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 Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:01 pm
The damage doesn't have to be permanent, just notable enough to dissuade you from using it just because your opponent has you trapped in a corner. But Five Posts is a long time to stay in the mode, wouldn't three be more believable. I mean wave away any jutsu, even C rank, is pretty stronger. The chakra drain would be...well enourmous.
Oh and also I'm not the official approval person, I just like comment on what people post just to keep things in order. I'm just giving suggestions you don't nessecarily have to follow them >.>
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:03 pm
Ya it's ok I like input from people, and ya 5 post is pretty long, but I don't know why I've always considered 3 to be too short... maybe I should just take the middle ground and go with 4 lol :p
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:09 pm
I could compromise with 4. Would the user be slowly feeling pain towards the end or will it just hit them really hard when the technique is over
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:12 pm
It would all hit him all at once, if he took enough damage he may not be able to stand because of the intense pain.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:14 pm
All right, well that was my two cents by just glancing at it. As you were ^^
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:15 pm
cool thanks, NOW I WAIT ON ZANE!!!! lol
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:18 pm
Actually, Deil is the custom taijutsu guy, although other crew have not been doin their jobs and forcing him to do other things, which he has been awesome about. Praise to Deil Grist.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:19 pm
well if u need me to do anything just send me a shout, I don't mind now that I have free time.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:13 pm
And my question is ignored >.> heart
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:17 pm
Gregar828 Actually, Deil is the custom taijutsu guy, although other crew have not been doin their jobs and forcing him to do other things, which he has been awesome about. Praise to Deil Grist. Thanks, I appreciate the encouragement! I would really appreciate it if you would have a look at my Reprogram jutsu. Could you? Shield bash: I can see how this move would push someone back of they are stronger and the same rank, but what if they are a higher rank, or if they push back as you push? Like a full force block? I'm just going to work my way down your style. My modem got screwed by a lightning strike, and I am having to do all my posts from my phone. Geeze, typing is so slow even with a qwerty XD
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:17 pm
Orchid Moon And my question is ignored >.> heart That question is?
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:19 pm
Gregar828 Orchid Moon And my question is ignored >.> heart That question is? go back to my last post and ull see it... (one before the one above)
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 10:57 pm
[Because I'm not sure that Diel has even seen this]
Name of Taijutsu StyleEnbu no Sakkaku [Waltz within the Illusion]
Pic if you want one:
If it's a weapon style what is the intended weapon:NA
Description:This martial art style was intended for the Father of Taiji Uchiha, but due to his expertise in the area of ninjutsu, instead of genjutsu, as he had hoped, He passed along his teachings in several scrolls to his son, who had a natural affinity for Illusionary techniques. The style itself revolves around the use of the Sharingan, as a tool to weave minor illusions into fighting an opponent in Hand-to-hand combat. The users of this style tend to be faster than average ninja.(not as fast as speed type characters) due to the side by side speed training.
RequirementsUser must have the sharingan, and the scrolls written by shunsui Uchiha.|The user must also have the Shinobi type: Ability control - Sharingan
Training requirements The user must post, as if he/she were learning a jutsu, plus one extra post to gain one of the techniques.
To access a stage, the user most post a certain number of training posts per stage
Stage 1= 5 posts of Style training/5 posts of speed training
Stage 2= 8 Posts style/ 7 speed
Stage 3= 10 posts style/10 speed
Stage 4= 15 posts style/13 speed
Academy
Stage 1: Enkyou [round mirror]
At this stage, the user focuses on confusing the opponent, by luring him into an attacking he never saw coming. it's techniques are very basic for this style.
Tech:Kohouken
When the user strikes at his opponent, he releases a small controlled illusion, that displays the user following through with the strike, when in reality, he has moved to the opponents backside, and is striking it, a moment after the illusions attack connects.
Chakra cost: 2
Tech:Shitaken
This technique is much like the Konoha Senpuu in the essense that it knocks the opponent into the air, the difference being, that if caught in the genjutsu, the victim doesn't realize that they are airborne, or even hit, leaving them open to attack.
Chakra cost:3
Genin
Stage 2:Kyoumen [mirror surface]
This stage of the technique is used to confuse the opponent while fighting, by making certain obstacles invisible, or by re-arranging the terrain, to make things seem like they aren't.
Tech:Kishuu
With this technique the user seems to stop whatever he is doing, and turn his back on the opponent. moments after, the user appears to shoot out at the opponent, through the illusion of himself, to make a surprise attack.
Chakra cost: 3
Tech:Kyurakku
With this technique, the user makes it appear as though they dissipate, by whatever means the user likes (ex:itachi turning into crows). after that, an illusion of the character surfaces behind the opponent, grabbing onto them, as if to hold them in place, while during all of this, the real user has run up to the opponent, leaped into the air, and by the time the illusion grabs the opponent, is coming down fro the sky, with a heel to the crown of their skull.
Chakra cost: 3
Tech:Hyouhen
With this technique, the user is able to make certain objects around seem like they aren't there, or make the illusion that something that is not there, is there.
Chakra cost: 4
Chuunin
Stage 3:Oumenkyou [concave mirror]
this stage of Enbu no sakkaku is all about using genjutsu to bring to the surface painful memories, to give the user an edge.
Tech:Himei no Itamu
with this technique the user is able to dig into someones mind, and make the opponent hear screams of agony, that sound as though they came from someone close to them, causing the opponent to lose focus on the battle
(the opponent rolls one six-sided die, on a roll of 4-6 they are not tricked by the fake sounds, and continue as normal, but on a 1-3 they become impaired on their next post due to the horrifying sounds.)
Chakra cost: 4
Tech:Soranjiruu
With this technique, The user casts an illusion over himself that makes it look as though he is the last close relative to the opponent that has died. it causes the opponent to pull their punches, reducing the damage of their attack, but only works once per battle, as they would become wise to the trick after the first time.
((Can be used more than once per battle if the one of the enemies weaknesses is to genjutsu.))
Chakra cost: 4
Tech:Haneken
This Gen/taijutsu hybrid makes the opponent feel like the last soft touch attack the user landed broke whatever bone structure is closest. Unless they can realize it's a genjutsu, then they cannot use that body part (Ex: an arm, or a leg)
Chakra cost:5
Jonin
Stage 4: Sugatami [full length mirror]
This stage is all about the user gaining supreme coordination with their taijutsu, and illusion. The attacks that this stage holds are both incredibly swift, and amazingly flexible.
Tech:Kangeki
This technique uses a quick genjutsu to make the opponents depth perception change, while leaving them unaware, so that when they strike, they fall short of contact,or at the very least, reduce damage. leaving the user with ample room to apply a quick counter blow.
Chakra cost:5
Tech:Hyakumanken
This maneuver makes it seem as though when the user strikes, it is as if his hands were moving so fast that there were many more of them, making the user less likely to block the attack.
Chakra cost:7
Tech:Hitosawagase
This maneuver makes the opponent think that user has set off a trap, which is sending numerous ninja weapons after the victim, impairing them while the user strikes. If the opponent chooses to try and dodge the weapons, then the user can use the trajectory of his illusionary weapons to force his opponent to move where he wants. If they choose to stand ground and block, they will not be able to defend at full ability, due to them blocking the shower of weapons.
Chakra Cost: 7
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:53 pm
ARG SOMEONE NEEDS TO COME LOOK AT THESES!!! crying
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Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:41 am
....Who's supposed to be approving these?
I'll have to step in and do it for now.
@Malfrost: You need to give every move you have that uses chakra a chakra cost, and reduce the deity move to 4 posts as well.
@Interest: Your style is still under review.
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