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Tentaigo

PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 2:43 am


Character Name: Hatori Rango the Flame Emperor

Technique Name: Ryūsui Seikūken
Description: Using all the principle behind his speed and reflexes. Hatori dodges all hand to hand combat, attacks by mere millimeters from his body. By moving his feet super fast, avoiding punches, elbows, kicks, barrage hit(s), from hand to hand combat attacks. Increasing his reflexes during versatile close combat to react to attacks in point blank range. Only works on opponent's below his tier in [Speed]. Doesn't work against opponents in his tiers [Speed].
Trait(s): n/a
Effect: Buff
Range: Millimeters
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 2
Cost: [50] Stamina
Base: Speed
Profile Link: [ x ]



Character Name: Rango Hatori ''The Flame Emperor'
Technique Name: Second Secret Sword: Thunderbolt In Extreme Winter
Description: His second original swordsman style. Known to be a particularly lethal technique. Using a sword, Hatori pierces through the muscle with full force, directly striking the liver. Due to internal bleeding the [damage] from this attack lasts [3] of his opponents turns. A Damage Over Time [aka DOT] technique. Damage does + 75 when he's attacking with strength.
Trait(s): Primary Weapon: Swords
Effect: DOT | Offense | Buff
Range: Point Blank Range
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 3
Base: Strength
Cost: [75] Stamina
Profile Link: [ x ]


Character Name: Rango Hatori 'The Flame Emperor
Technique Name: Third Secret Sword: Heaven-Clad Null Shroud
Description: His third original swordsman style. Hatori counters the opponents attack. With minimal movement using his own sword attack. Upping the cutting edge speed of the blade, due to no wasted movement during the attack. Damage does + 75 when he's attacking with strength.
Trait(s): Primary Weapon: Swords
Effect: Offense | Buff
Range: Length of his sword attacking
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 3
Base: Speed
Cost: [75] Stamina
Profile Link: [ x ]



Character Name: Rango Hatori 'The Flame Emperor
Technique Name: Cosmic Burning Horse Hoof Death Attack
Description: Hatori the Flame Emperor, is a Logia, who ate the Mera Mera no mi. Hatori emits fire out both his eye(s) at a target like [2] small laser beams. With strong enough burning that burns severe on flesh. The [2] fire laser beams size is as big as his eyes, and travels 25 ft straight-lined in front of him. Damage does + 25 when he's attacking with prowess.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Offense | Buff
Range: 25ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 1
Cost: [25] Stamina
Base: Prowess
Profile Link: [ x ]



Character Name: Rango Hatori 'The Flame Emperor
Technique Name: Flame Emperor of the Remnant Flame, East: Rising Sun Edge
Description: Hatori the Flame Emperor, is a Logia, who ate the Mera Mera no mi. Using his Mera Mera powers Hatori expels flames from his feet, directed behind him. This allows him to achieve flight in any direction. Hatori's flying speed is based on his [speed].
Trait(s): Devil Fruit |
Effect: ---
Range: n/A
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 1
Cost: [25] Stamina
Base: Speed
Profile Link: [ x ]





Ryunosuke Ryusei
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 10:28 am


Character Name: Sonny

Technique Name: Bendiciones de Dios
Description: The basic function of the Hana Hana no Mi grants the consumer the ability to replicate or sprout their limbs from the surface of any object or living thing. In exchange for a such a power, any damage taken by the conjured limbs reflect on the user's actual limbs. The amount of limbs able to be sprouted are 25 at base and increase by 5 every tier, and any technique Sonny is able to do using his limbs, any sprouted limbs are able to use as well. However, should the person he aims to sprout limbs from be faster than he himself can react he will be unable to sprout limbs from their body.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit | Primary Weapon : Close Quarters Combat
Effect: Upcast | AoE
Range: 20 - 100 ft. Radius
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 1 - 5
Cost 25 - 200
Base: Strength

DC: You think you finna sprout 400 limbs?!?! Nawh fam. They can increase by increments of five and you need some way for people to be able to dodge, because they can.
Jubei: Fixed.
DC: This is written weird. He himself can react? Meaning if he can react normally he's caught? This is written as an autohit and is currently pending.

Technique Name: Reverencia
Description: After placing his opponent in a hold of some sort, he commands the limbs to sprain the targeted area . The pain of the injury will ensue for a total of 3 posts inflicting damage equal to [Strength Stat + 50] and [-50 Speed] to the afflicted area.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit | Primary Weapon : Close Quarters Combat
Effect: Debuff | DoT
Range: N/A
Duration: 3 Post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50
Base: Strength

DC: Break a bone?! Nawh. We're disallowing this. Currently denied.
Jubei: Fixed.
DC: The damage of this level and the debuff outweigh what you're allowed to do. Denied. Redo with proper edits.

Technique Name: Renacido
Description: In the event of a loss of a limb, Sonny can put his devil fruit powers to use by creating a limb in it's place. Many smaller limbs will sprout from the stump of the missing limb, coming together to form an entirely new limb.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Regeneration
Range: N/A
Duration: Instant Use
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: N/A

Technique Name: Illuminati
Description: With Sonny's ability to replicate or sprout any part of his body through the use of his Devil Fruit, he creates a single eyeball in the sky giving him a birds eye view of the ground and allows him to watch his blind spots.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: AoE | Sensory
Range: 80 ft.
Duration: 3 Post
Tier: 4
Cost 100
Base: N/A


DC: Why would this eyeball float in mid air? Pending.
Jubei: Okay, scratch that.

Technique Name: Lunas Gemelas
Description: Putting his Devil Fruit abilities to use, Sonny is able to sprout a full body clone of himself. If he so chooses, he can sprout the clone from the body of a living being ie; himself or his opponent. Sonny and the clone can see what the other sees, and the clone can use any techniques Sonny himself is capable of. This does not duplicate any items or weapons Sonny carries with him.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: N/A
Range: 25 ft.
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: N/A

DC: This has no way to be dodged. It's written as an autohit. You gotta fix your wording. Pending.
Profile Link: [ x ]


Jubellation

Jubellation

Genius


Orphen Darkfire

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 4:01 pm


Character Name: Alicia Bloodfallen

Technique Name: Gatling Palm
Description: The user will extend their arm and face their palm towards a target(s) and a opening will appear in the middle of their palm. Inside the opening is a servant holding a Gatling gun both created from the castle fruits special liquid would be aiming towards the target and will begin firing. Once the bullets leave a special pinkish layer or aura around their body the bullets will return to normal size which will be in the form of a barrage of bullets towards the target(s), when leaving the aura the bullets won't lose any speed while heading towards their targets. The user can move their arm and hand in different angles to attack multiple targets from the side or in the air, the servant in the castle won't be affected by the movements as movement from the outside does not affect the inside of the castle. This uses her prowess [+25 Prowess] as damage.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage
Range: 25ft
Duration: 1
Tier: 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Approved
OD Fixed

Technique Name: Castle Defense
Description: After consuming the castle fruit she has become a fortress human and can turn her whole body and clothes into castles stone, her body and clothes will also also have a brick like formation shown on her. This stone fortress body is based on her defense [+25 Defense] and can even protect against attacks that would normally break stone if her defense is high enough. While in this stone form she can still move and does not feel any deference in weight to her normal body allowing her to jump or use this in the air without crashing or being weighted down.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Defense
Range: Self
Duration: 1
Tier: 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Defense

Ryu: Approved.

Technique Name: Firing Squads
Description: She is able to create multiple opening anywhere on and around her body even her eyes this can be used to cover 360 degrees around her body by opening different opening all around her body. As it can cover 360 degrees the user can have servants in opening in the 360 degrees on her body firing in all directions. Each opening will have 1-3 servants each with a rifle both created from the special liquid from her fruit, the servants aim at her target(s) and fire then when the bullets leave the special pinkish layer of aura around her body the bullets turn to normal size without losing any speed while heading towards their targets.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage | AoE
Range: 30ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 3
Cost 75 Stamina
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Denied. still written as an upcast
OD: Now I believe I fixed it.

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Orphen Darkfire
Ryu: moved

Ryunosuke Ryusei
PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 5:17 pm


Character Name: Enka I. Blackheart

Technique Name: 𝕌𝕃𝕋ℝ𝔸 𝕃𝕀𝔾ℍ𝕋 𝕊ℙ𝔼𝔼𝔻
Description: Having eaten the Pika Pika no Mi, Enka is a light human, able to become, manipulate, and manifest light. This allows him to reform and form as light, changing his own make up to move at light speed. In combat, he moves at his own speed but with a red, shining glow botched with excessive energy, normally. However, he can also move at light speed while fighting, though there is a moment of lag time between these movements and each movement not in a straight line will have to be repaid for the adjustment. Enka uses this to move in a multi-directional field, literally rebounding off of the air and then coming to another location within range. [+25 SPEED while moving.]
Trait(s): Devil fruit
Effect: Movement
Range: 25 Ft Travel Distance
Duration: 1 Post
Cost 25 Stamina
Tier: 1
Base: N/A

Donut: Approved. Go forth.

Technique Name: 𝕃𝕌𝕄𝕀ℕ𝕆𝕊𝕀𝕋𝕐
Description: Being a light man, Enka is able to form and reform his body from light, allowing him to phase through attacks as he pleases. He can preemptively break himself down as light to dodge attacks that're normally too difficult or too strenuous within reason. Though, even with this, if caught off guard he can still take damage regularly.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Phasing
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Varies
Cost Varies
Base: N/A

Donut: Approved

Technique Name: 𝕄𝔸ℂℍ 𝟘𝟘𝟙: "𝕀'𝕄 ℕ𝕆𝕋 𝕁𝕌𝕊𝕋 𝔽𝔸𝕊𝕋!"
Description: Empowering his speedy blows with light, Enka is capable of releasing varied amounts of mayhem through his sheer physical strikes, ranging from punches to kicks. If hit, the point of impact explodes with high amounts of force, causing some serious damage.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Upcast
Range: Upcast
Duration: Upcast
Tier: Upcast
Cost Upcast
Base: Strength

Donut: Approved

Technique Name: 𝕄𝔸ℂℍ 𝟘𝟘𝟚: "ℂ𝕆𝕄𝔹𝕆! ℂ𝕆𝕄𝔹𝕆! ℂ𝕆𝕄𝔹𝕆!"
Description: In the midst of his flurry of blows, Enka sneaks in a stronger one to send someone flying. Depending on how will dictate where they get sent. In most cases, either flying up into the air or downward through the earth. [+50 Damage]
Trait(s): Primary Weapon - Unarmed Combat
Effect: Displacement
Range: 50 Ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Strengh

Donut: Approved.

Profile Link: [ x ]

Deecee Sama


Deecee Sama

Captain

Adorable Genius

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Misujage

Saint

PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 7:44 am


Character Name: Riven A. Shemont

Technique Name: Arrival Gyarados!!
Description: Whenever Riven crafts a clone of water in any manner, he can cause the clone/afterimage to detonate into shockwaves. Resonating out over an area and disrupting everything within its vicinity. Dealing his Prowess in damage [+100].
Trait(s): Fishman Karate | Assassin
Effect: Damage l AoE l
Range: 40 Ft Radius
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 4
Cost 100 Stamina
Base: Prowess

Profile Link: Ya Boy


Misujage
Don't see how the water is getting held together to explode? If you can show me something similiar that someone else did, I'll give another thought. Denied. - DC
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2018 11:39 pm


Character Name: Geno The Magnificent

Technique Name: Blizzaga
Description: Geno can make use of a Clima Tact to fire out a concentrated ball of intense cold to any point within range. Upon collision with the ground or anything else, it explodes outwards, creating a thick layer of freezing ice that fills up a large area, damaging and trapping those caught within the blast. The damaging power and trapping effect are both as strong as Geno's [Prowess +100] and the target will be bound in place for the duration of the ability if they cannot break free or melt the ice away with a stronger effect.
Trait(s): Clima Tact
Effect: AoE l Damage l Root
Range: 100 ft l 40 ft radius
Duration: 3 posts; 1 post cooldown after it ends
Tier: Tier 4
Cost 100 Stamina
Base: Prowess

DC: Two effects at Tier two is not allowed. Pending.
Ryu: adjusted into a tier 4, added damage as well since that's not an effect and increased the range and aoe size as appropriate.

Technique Name: Fira
Description: Geno can make use of a Clima Tact to fire a concentrated ball of heat and flames to any point in range. Upon collision with the ground or anything else, it explodes outwards, spreading intense flames across the area and burning those caught within. The raging inferno lasts for 3 posts long and will burn all within the area for 1/3 of Geno's [Prowess+50] each post in burning damage (rounded down). Anyone set ablaze from being in or entering the area will continue to burn even after leaving the area however if they fail to somehow put out the flames.
Trait(s): Clima Tact
Effect: AoE l DoT
Range: 50 ft l 20 ft radius
Duration: 3 posts
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Prowess

DC: See above.
Ryu: DoT is no longer an 'effect' as per the vote results.

Technique Name: Thundara
Description: Geno can make use of a Clima Tact to fire a concentrated ball of electrical energy to any point in range. Upon collision with the ground or anything else, it explodes outwards, spreading powerful electrical discharge across the area and electrocuting those caught within. Those caught by this electrical discharge will take damage equal to Geno's [Prowess +50].
Trait(s): Clima Tact
Effect: Damage l AoE
Range: 50 ft l 20 ft radius
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Prowess

DC: Reread the system again. You can no longer boost the stat. Only damage. Pending.
Ryu: I think you are arguing a pointless semantic here. The Prowess isn't being 'boosted'. The damage is being determined by Prowess plus the boost, which is how the tech works by either wording used. Are you just...trying to prevent some weird boost looping/chaining or something...?

Profile Link: The Archmage


Ryunosuke Ryusei

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Saucy Goblin

Greedy Punk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2018 4:15 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2018 4:37 pm


Character Name: Firefly

Technique Name: Can't Escape From Crossing Fate: Mewosamasu Sōshō Chiyu [Waking Wound Redaction]
Description: [ x ] As long as the user's soul remains in tact, they are able to reattach any disemboweled body part on their person by using their soul energy as a medium to drag it back to them. They still take any damage they would've received and their body rendered incapacitated if they lose all of their health.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Utility
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: N/A

Ryu: Approved

Technique Name: Chill of the Underworld: U~ōkingu Deddo O Osoreru [Fear the Walking Dead]
Description: Using the cryptic energy of one's soul, the user emits a dark aura that mystifies the area in a supernatural fog. The fog sends both a proverbial and a literal chill down the spines of its opponents, stiffening joints and striking fear and uneasiness into them; this slows their Speed down by [-100] while the thickness of the fog itself makes them near-sighted, making it difficult to see more than a few feet in front of them.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit | Assassin
Effect: Debuff | AoE
Range: 30ft. radius
Duration: 3 posts
Tier: 4
Cost 100 Stamina
Base: N/A

Ryu: Approved. fixed your spelling on 'near sighted'
Technique Name: Chill of the Underworld: Furīzuparusu! Sōru-tatchi no Kaikaku [Freezing Pulse! Soul Touch Redaction]
Description: [ x ] By transferring the energy of their soul into a weapon, the user can summon the chills of the underworld to freeze an opponent. While this does not bolster the damage dealt by one's physical strikes, upon contact they will chill the opponent the supernatural energy lowering their Stamina Pool by certain amount; weakening their very soul.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Debuff
Range: Physical Contact
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Upcast
Cost Upcast
Base: N/A

Ryu: This seems a bit too versatile for an upcast i feel. And given that dc denied me making a tech that choose between strength or prowess to use, I feel that this should pick a single stat to debuff as well.

Yuri: Fixed it. Changed to Stamina Pool

Ryu: Approved.

Technique Name: Abyss Walker: Habataki Mantisu no Kurōru [Fluttering Mantis Crawl]
Description: Experienced in the martial arts known as the Rokushiki, the user specializes in its graceful yet powerful movements. As such the user is extremely flexible and can contort their bodies in a number of ways often viewed as impossible; folding and floating like a piece of paper. When attacked they can use this weightless movement to swiftly maneuver away so they can counter strike. When dodging, a cold aura exudes from their body that takes the form of many fluttering fireflies that can serve as a distraction by skewering one's vision. The drop in temperature can cause stiffness in one's muscles, lowering the enemy's Speed by [-25].
Trait(s): Rokushiki [Kami-E]
Effect: Movement | Debuff
Range: N/A
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: N/A

Ryu: Pending. Speed can't be boosted according to DC so i *think* this counts against it.

Yuri: Changed it to a debuff instead.

Ryu: Approved.

Profile Link: [ x ]

X o l u s


Ryunosuke Ryusei
Edited the last one to something more fitting. Changed the drain on the third one to stamina

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Hygienic Bloodsucker


Saucy Goblin

Greedy Punk

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2018 6:11 pm


Character Name: Vot'gul


Technique Name: Pamu Pamu no Shushi bakudan
Description: Vot'gul touches an inanimate object and causes it to explode with damage equal to prowess [+25]. If used on a weapon or item, stamina equal to the tier of the equipment must be expended if attempting to break it.
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit]
Effect: [AoE]
Range: 10 ft radius (Explosion)
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25 [Or stamina appropriate for the tier of an item]
Base: [ Prowess ]

Ryu: Pending. Weapon Breaker is an effect, as is AoE so you cant do both without at least being tier 4, but WB itself costs variable so this is temp pending til i discuss it with the other mods.

Technique Name: Pamu Pamu no Hōga hana Shigan
Description: Vot'gul flicks an inanimate object at high speed like a bullet, similar to Shigan. The object explodes after hitting a surface or opponent dealing damage as normal [+100]
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit] [Rokushiki]
Effect: [AoE]
Range: 40 ft radius (Explosion) | Can travel up to 100 ft
Duration: 3 post
Tier: 4
Cost 100
Base: [ Prowess ]

Ryu: So setting a small thing up to expand as you fling it, then explode once it gets there? I'll approve this for now, seems cool.

Profile Link: x


Chaos Reclaimer
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:51 pm


Character Name: Hong Meiling

Technique Name: Qigong (lit 'Life Energy Cultivation')
Description: A technique gained from a combination of martial skill, physical power, and mastery over one's self, Meiling can use this ability to make her body even stronger than steel. When this technique is active, her very flesh becomes strong enough to withstand blades, bullets, and all manner of things that she normally shouldn't due to her muscles being reinforced through a balanced mix of strength and control. While active, Meiling can reduce any incoming damage with her [Defense +25] and is able to protect her entire body with this technique without limiting or restricting her own movement in any way.
Trait(s): Life Return, Rokushiki
Effect: Defense
Range: Personal
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Defense

Technique Name: Geppou Kanpekina (lit 'Perfect Moon Step')
Description: There are people that possess the power to kick with their legs and create a small force burst that lets them 'walk' on the air itself. Meiling has spent years mastery her entire body to be able to do this with any part of her body as the situation requires, such that she can always make use of this ability. She can strike the air with any body part such as her hands, elbows, knees, even her head to create a burst of speed and trajectory adjustment using this technique. She can of course remain airborne or adjust her body, or simply cross areas she's rather not travel by foot. The burst effect does make her move a bit faster in the moment, adding more force to her body should she use it to enhance a direct counterattack. When using the technique in this manner, her attack will strike with an additional [25] damage, striking harder than normal as a result.
Trait(s): Life Return, Rokushiki
Effect: Movement
Range: 25 ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Speed/Strength

Technique Name: Kami-E Kanpekina (lit 'Perfect Paper Drawing')
Description: This technique involves making the user's body relaxed and go limp in order to avoid attacks, and float like a piece of paper. Flexibility is greatly increased and the user is able to evade in ways and positions that would not ordinarily be physically possible. Meiling may be use this ability to avoid attacks that her body would not normally be able to move around. This same ability can be used to employ general feats of inhuman flexibility as she sees fit during combat, molding her own body and even being able to adjust her own dimensions to some degree as necessary by even compressing herself in some parts or her entire form at will. She came even make herself nearly flat and can shift entire form in near cartoonish ways with ease. Making use of this ability to perform sudden counter attacks with the 'snapping' back into place motion will allow Meiling to make attacks with an additional [25] damage, striking harder than normal as a result.
Trait(s): Life Return, Rokushiki
Effect: Evasive
Range: Personal
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Speed/Strength

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2018 9:57 pm


Character Name: Cocytus

Technique Name: Frozen Trail to the Underworld
Description: Cocytus uses his devil fruit to create a trail of ice which he is capable of traveling upon just below his feet that extends in the direction he is moving as he is moving. This can also be used to freeze water in the same way creating a trail of ice out of it.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: None?
Range: Touch?
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Neither

Ryu: Approved. You can specify it works to create platforms as wide as 10 ft as he moves with tier 1

Technique Name: Underworld's Inhabitants: Arisen Soldier
Description: Cocytus constructs a humanoid soldier of ice weilding a sword which he controls in order to effectively fight for him. Soldiers are the same size as he is. Damage dealt is +50 with Prowess as base.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage?
Range: 50 Feet
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 2
Cost 50
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Pending. It's been decided sentient summon type techs must be Tier 2 at least.
Fixed

Technique Name: Underworld's Arrival: Frost Area Five
Description: Cocytus freezes the area around him in a 50 foot radius, creating a field of ice. This is considered a two part technique, with the initial wave of ice dealing damage if an opponent is in range of the technique equal to Cocytus' prowess +100. (Effect One "AOE"). After this for the duration the ice remains on the field and makes it difficult for people to move without a way to specifically gain traction or not be moving on the ice. Debuffing their speed by 100.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage, AOE, Debuff
Range: 200 Feet
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 5
Cost 200 Stamina
Base: Prowess

Technique Name: Protection of the Underworld
Description: Cocytus turns part of his body into ice in order to avoid taking damage from an attack. The ice typically shatters then reforms harmlessly. If his whole body is attacked he will completely shatter then harmlessly reform.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Phasing
Range: Self
Duration: Instant
Tier: 1-5 (Phasing)
Cost 25-200
Base: N/A

Ryu: Approved

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Avedis Angelus
Ryu: moved

Ryunosuke Ryusei
PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2018 10:23 pm


Character Name: Guinevere Leodegrande

Technique Name: The Weeping Maiden :: Waterfall's Caress
Description: Guinevere denses her muscles and hardens her skin, contracting them and covering them with a veil of power. During this time, she isn't subsceptible to damage that is lower than her Defense [DEF]. As well her body takes no adverse affects from techniques that can not exceed her protections. During this time her defense is increased by twenty-five [25]. She can move during this technique.
Trait(s): Tekkai//Rokushiki | Life Return
Effect: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Defense

Ryu: Approved

Technique Name: The Iron Maiden :: Castle Gates
Description: Guinevere steels her entire body solidly and becomes unable to move, and unable to be moved by anything that does not exceed her Defense [DEF], and unable to be harmed by anything that does not exceed her Defense [DEF]. During this time her defense is increased by twenty-five [25]
Trait(s): Tekkai//Rokushiki | Life Return
Effect: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Defense

Ryu: Approved

Profile Link: Guin

Misujage
Ryu: moved

Misujage

Saint


Samael of Light

Hunter

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:36 pm


Name: Maximilian Regis
Profile: Here
Perk: Merchant
Traits: Primary Weapon (Sword) | Blacksmith | Clima Tact | Devil Fruit
Race: Human
Devil Fruit: Soru Soru no Mi


Technique Name: Incarnation - Sol
Description: The user has inserted a fragment of his soul into a flame, turning it into a small sun with a face. This technique allows the user to project streams of flames from Sol, dealing damage equal to [Prowess + 25]. Aside from the moment Sol attacks, its flames are harmless.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage
Range: 25 ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25 SP
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Approved.


Technique Name: Incarnation - Tormenta
Description: The user has inserted a fragment of his soul into a thunder cloud, turning it into a small black cloud with a face. This technique allows the user to bring forth lightning bolts from Tormenta as well as torrential rain. The damage caused by the lightning bolts is equal to [Prowess + 25].
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage
Range: 25 ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25 SP
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Pending. This is two entirely separate effects. either tier 4 or make two techs. if a separate tech is made for rain it'd be able to have a duration since it isnt an attack.


Technique Name: Incarnation - Maléfica
Description: The user has inserted a fragment of his soul into his sword, giving it a face and the ability to shapeshift into different types of swords, increasing or decreasing in length, width and thickness. The maximum size is of 25 ft. When used to attack in an altered form, it provides a bonus of [25] to the attack's power. The alterations last for [3] posts.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Support
Range: 25 ft
Duration: 3 posts
Tier: 1
Cost 25 SP
Base: Prowess

Ryu: This is pending. Hybrid damage is being discussed and this will be eligible once an official decision is made.


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Character Name: Tenebrae

Technique Name: Yeah, it's Lava
Description: The user spits a three foot wide stream of molten hot lava that doesn't hurt the user. The lava shoots out at high speed in a direct line [ Tier 1 ] and lands in a pool that spreads out to 25ft around the area. If the stream moves it doesn't get the pool effect. It's effing lava, you can do the math on the fact it's going to burn like a b***h. [ Causes damage equal to prowess when hit with the direct blast and gains +25 prowess while active ].
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Travel Distance
Range: 25ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Prowess

Ryu: Pending. Is it just going to persist in that line area or is it spreading out wider? Also you are using the +25 twice here and that's a no-no. The blast can do normal prowess and the dot can be based on the 25, or you can make it all a dot and say that the hit is part of that so magma sticks and burns. the whole thing would be 1/3 of your whole attack per round if they cant get the magma off themselves or stay out of it.
Think I adjusted it correctly

Technique Name: Hailstorm of Scales
Description: The user is able to create new scales under their current scales and shoot the old ones from their body similar to kunai being thrown [ or feather daggers ]. The scales shoot out at a 360 degree radius and hit everything within a 20ft radius of themselves. These scales are capable of piercing armor and sticking into various objects. The attack gains a +50 to strength while in direct use. Scales can remain stuck in armor and various other objects.
Trait(s): Life Return | Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage | AOE
Range: 20ft radius
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 2
Cost 50
Base: Strength

Ryu: Ewhy are you auto letting people take no damage from behind shields from your attack that's nerfing yourself for no reason. Also why is your defense being boosted if this is an attack? lastly you can't forcibly say enemies take 50 damage no matter what if they have a valid defense to block it all.
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Technique Name: Dragon's Wing Beat
Description: The user plants their claws into a solid surface and begin to rapidly beat their humongous wings to send anything not directly attached to the ground flying up to 75ft away from them. This only operates in the single direction in front of them up to the user's wing span in width and their normal height affecting that total of an area. The user gets +75 Strength while using this technique, anything the user's wings physically hit will take damage. Affected can withstand the blow back if they take proper action to stop themselves.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Travel Distance | Displacement
Range: 75ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 3
Cost 75 Stamina
Base: Strength

Ryu: This size restriction is pointless, especially since you are already as large as allowed anyways. just remove that. Also they will be able to resist the wind if they are stronger and can hold down, stab a weapon down, maintain stance, etc, etc.
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