuunin)
• Suimen Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Water Walking)
Rank B - (Special Jounin)
• Sen Hokou no Jutsu (The Art of Wire Walking)
Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Raiton (Lightning) Rank E - (Basic)
• Yurayura Ranpu no Jutsu (Flickering Light Technique) • Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique) • Seiteki Suji no Jutsu (Static Strings Technique) • Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)
Rank D - (Genin)
• Heki no Jutsu (Burst Technique) • Kumo Keba no Jutsu (Cloud Wisp Technique) • Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill) • Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique) • Raikou Henge no Jutsu (Lightning Transformation Technique) • Raikou Jishaku no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Magnet) • Seiteki Chikara no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Static Force) • Denshi no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Electron Technique)
Rank C - (Chuunin)
• Dendou Kariyou no Jutsu (Electric Overdose Technique) • Kanri Soushitsu no Jutsu (Control Loss Technique) • Denki Hifu no Jutsu (Electric Skin Technique)
Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Suiton (Water) Rank E - (Basic)
• Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water) • Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique) • Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit) • Mist Clone • Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
Rank D - (Genin)
• Mizu Peretto (Water Pellet) • Mizutamari no Jutsu (Water Puddle Technique) • Suiton: Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique) • Isonagi no Jutsu (Beach Crab) • Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique)
Rank C - (Chuunin)
• Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Rank B - (Special Jounin)
• Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu (Mist Vision Technique)
Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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Bloodline Abilities
• Chakra Force – [x] • Chakra Speed – [x] • Chakra Strength – [x] • Chakra Blade – [x] • Chakra Sight – [x]
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|__________Taijutsu: Styles & Techniques____________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Taijutsu Styles Allowed: 2
Primary Style: Kunoichi Combat Style – [x] → Current level of Mastery: Stage 2 ( Mastered )
While the female body is not as strong as that of a male, the female has several attributes that make this style of fighting made specifically for their body type. If focuses on using the naturally shorter body as well as the flexibility and lightness of the frame. This style also does most of it's damage through kicks and pressure points.
Manuevers
• Split • Twist-dodge • Roundhouse • Light Feet • Leg Blocks • Karate Chop • ECT • Ear Clap • Die Foot Die • Hand-Trap • Back-flips • Spin-kick • Shock Absorber • Axe-kick • Light Feet Mastery • Hurricane Kick • Cat Landing • Twist-dodge Offensive
Special Techniques
• Chest Pressure Points • Leg Pressure Points • Arm Pressure Points • Back Pressure Points • Head Pressure Points ____________________________________
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|._______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|___________Kenjutsu & Custom Weapons____________./ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
._._._._._._._._._._._._._._|_______________________________________________. |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#|____________Apparel & Ninja Tools_________________/ |_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#_#| Headband Location | Style | Color: Hips | Belt | Black | Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | Black | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Thigh | Black
Kunai: 7 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 0 Makibishi: 0 Smoke Bomb: 3 Flash Bombs: 0
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Unrelinquished Despair Crew
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 4:15 am
Once again, I have no direct permission from Cobra to approve/disapprove any profile. However, I hope that this post poses no distraction.
- Don't forget to link your Character history thread with the title of the thread [In it's own sector (Character History smile ]
- [Konaga Fact:] Your eyes have the same color as your chakra. So, you cannot have blue eyes with purple chakra color.
- You have total Eighty-Five Stamina Points if you're a Chunin. You have a Stamina of two ranks higher, such the Stamina of a Jounin which equals 85 SP.
That's pretty much everything that came into my eye, just in case Cobra forgets any of those - Which I doubt.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 4:28 am
1.] I know, that's why I put a placeholder there. I'll link the history after I 'revamp' it, and come up with a name for the thread. =x
2.] Nay. The specific wording is "almost always," which doesn't mean 100%. Her eyes will take on the color of her chakra when she utilizes Chakra Sight, or any other ability in the future which might deal with the eyes.
3.] Derp, sorry about that. Was looking at the standard stamina system, and I always forget that Sp. Jounin is a rank.
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Unrelinquished Despair Crew
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 5:00 am
- Alright.
- Oh well, that's not important either way.
- Very well. So then, now wait for Cobra's decision and points.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:10 pm
Sosay: Sosay
- Please add Metric values for Height and Weight
- Please link the Uchiha Clan to your profile, and stage your 'Stage' as you current unlocked Tomoe.
- You DO NOT get a benefit from your Tertiary attribute... please read the rules on assigning attributes fully.
- You may want to re-think your specialties. PLEASE, it does not look like you carefully read the rules on Attributes or on Stacking. You CANNOT stack ninjutsu to be raised more then one rank, with the exception of the Elemental Master Class when they are surrounded by their element.
This means Offensive and Elelmental Master will clash and NOT stack for any Katon Offensive ninjutsu (essentially all Katon ninjutsu)
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:16 pm
Tra: Hyouzou
- Ranmaru may be undergoing a few edits for balance purposes. Nothing huge, but I'll be balancing against the other Doujutsu when I have time.
- As Summoner, It'd appreciate if you mentioned and linked your proposed summon.
- Unless I'm missing something, your Stamina = 25, not 27. Your tertiary attribute only applies to chakra.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:22 pm
Shira : Midori
- Please re-size your photo
- Your character History is meant to have a thread of it's own in the 'Life of a Shinobi Thread' pleas ecreate and link that thread to your profile.
- Your tweak needs to specify whether you are dropping your Ken or Taijutsu style and how many jutsu you receive from the tweak.
- Academy doesnt count as a rank... Your Chakra = 28
- You are also still allowed a custom Weapon, your profile says 0, it should be 1.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:30 pm
Fruity: Outou
- Please look at the custom weapons thread. A few points were brought up that I think you should comment on regarding your second heart.
- Please add english ht/wt values.
- You will be the last remnant of the Kurama clan, but I will say this to you... I expect you to use these abilities sparingly and fairly. In any case when you use a Genjutsu under the guise of your bloodline, you spend equal stamina to the chakra used and it cannot be an effect which is automatically attributed to the user... it must be an effect which can be dealt with in some way or another [Example, no imaging their skin and flesh covered in acid... only that a giant fireball is plummeting towards them through the sky. Also, it's limited to TANGIBLE effects. You cannot create real people or demons, etc... just elemental effects.]
- Cunning and Intricate deception will not stack effectively, but I guess you can say it gives genjutsu a slight boost more then normal. You may want to consider something else if the lack of stacking bothers you.
- When your summon is approved, link the approval.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:33 pm
Tares: Rios
- Yes, tertiary gives no benefit, but you still need to describe why it is your character's tertiary attribute and how it affects you.
- Yur custom weapon numbers are not filled out, please do so.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:37 pm
Entropy: Namaewa
- Please provide english values for ht/wt
- Just make the thread and link it please... it doesnt need your character's approval before being created... it can just be a blank thread if you like.
- GENIN... is spelled with one 'n', not two.
- Am I to assume that your account name used to be the person who invented this clan in VR? ... either way, you need to link it, and we reserve the right to make any changes to the clan we deem necessary for balancing purposes... just fyi.
- Your ninja apparel section was not filled out. Please do this.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:44 pm
Smexy: Soul
- Your character History is meant to have a thread of it's own in the 'Life of a Shinobi Thread' please create and link that thread to your profile.
- We have enough in Kiri, would you consider joining Suna?
- Smexy... please, you're wasting my time with this. Your Bijuu isn't approved, your Ninja Class info isn't filled out, My notes are still present all over your profile...
- Your specialty is a double posted Chakra Control... you didnt edit anything or put any effort into filling this profile out right. Its glaringly missing LARGE sections of data.
...and to top it all off, you didnt even post your profile in Document format.
READ THE RULES FOR SUBMITTING A PROFILE and re-apply... and erase the profile you submitted while you're at it.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:54 pm
Despair: Zenko
- (First off, awesome new pic... fits her well + sexy)
- For the record, Sai is your Sensei, and he would have taught you the majority of your Suiton techniques and your Konaga techniques.
- Gohan (crit) is right... please create and link your history thread (even if for the moment it is blank)
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 8:37 pm
[[Edited. the stamina thing was a mistake and i'm waiting for my summoning approval. i posted a link to the application, though. also, the Ranmaru thing doesn't bother me. i chose it, i might as well stick with it]]
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