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 Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 12:58 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- RPC Name: To Be Announced Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because I've never actually 'dabbled' into the clan side of Naruto Rping, I just stayed original. This clan is one of the only clans that actually comes close to my character idea. This clan will mark the beginning of my clan related characters. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Ato Sakura No Ki No originated in the depths of the grass country, known only to a specific royal family in Japan. There are very few members in the family who are graced with the honor of learning the techniques of Ato Sakura No Ki No, making it a very rare sight. The wielders of this power are presented with a weapon at birth, signifying that they are the next heir, though they are aloud to forge a different weapon later. While deadly with the art of weaponry itself, the users of this power must have a sound mind, making them calm in battle, in order to stay in tuned with the art. There are two main abilities that grow in strength as you master the bloodline. These are Shield and Etch; Shield allows you to shield yourself from enemy jutsu, while Etch allows you to draw your clan insigma onto ninja tools, when activating these insigma, your ninja tools become a part of the jutsu itself. Mastering this jutsu requires alot of physical and mental training, which can tax the users body. It was late at night. I'll repost shortly. Editted
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:27 pm
Antonio Inferni RPC Name:No clue yet. In sample it's Kaito Hatake though. Bloodline/Clan Requested: Hatake ClanWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: It gives them the speed of a "speed ninja" and the ability to enhance the length and cutting power of any weapon. I'm going to go Weapon Master class and that would help me a lot. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Hatake Clan has one ability, white chakra enhancement. It increases the length and cutting power of any weapon. They have their White Chakra which is mainly used for show. They also have the abilities of a "speed ninja". Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Kaito was running towards the sound of battle. He had just walked away for two seconds to relieve himself. Once he reached the little 'campsite' that he and his squad was stationed at he realized the attacking shinobi were waiting for him to leave. His squad members were all dead. The attacking shinobi were standing there, in the midst of the bodies, waiting for him to come back. "So the Hatake came back." They looked at him with devilish grins before they made their attack. One of them launched a Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu at Kaito. Using his speed, he had unsheathed his katana and channeled the fireball from the jutsu into his blade. He then slashed back at them. A red energy slice shot from his katana towards them both. Still going he enchanted his katana with his white chakra, increasing its cutting power to that of a highly sharpened Nodachi, and ran after the energy slice. Right before he got near them, he dashed to the left. The two shinobi dodged the energy slice, by jumping to the side. The one on Kaito's left jumped right onto his blade, like he thought he would. Kaito left the katana in the shinobi's body as he hurled himself towards the other shinobi. As he was flying through the air, he grabbed two kunai knives from his pouch and enchanted them with his white chakra, increasing their cutting power to that of a honed blade. When Kaito landed the other shinobi took off. Kaito quickly ran after him. He caught up to him soon after. The other shinobi tried to use shuriken to get away, but failed miserably. Kaito had used his superior speed to dodge the shuriken and get behind the man. He swiftly impaled him in both kunai in his spine, crippling him. Kaito left the man and returned to the camp to send word to his village about the attack. Quoting because I put this up before I was removed from the guild. I still want to join this Clan.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:36 am
RPC Name: Kishin Hoshigaki (formerly known as Akio Takamiya)
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Hoshigaki Clan
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: While it seems bizarre that Kishin/Akio would be a part of a bloodline that seems pretty much indigenous to Kirigakure while he originally hails from Konohagakure this is by no means an oversight on my part. Akio/Kishin's direct family, while born and raised in an outlying Fire country town are actually children of a couple who moved from Kirigakure, and tracing back their lineage only one generation uncovers many Hoshigaki clan relations. Akio/Kishin did not show any sign of possessing this unique bloodline until he traveled to Kirigakure as a part of his work for Akatsuki (Pre-TUP, in and post-POTS) where unbeknownst to him and others he knew, the environment began to set off various genetic triggers which caused his otherwise dormant Hoshigaki bloodline to activate slowly but surely.
Once this was discovered, Akio went into hiding from the ninja world while his transformation completed, changing his name and identity, leading those who still sought him to believe that Akatsuki had killed him.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: They're pretty much water loving shark-based mer-people sans the whole aquatic animal tail deal. Their natural bonuses with and proficiency for using/learning Suiton is balanced out by a weakness to Raiton techniques (+1 rank to Raiton used against him). Due to their shark like nature, they become very aggressive and predatory, craving combat but also inherit physical qualities such as rough and tough skin that can reduce the damage of unnamed taijutsu attacks of ranks lower than them, and in some cases, nullify them completely. Projectile ninja tools are also ineffective against them unless the attacker possesses the Agility or Strength attribute.
Hoshigaki clan members also enjoy the benefit an increase chakra pool (pun) equivalent to one rank above them. Though they do have other weaknesses aside from the extra damage of Raiton, such as needing to become loyal to a single person before they reach Chuunin. They are unable to defy the orders of this person and that can have some bad implications depending on how the person they are loyal to views them. Kishin is loyal to Sai Konaga.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
It hadn't been long since his bloodline had fully awakened, and the Hoshigaki blood lust was still raw and uncontrollable. Kishin had been stalking this Genin for days, watching and waiting for the youth to be alone so he could finally capture the teenage boy and indulge in a little one-sided blood sport and now he finally had him. The boy was strangely brave, not quivering at the sight of the shark man in his one-person unit as many would, he liked that, he liked that a lot. Kishin lumbered towards the Genin, his back hunched and arms hanging low, his sharp teeth bared as he snarled at the youth, who charged at the Akatsuki and flung a punch straight into the center of his face with a shout that Kishin assumed was some sort of battle cry. Unfortunately that attack meant little because of Kishin's rough skin, the Hoshigaki laughing maniacally as the boy withdrew his hand and threw two more punches, each as ineffective as the last, the fear now dawning on his face. The Genin took two steps back before turning on his heels and bolting towards the door of his unit and away from Kishin, who inhaled deeply and forced chakra to build up his body, forming and mixing with water.
His throat expanded for a second before he fired three small bullets (1) of water that flew at the Genin, smashing into his knee causing it to buckle and subsequently the boy to fall. Kishin leaped over to the boy, inhaling deeply once more before vomiting four large globs of water (2) onto the fallen Genin, one glob to his right thigh, one to his left foot, another to his left hand, and one more to his body. As the teen tried to get up he found his limbs and body heavy, the water strangely sticky and thick, like swimming in mud. He writhed in desperation as he tried to stand up despite the weighty liquid. Kishin grabbed the boy by his foot and dragged him away from the door and climbed on top of him.He slowly formed some hand sign, as chakra surged into his gut, transmuting into water, that built and built, causing his stomach to swell,(3) all the while the boy punched at his attacker ineffectually with his free hand.
He grabbed the boys face with one hand and held it in place, squeezing so his mouth opened before pressing their lips together and letting the jutsu erupt from his mouth. Gallons upon gallons of water poured into the Genin in an instant, his body swelling as it filled and filled, quickly reaching breaking point and tearing apart; his body exploding in a shower of blood, gore and copious water that began to flow out and under the door of the unit. Kishin smiled.
Jutsu used:
(1)Name: Suiton:Mizu Hashu Shiniti(Water Spit Technique)
Note: No handseals required due to rank (Chakra Control) and description
Note 2: No title calling required due to Stealth
(2) Mizu Nechinechi Tama Jutsu(Water Sticky Bullets Jutsu)
Note: I assume it follows the same rules of Name: Suiton:Mizu Hashu Shiniti(Water Spit Technique) such as no hand seals,
Note 2: I did not announce the title of jutsu due to Kishin's Stealth specialty.
(3) Suiton:Rishino no Dianot(Lake Creation)
Used at C-rank
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:32 am
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Before I get into any responses to apps,
Nano: Cobra is the orginal creator of the Konaga bloodline and those apps are usually approved through him. Best you send him a pm to kindly let him know of your interest to join the ranks of the all power Konaga. Good luck. smile
Now onto the apps I can approved. 3nodding
Altrius: lol, no worries, I'm like that too so its cool. For you info section, it'll be good if you could expand on your note regarding the different density/manipulation levels from 'why you want this BL' but its fine. As long as you know that in our guild, we have those 'stages'. So...APPROVED! Happy rping.
Antonio: Welcome back. A simple enough clan, overall a good app but when 'enhancing' a weapon, don't forget to include how much you extend the blade or how much sharper you made it. These could be considered some important points for an opponent during rp. Keep that in mind. Just edit in those minor but important details and then let me or Jade know.
Auggie: Auggie! Haven't seen you around in awhile. Missed ya!
Great job on the app but you missed out on some strengths/weaknesses for the info section. An example would be how Hoshigaki have a chakra pool one rank greater than their current rank. Good sample though it would be nice if you could try to incorporate at least 2 more of the Hoshigaki technique in this sample. Length is not a problem, as long as you can show what is needed. Good luck. smile
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:41 am
Edited. It gets more horror-esque each time. o.o
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:35 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:49 am
Nano:
Approved for Konaga.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:10 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Antonio: Good job. Approved
Auggie: *shivers* Freaky...Approved! Can't wait for him to be up and running again in the Akatsuki. It's gonna be awesome!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:06 pm
RPC Name: Orion Ekisho Bloodline/Clan Requested: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=2&t=20082725#278104408 Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: The Crystal Release seems to have been made to protect the crystal shinobi's way of life, this fits with my planned character because he believes in protecting those he cares for above all else. Beyond that it both gives him a goal, namely trying to find the mine that once belonged to his clan and take it back, thus reforming his clan as well as forming an alliance between them and whichever village he ends up being a part of (my plan is for him to be a Leaf shinobi), and the clan is similar to one I thought up for another Naruto character that never got to be used. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Members of this clan have the ability to crystalize solid matter(earth/stone, water, and wood) by using chakra and use said crystals in their attacks. However, it requires one to have doton as their primary element and be a ninjutsu specialist. They also cannot crystalize raw energy or chakra and are weak against raiton and high frequency sound waves. At the same time their crystals are powerful agaisnt wood, earth, and water. The powers of the clan can be used both offensively and defensively and as such have a decent flexibility when it comes to strategy. Clan members who have only unlocked stage one powers cannot crystalize wood and water, though once they reach stage two they unlock this ability and stage three greatly increases the size of their crystal attacks. Both stages require the use of a crystal attack to win a high stakes battle against powerful opponents to unlock. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Orion was already breathing heavily by this point in the battle. His opponent was a rouge ninja he had been sent to capture or kill, preferably capture. Considering the fact that the clearing they were in already looked like the aftermath of a largescale battle, that was easier said than done. Raising his Jade Crystal Mirror he activated his chakra and said "Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Clone Technique". Three clones came through the mirror, exact duplicates of Orion, though they lacked the ability to use ninjutsu. "Alright, here we go." he thought to himself as the three clones ran at the rogue ninja. The ninja used the katana, which he'd already proven quite proficient at, in his right hand to send a horizontal slash at the clone in front, shattering it into little crystals. The diagonal slash he sent at the second one was dodged, though the kick was not. He took out the last one with by feinting a slash at its neck, making it duck, before connecting a stab with its chest. Orion smiled, his plan was coming together perfectly. Before he could move on to the next stage however, the rouge stabbed his sword into the ground and performed a series of hand signs and said "Fire Release: Powerful Fireball Technique" before inhaling deeply. Before he could exhale Orion did his own set of handsign before slamming his hands to the ground and saying "Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit!" Using the crystals from his earlier clones that were scattered around his opponent he formed a crystal dome around him. From outside the dome he heard the explosion set off by his opponent's jutsu. The katon jutsu was powerful enough that it cracked the dome and Orion watched as it collapsed before his eyes. Inside his opponent was burnt, quite severely in places, but still standing. "Good, I get paid more if he's alive." Orion thought as he prepared to do one final jutsu. Before he was halfway done his handsigns though the ninja fell over and didn't move or make a sound. Jutsu used by Orion: 1. Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Clone Technique Rank D Ninjutsu 2. Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit Rank C Ninjutsu Chakra 6/40 Stamina 21/40 (I used my character as if he was a Chuunin in this example(though I know I'd really be starting as a Genin in the rp). I understand if I need to use more Jutsu to show off the abilities of the clan, just didn't want to use more than one per paragraph/go over the paragraph limit. I also did this as if it was later in the fight to make sure I didn't go over the paragraph limit and still have an ending. As such I had him start off with less chakra and stamina in this post, 20 and 30 respectively. I'm also not sure if the cost of the clone technique would be tripled since he made three clones because its not mentioned in the bloodline page, but I assumed it was so that's how I calculated it.)
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:30 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Illusion: Well there really isn't anything wrong with it, aside from the fact that its a bit short. Lilly and I have agreed to take out the posting limit, but please, do not try and write a 10 paragraph novel for us to read! Please keep in mind your weaknesses, as you didn't get a chance to express that in your sample. Besides that: Approved!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:22 pm
RPC Name: Akiho (last name to be decided) Bloodline/Clan Requested: Genjuu-Kinzoku Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: This bloodline would allow Akiho to be able to expand further on the Weapons Master class that I intend to put her in by allowing her body to also become a weapon. It also gives Akiho strengths and weaknesses that will allow her as a character to have a unique fighting style and outlook. Also Akiho’s personality is that she enjoys fighting others for what she believes in, because she feels that she will only lose when she is wrong. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Genjuu-Kinzoku bloodline allows a user to grow metal blades from his or her body that originates and is attached to, his or her metal bone structure. This metallic bone structure makes the person weak to raikon attacks because they are quite literally a walking lightning rod. In having metal bones, the person with the bloodline also has a blood pH that is very low (acidic in nature). This blood also releases a flash of light when exposed to metal. Each user must love to fight, and has some immunity to poisons. The objects that grow from the user’s bones can be no longer than five inches and no wider than two inches. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: Akiho twirled her weapon—a kusarigama—around rapidly as she stared at the ninja before her. He had attacked her from seemingly nowhere, brandishing a katana and slicing down at her; giving Akiho only enough time to block poorly. Her attacker had cut her right upper arm, and she found herself having to focus on not allowing her blood to touch the chain of her blade; she didn't want to accidentally blind herself in the middle of the fight. She released her twirling blade, sending it flying forward with a great amount of force. It flew past her opponent after he dodged it, causing his arms to spread wide to balance himself. Akiho smiled manically as she yanked her weapon back, wrapping the chain around his arm tightly.
Wrapping her end of the chain around her left arm, Akiho allowed herself to be pulled in closer by the large brute. Using her teeth, she found an area on the inside of her bottom lip that had many scars. Biting until she bled in that same spot, she filled her mouth with blood. As she was dragged into range, she let the blood spray from her mouth and hit him in the chest, neck, and lower face; failing to blind him by getting it in his eyes. Her bloodstained teeth were displayed in a gruesome smile as she resisted the urge to laugh. Agitation could be seen on his face as the blood went from a dull tingling to a burning sensation in seconds.
Enraged the man began making hand signs, and Akiho found herself trying to abandon her weapon in time. She was too late however as he unleashed a raiton attack, shouting, (a)“Nagare Isou no Jutsu!”
The shock traveled up the chain of her kusarigama and into her body, her metal bones conducting it throughout her entire body and causing much more damage than it should have. Somehow managing to free herself from the painful electrical pulse her weapon was transferring to her. Jumping back to put distance between the two of them, she tried to let herself recover. Hunched over and panting, Akiho looked up to see her opponent beginning to twirl her weapon as she had been earlier.
Using her enhanced speed, Akiho dodged out of the way of the blade. Moving far enough away not to be caught on the return of the blade, she began focusing on her right knee. As she did so, she felt a small blade grow out of her skin, originating from her metallic knee bone(1). It stretched one inch from her skin, with rough edges that resembled serrations. The male failed to notice her new weapon and swung her kusarigama out at her once more. Dodging again she ran up as fast as she could and using her knee blade she kneed him right between the legs. Laughing as he went down—clutching his bleeding family jewels and temporarily forgetting his burning face—Akiho picked up her weapon; and as she walked away twiling her weapon lazily, she thought to herself, ‘I guess a knee to the nuts is a knee to the nuts, even if you are a ninja.’ (1) Akiho used: Name: External Metal Bone Influence Rank: D Length: One inch (a) Opponent used: Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill) D-rank
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:40 pm
Hey, I was asked to go over your application since I am the creator of the bloodline. I noticed a couple issues. 1. The blood doesn't create an explosion when it touches metal while exposed to the air: it simply creates a bright flash like a flash grenade. 2. Um, if you hit someone "where the sun doesn't shine," that means you just stabbed his a**s. >.< (because the sun doesn't shine inside your butt, hence the phrase)
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:09 pm
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Mokuton | Wood Release
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I plan to supply my team with different objects, not to mention that I specifically like the many choices you have on using it.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Mokuton was firstly [In the anime] a bloodline specially to Hashirama Senju, the Shodaime Hokage. It was used for creating Konohagakure and is part of the Shodaime's Majestic Power. Mokuton was explained more precisely after Yamato came in the anime. It is the ability to combine Earth and Water Elements, such creating the Wood Release. Yamato used Mokuton in many shapes, but as shown in the anime/manga it's base shape differs from users [Hashirama had more tree-like shapes, Yamato had well defined shapes (Square)]. And that's pretty much all about it, as it's a totally free bloodline.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
Another day was passing away, Kohaku - a poor child had once again stood in the sun all day long, waiting for a customer. His only ability, Mokuton was used to create different shapes and sculptures which he would sell. But today hadn't been the most successful day. He barely sold two figures and now the sun was setting down. The usual locations of his 'Shop' were the gates of the different villages he wandered to. Today, he was in Konohagakure, and sincerely spoken Kohaku was dissapointed. These people didn't seen to value art. Just as he was watching another person just pass by. A thief quickly grabbed all of his items and ran away. Kohaku quickly stood up, shouting out, hoping to stop the thief. No success, it seemed that he had to chase the thief himself. The thief ran into the woods, hoping to lose his pursuer. But Kohaku didn't need more than 5 meters of distance to stop the thief. Quickly jumping forwards and aiming with his right palm at the thief, Kohaku extended a single spike out of his palm, piercing the thief in the right shoulder. This action stopped the thief, causing him to drop all of the items too.
The items were made out of wood, so even from a fall, they wouldn't receive any damage. Kohaku knew this, so his main concern was the thief, which was persistent enough to provoke a fight with the Kohaku. The thief threw three kunai at Kohaku and quickly leaped forwards, seemingly a hand-to-hand combatant. Kohaku quickly stepped forwards going through some hand seals, causing beams of wood to emerge from the ground. The beams converged, forming a half spherical barrier for protection. The projectiles were no problem of course, but the thief was also damaged as he hit the barrier with all of his jump power. While inside the barrier and unseen by the enemy, Kohaku created a Wood Clone of himself, commanding it to expose itself and attack. The Clone wouldn't differ from the original Kohaku in any way. The Thief quickly rolled backwards, having a better look at the attacking 'enemy'. The clone transformed his arm into a giant hammer and then slammed it down at the enemy. The attack was strong and it hit the enemy slamming him into the ground. The upper part of the hammer extended upwards, leaving the hammer with an open inner, but action was done just for that upper part to come down with another slam attack. This one succeeded too. But just as the clone raised the hammer to see for the thief an explosion tag attached to the hammer exploded, ending the clone's life. The thief had used the Replacement technique with one of the by-standing statues in the last moment. Thinking that his enemy was dead, the thief walked towards the stolen items intending to leave the battlefield with them. But he was suddenly stopped, better said crushed by two gigantic wooden hammer that hit him on two sides. Kohaku had been waiting and now he struck. The thief was now laying in the ground, unconscious. This battle was too easy for Kohaku, he could have ended it immediately but he didn't want to kill the thief, the wound on the shoulder would be enough. Kohaku created a small, but strong wooden cage which would imprison the thief, before taking his items and leaving. The Konohagakure Ninja's would be informed of this thief and take him in. While the young artist was inspired by this happening and created new figures, telling the appropriate story to the new customers.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:29 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Crit: Alright, looks gewd Approved!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:03 pm
So sorry for the misunderstanding, edited
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