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 Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 1:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:24 pm
Morio Nara ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Info
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Morio Nara.
Nicknames: Mo, Fatty.
Title(s): None.
Rank: Genin.
Village: Kirigakure. Background InfoWill do later. Physical Description Age: Fifteen
Sex: Male.
Hair Color: Natural hair color is brown. Constantly dyes hair.
Natural Eye Color: Brown.
Body Type: Fat and short [5' 7"]
Distinguishing Features: Has two gold teeth [left-right top incisors].color=black]---------------------------------------------------------------- Clan ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Clan: Nara Clan [In approval process]
Bloodline/Clan Stage: Stage One
Abilities of the Clan:
1. They do shadow stuff
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3. Nothing beyond that really.----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master
Profession Base Benefit:
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus.
Weakness: Less Elements: [needs a description]
(The weapon master can only have 2 elements, starting with 1 at academy student and acquiring the second at jounin; if the character has a combination release Kekkai genkai they get their two primary elements and their combination element at academy student, but never get another element; demons that give their hosts access to elements can still learn the jutsus for that element, but only up to their current rank, unless they are willing to take it as 1 of their two primary elements)
Rank Benefits
1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style
Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.) Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Genin
Mighty Rush: [description here]
( The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack. )
Chuunin
(place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin
(place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) : Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja
: -2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals----------------------------------------------------------------
Chakra and Jutsu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium [ 3/10: I assume this is three chakra points for ever ten chakra points ]
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Medical, Kageton. Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
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Summoning Information
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Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style)
current stage:](current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities: (brief description of the style)
current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities: (brief description of the style)
current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities----------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment
---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Shotel:
Name of Weapon: Chop-Chop.
Base Range:Close-Range [40in] Shinobi Tools Kunai:
Shuriken: Ten.
Makibishi: Fifteen.
Light bomb: Five.
Smoke bomb: Five.
Steel wire:Twelve-Feet. Apparel Head-Band Style: Standard Style.
Head-Band Location: Worn around the waist.
Head-Band Color: Seafoam Green.
Flak-Jacket style: Kiri-style.
Flak-Jacket color: Seafoam Green.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:36 pm
Gage Urashimi
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Character Info
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Main Info
Character Name: Gage Urashimi
Nicknames: Gage
Title(s): Pyro of Iwagakure & Quiet Fire
Rank: Genin
Village: Iwagakure Rouge
Background - Return to Humanity
Physical Description
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Hair Color: Blonde
Natural Eye Color: grey
Body Type: Athletic and Flexible
Distinguishing Features: N/A
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Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
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Shinobi Profession
Shinobi Profession: Assassin
Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud & Stealth Focus
Learning Information:
• Assassins cannot be found by shinobis of equal rank when hiding, unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobis of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobis of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location.
• Assassins stealth based jutsus are equal to the Assassin's rank
Weakness:
• Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu Styles - The Assassin Can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank.
Rank Benefits
Genin
• Shadow's Sight - can see clearly no matter how dark it is, can still be affected by supernatural darkness; gain the Kurayami no Jutsu. (Reached)
Shinobi Type(s)
Tactical Ninja:
These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation.
(-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
Speed Shinobi:
Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast.
(Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
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Chakra and Jutsu
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Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Point: 25
Chakra Control: N/A
Elemental Affinities: Katon (Fire)
Jutsu Information
Ninjutsu
Universal
Varies w/Rank Jutsu
• Kurayami no Jutsu (Darkness Technique)(Assassin's Technique)
E Ranked Jutsu
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
• Kakuremino No Jutsu (Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique)
D Ranked Jutsu
• Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution)
• Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique)/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique)
• Kyou Masukingu No Jutsu (Sound Masking Technique)
Katon - Jutsu Discription
E Rank Jutsu
• Tanebi no Jutsu (Cinder Technique) ~ Trained
• Houka Hira no Jutsu (Flaming Palm Technique) ~ Trained
• Fukumen no Jutsu (Veil Technique) ~ Trained
• Shoumeidan no Jutsu (Flare Technique) ~ Trained
D Rank Jutsu
• Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique)
• Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique) ~ Trained
• Bounetsu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame-Resistance Technique) ~ Trained
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Summoning Information
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Summoning Type:
Summons Known:
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Taijutsu Style
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Flaming Muay-Thai:
This is a Fighting Style based on a type of Nin-Taijutsu known as Flaming Muay-Thai.
The users form flames around their hands and then use them to send rapid, flaming punches at an enemy.
This style isn't very effective at lower levels, but it devastating when the user trains at a much higher level.
This style was created by Cadence Creed of Iwagakure.
Current Stage:
• Genin ~ Trained
• Academy ~ (Trained)
Maneuvers
• Quick Jab
• Hammer Fist
• Quick Step
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Equipment
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Weapons
Type of Weapon: N/A
Name of Weapon: N/A
Base Range: N/A
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: 10
Shuriken: 5
Makibishi: 5
light bomb: 10
smoke bomb: 10
steel wire: 30 ft.
Apparel
Head-Band Style: N/A
Head-Band Location: N/A
Head-Band Color: N/A
Flak-Jacket style: N/A
Flak-Jacket color:N/A
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Mission Information
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Mission Statement
Total Number of Mission Completed: 0
Total Number of Mission Points Accumulated: 0
Mission Record:
E-rank - [0]
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Kunai:10/10
Shuriken: 5/5
Makibishi: 5/5
Light Bombs: 10/10
Steel Wire: 30ft/30ft
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:18 pm
@Anon: Your first two benefits would go under "Profession Base Benefit", not "Rank Benefit".
Please remove your bloodline bonuses until you are approved, or wait until approval before resubmitting.
Out of curiosity, does it make sense for a ninja with a "fat" body type to also be a speed type?
@Duo: Please remove your rank benefits for the ranks you have not reached.
Shinobi types have changed. Please edit yours to include the current descriptions.
Please separate all your jutsu by rank, including the universal.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:43 pm
Gregar828 @Anon: Your first two benefits would go under "Profession Base Benefit", not "Rank Benefit". Please remove your bloodline bonuses until you are approved, or wait until approval before resubmitting. Out of curiosity, does it make sense for a ninja with a "fat" body type to also be a speed type? @Duo: Please remove your rank benefits for the ranks you have not reached. Shinobi types have changed. Please edit yours to include the current descriptions. Please separate all your jutsu by rank, including the universal. Awesome, yet another question that can be answered with a TROPE. AcrofaticSo... The answer is yes.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:34 pm
Done Done Done; Do I need to put a spot for C,B,A,S ranked , or do I leave it as is?
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:55 pm
@Both: In the future, please repost your submissions. It makes it easier for me to compare them to the previous ones, to be sure I didn't miss something.
@Anon: You didn't make any of the changes I requested. If you're going to wait until your bloodline is approved to resubmit, do not post a response until that time. But you still need to change the placing of your Profession Base Benefit.
@Duo: If you have C ranked jutsu, add a C ranked section. Why wouldn't you?
Before I accept this, are you aware that your Tactical and Elemental Control learning bonuses will not stack?
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 2:24 pm
Meaning while learning jutsu I can only use one? Yes. So what your saying is I would be better off dropping one? And living a different one that doesn't relate to learning post?
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 3:47 pm
Morio Nara ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Info
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Morio Nara.
Nicknames: Mo, Fatty.
Title(s): None.
Rank: Genin.
Village: Kirigakure. Background InfoWill do later. Physical Description Age: Fifteen
Sex: Male.
Hair Color: Natural hair color is brown. Constantly dyes hair.
Natural Eye Color: Brown.
Body Type: Fat and short [5' 7"]
Distinguishing Features: Has two gold teeth [left-right top incisors].color=black]---------------------------------------------------------------- Clan ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Clan: Nara Clan [ Approved ]
Bloodline/Clan Stage: Stage One
Abilities of the Clan:
1. Nara Clan Hiden Jutsu
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Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master
Profession Base Benefit:
1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style
Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.) Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus.
Weakness: Less Elements: [needs a description]
(The weapon master can only have 2 elements, starting with 1 at academy student and acquiring the second at jounin; if the character has a combination release Kekkai genkai they get their two primary elements and their combination element at academy student, but never get another element; demons that give their hosts access to elements can still learn the jutsus for that element, but only up to their current rank, unless they are willing to take it as 1 of their two primary elements)
Rank Benefits
Genin
Mighty Rush: [description here]
( The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack. )
Chuunin
(place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin
(place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) : Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja
: -2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals----------------------------------------------------------------
Chakra and Jutsu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium [ 3/10: I assume this is three chakra points for ever ten chakra points ]
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Medical, Kageton. Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
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First Element: Suiton
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• Genjutsu Universal
• Bunshin no Jutsu
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First Element: Suiton
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Summoning Information
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.) Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ----------------------------------------------------------------
Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style)
current stage:](current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities: (brief description of the style)
current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities: (brief description of the style)
current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities----------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment
---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Shotel:
Name of Weapon: Chop-Chop.
Base Range:Close-Range [40in] Shinobi Tools Kunai:
Shuriken: Ten.
Makibishi: Fifteen.
Light bomb: Five.
Smoke bomb: Five.
Steel wire:Twelve-Feet. Apparel Head-Band Style: Standard Style.
Head-Band Location: Worn around the waist.
Head-Band Color: Seafoam Green.
Flak-Jacket style: Kiri-style.
Flak-Jacket color: Seafoam Green.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:59 pm
@Duo: "And living a different one that doesn't relate to learning post?" What does that mean? PM me so we don't clog this thread. @Anon: 
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:25 am
Exchanged my Elemtal Control for Speed Shinobi.
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:45 pm
What did I say about reposting the profile when you're done? Its correct now, but if you want to make a second character, I won't approve it if all the edit posts are not profile reposts that allow me to compare the two side by side.
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:33 pm
Oh, I forgot... sweatdrop lol. Yeah it was a quick fix, so I just did it and was quick about it.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:18 pm
From this point onward, all profiles posted here will be made using the new profile skeleton.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:20 pm
So does that mean we post our new profiles here rather than in a new thread?
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