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 Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:20 pm
@Vexin:  @Razor: Like I said, it's not the right profile skeleton. You can find the right one on the first page. @Tender: Repost your profile. You cant have two RPC's. @Food: Mist is closed. Choose Leaf or Rock. You need information for your headband. How could anyone use a 12 foot long scythe? Lower the makibishi count to 20 at most. @Shinigami: Specify between the skills of stealth and support. (No listing a shinobi special skill as "can use jutsu while remaining unnoticed" Lower the makibishi count. @Matthew: Put in the Inuzuka traits for shinobi special skills (not the speed one, that has to be taken out) You dont HAVE to list the dog as a weapon, but I guess you can. But you could list something else if you want.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:12 pm
Edited special skills, lowered makibishi count.
Just let me know if theres still something wrong with the special skills (:
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:29 pm
You need to list everything in parentheses under the Ninja types exactly as written as your Shinobi Special Skills.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 9:08 pm
Ah, thanks. I edited it. *crosses fingers* and a question: Do I need to take out the third Special Skill, since it was not in the parentheses, or is it fine the way it is?
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 9:13 pm
Name Here
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╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Hecmot Hyuga
Nicknames: Dusthawk
Age: 16
Birthdate: 3-16-1993
Gender: Male
VillageCloud village
Race: African american
Rank: Academy student
Shinobi Profession:Warrior,Messenger,Wandering merchant
Ninja Type/Class:Speed Ninja,Taijutsu Specialist
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Hyuga Clan
Current Bloodline Stage:1
Chakra Color: Sea green
Chakra Level: Medium
Battle Strength: Close combat,Fast moving battles,Versatile
Battle Weakness:Long ranged battles,Genjutsu
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.Versatile(Nearly instant reaction time from frontal attacks)
2.Sharp nerve (The faster the pace of the battle the more deadly he becomes)
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:none
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:
Headband Location:Forhead
Headband Style:Longer at back
Headband Color:Green
Flack Jacket Style:None
Flak Jacket Color:
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:
Weapon Range:
Special Abilities:none
Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade=
Makibishi=
Shuriken=
Light Bombs=
Kunai Holster Location:Hidden in left sleeve
Kunai Holster Color:Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:Right thigh
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:Light blue
Backpack Style:Single sling(Sorta like a sports bag)
Backpack Color:Blue with green flames
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Back of left thigh
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:Green
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:Smug,Honorable,Spiteful
Nindo:Your nothing if you cant defend those you care about
Height:6'1
Weight:174
Original Eye Color:brown
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╫Background Information:Hecmot is a complicated type of person.He tends to think of so many things at once that he is basically empty minded 80% of the time.But if you do manage to catch his attention in a negative way he will devote his next few thoughts on your demise.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:08 pm
Fixed, and it is an add on. The sythes poll screws on.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:21 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:58 am
He'll tell you if you are approved or not once he gets online...just be patient razz I've been waiting a couple days to get mine approved, so yeah, it might take a while.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:34 am
Etsushi Motarasu 
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Etsushi Motarasu
Nicknames: Etsu
Age: 17
Birthdate: June 22
Gender: Female
Village Sunagakure
Race: White/Asian
Rank: Chunnin
Shinobi Profession: Hunter Nin.
Ninja Type/Class: Chakra Control, Element Control: Sand
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Bloodline/Clan/Demon: None
Current Bloodline Stage: None
Chakra Color: Grey
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Element: Sand and Katon
Battle Strength: Chakra control, better use of sand element.
Battle Weakness:Wind and Water elements
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. (-2 posts for training, -1 Rank off Jutsu chakra cost, only for jutsu up to one rank higher than your current rank, Kage level jutsus never receive a decrease in jutsu rank for the purposes of chakra cost)
2.(-3 posts learning of jutsu of their element, +1 rank to jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element)
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫Headband Location: Left bicep
Headband Style: Regular
Headband Color: Black
Flack Jacket Style: None
Flak Jacket Color: None
Weapon Class:Standard Ninja weaponry.
Name of weapon: Sand Gourd
Who owns the weapon: Sand Element Shinobi
Where it was found/Who made it: The user infuses their chakra into the materials used to make the gourd.
The Range of the weapon: N/A
Weakness: Takes one jounin level water jutsu to destroy the gourd along with hard blows to it... see below.
Description: When the users Gourd was created, he/she infused his/her chakra into the materials used to make it. This gourd is no different from other gourds except for its ability to reform its self when broken. When broken, the gourd will change into sand that cannot be used for jutsus but it will not just fall apart. The gourd will keep its shape until 45% of it is cracked/ destroyed. If it is cut in half horizontally, the top half will turn into sand and no longer hold shape. If it is cut vertically, both half's will turn to sand and no longer be able to hold its shape.
The gourd can also be used to soften blows to the back of the user or if the gourd is moved to block a physical attack the same effect will happen.
(this can only happen is 50% or more of the gourd if full of sand)
Name: Gourd Reconstruction
Description: Due to the users Gourd being infused with chakra it is able to reform with the cost of chakra. This is a passive ability once learned. It requires 5 posts of forcing the gourd to reform, after the first time it requires 1 post to reform. During those 5 posts it costs the normal cost plus a additional 2 chakra per post.
Chakra Cost: 4
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 10
Makibishi= 20
Shuriken= 20
Light Bombs=10
Kunai Holster Location: Right thigh
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Pouch is located around her waist
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Red
Backpack Style: Messenger Bag
Backpack Color: Red
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Technique List╫Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
Muki Suna Kaishin (Inorganic Sand Conversion)
Suna Tegakari Fukikesu (Sand Track Eraser)
Suna Kojinmari no Jutsu (Sand Compaction Technique)
Daisan no Me (The Third Eye)
Suna no Yoroi (Sand Armour)
Suna Hogo Sochi no Jutsu (Sand Shield)
Suna Ouchi (Sand Pit)
Tsuitou Suna (Tracking Sand)
Koton:
Ichi (Fire Release: One)
Shoumeidan no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flare Technique)
Shuriken no Jutsu (Fire Release: Shuriken Technique)
Fukumen no Jutsu (Fire Release: Veil Technique)
Tanebi no Jutsu (Fire Release: Cinder Technique)
Houka Hira no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flaming Palm Technique)
Ni (Fire Release: Two)
Katon Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique)
Katon: Hoteri Ougigata no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flash Fan Technique)
Katon: Bounetsu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame-Resistance Technique)
Katon: Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique)
Katon: Hi Shinten no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame Spread Technique)
Genjutsu
Suna Arashi no Shinto (Deadly Sand Storm)
Hada no Kamereon (Chameleon Skin)
Suna Arashi no Odokemono (Trickster’s Sand Storm)
Ussou Kabe (Impenetrable Wall)
Saboten Uchinuku Meimu (Cactus Punch Illusion)
Suna no Akushumi (Taste of Sand)
Kaze no Totsunyuu (Rushing Winds)
Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu (False Strike Technique)
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Character Description╫
Personality: Etsushi is cold, dark, and a sadist going as far as to have hematolagnia (arousal at the sight of blood. Or having pleasure at the sight, taste, touch, or smell of blood). She cares for no one but her sister (Shi Motarasu) whom she has a great attachment to. She is ruthless, lacking emotions that people are born with (happiness, sadness, anger) and the only emotion she shows is toward her sister whom she loves despite the lack of her feelings. She would kill anybody that hurt her sister.
Nindo: So what if you can see the darkest side of me. No one can ever tame this animal I have become.
Height:5,5"
Weight: 105lbs
Original Eye Color: White. Now green.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Background Information╫
Not much is known about Etsushi's past. She doesn't talk about it, and the people the where there to see her past, already know what it is, so they don't talk about it either.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:01 pm
( greg i told shira about how sand element works >.< so no worries on that )
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 3:11 pm
Tender Sweets Tender Sweets Sora Saito <
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Sora Saito
Nicknames: NA
Age: twelve
Birthdate: june tenth
Gender: Male
Village Konoha
Race: half Asian half white
Rank: academy student
Shinobi Profession: Fighter
Ninja Type/Class: tactical, close combat
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Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Saito
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color: orange
Chakra Level: medium
Chakra Element: wind
Battle Strength: tactics, taijutsu
Battle Weakness: Genjutsu
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. can use water ninjutsu at accurate level
2. skilled in taijutsu
3. great chakra control.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Around neck loosely
Headband Style: plain
Headband Color: charcoal
Flack Jacket Style: NA
Flak Jacket Color: NA
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Katana
Weapon Range: close range
Special Abilities: NA
Weapon Location: sheathed at back
Exploding Smoke Grenade=<6>
Makibishi= 0
Shuriken= 3
Light Bombs= 5
Kunai Holster Location: leg
Kunai Holster Color: charcoal
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: waist
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: charcoal
Backpack Style: normal
Backpack Color: navy
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: NA
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:NA
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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Personality: quiet, shy and to himself however on the other side of the coin he's very determined and serious the majority of the time. He knows how to keep himself going.
Nindo: “There is no right, there is no Wrong, the only thing that matters is what you can create yourself”
Height: 5”0
Weight: 90lbs
Original Eye Color: green
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Sora is the older of identical twins by two minutes. His mother was an imigrant to move to the leaf village when she was young, it was here that she fell in love and started a dojo with the very man. She taught weapon classes and He taught taijutsu, it was a private dojo.
Sora has been working there with his parents since he was old enough to walk, his main job is to polish weapons and mop the floors, but durring classes he joins in to train in various subjects. From the day he was born his parents expected great things of him in his future life as a ninja, because of that, and the need to drive himself he's been studying ever since he knew how. Now that he's enrolled in the academy his work drive has only tripled.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 6:44 pm
@Shinigami: @Razor: List your shinobi special skills. How can a sword be 30 inches wide but 13 inches in length? That just doesnt seem to work. @Food: If your scythe has an add on to make it longer, it should be submitted as a custom weapon. But the point is, how would it be possible for anyone under 9 feet tall to be able to use it? @Shira: Your jutsus are wrong slightly. Here are the rules for chuunin auto ranks (And before anyone else jumps up, she was approved as an auto rank a while ago) Chuunins: A) You are allowed to know up to chuunin of 1 village taijutsu style. If your specialty is taijutsu then you are allowed to know up to chuunin of all the taijutsu styles of your village B) You can know up to chuunin of one element. If you specialize in ninjutsu you can be a master of that elemental ninjutsu. If you specialize in genjutsu then it will be up chuunin of that elemental genjutsu C) In addition to that you can add a total of 10 jutsus that are not of your mastered element. @Tender: Your shinobi special skills are wrong. Saito is not a clan, therefore does not give medium chakra. A clan is something you apply for, like inuzuka or aburame.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 7:30 pm
Tender:what stage in your bloodline are you in
Shira biggrin id some one autorank you,cuz im the kazekage and no one told me you were a chuunin, but besides that everything is good
Razor biggrin id you get that custom weapon approved?
You biggrin id you get that custom weapon approved?
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 7:42 pm
Misa, I already commented on these, so please dont. Shira has been auto ranked.
Also, while crew now has free range for now, it was still stated that profiles and auto ranks would be handled by lance and malfrost only.
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 7:55 pm
o sorry and i didnt know about shira
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