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 Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2014 5:37 pm
Approved if you grant some indication that it's not a good idea to tap into his mind. Otherwise he can auto kill people left and right. Tons of people have auras and mind-altering abilities. You can also keep your elemental magic if you make that change.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2014 5:48 pm
Talent: Bloodline & Class: Fairhair, Knight
Talent Name: Stenvar
Talent Description: A genetic compilation of abilities.
Two point boost in speed
Anti-summoning warrior; he can use a sort of telepathic connection to nature to force enemy summons out of the battlefield.
Improved sense of smell; can more precisely sense enemies, their locations, etc.
Talent Weakness: Cannot have summons of his own.
Weakness against seduction and other mind-bending abilities; one rank. In the case of seduction it is his sense of smell being drawn to their pheromones. In other cases it's that same connection to nature backfiring.
How did the character get this talent?: By being plunged into the world from out of a fair-haired woman's vajra.
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:15 am
A Stray Sheep Approved if you grant some indication that it's not a good idea to tap into his mind. Otherwise he can auto kill people left and right. Tons of people have auras and mind-altering abilities. You can also keep your elemental magic if you make that change. Can I add some sort of aura around his mind that they can sense? Then they'll be like, "woah...Not goin' in there!"
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 12:23 pm
malavaes A Stray Sheep Approved if you grant some indication that it's not a good idea to tap into his mind. Otherwise he can auto kill people left and right. Tons of people have auras and mind-altering abilities. You can also keep your elemental magic if you make that change. Can I add some sort of aura around his mind that they can sense? Then they'll be like, "woah...Not goin' in there!" Sure? xD
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 3:17 pm
RPC Name: Gerrik Collins
Rank: Novice
Bloodline & Class: Human/Mechanist
Talent Description: You Can't Silence An Efficiant Mind - Add-On Creation and Advanced Functions can be learned at Novice and Expert ranks respectfully.
Talent Weakness: Gerrik cannot activate more machines than his alloted amount on his own. If he does, the excess machines are guaranteed to go berserk.
How did the character get this talent?: Gerrik has an over active imagination. Every ten seconds, a new idea for a machine or a way to improve old ones.
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 7:02 pm
This talent is extremely weak, you can edit it to make it stronger, if you want to keep it as is it's approved...I guess.
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 8:55 pm
Enzio Kageryuu This talent is extremely weak, you can edit it to make it stronger, if you want to keep it as is it's approved...I guess. Gerrik Collins Rank: Novice Bloodline & Class: Human/Mechanist Talent Description: You Can't Silence An Efficiant Mind - Add-On Creation and Advanced Functions can be learned at Novice and Expert ranks respectfully. He is also able to subclass into Gunslinger at Novice. Talent Weakness: Gerrik cannot activate more machines than his alloted amount on his own. If he does, the excess machines are guaranteed to go berserk. How did the character get this talent?: Gerrik has an over active imagination. Every ten seconds, a new idea for a machine or a way to improve old ones. This better or too much now? ><
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:01 pm
iSuperKamiTenchi-kun Enzio Kageryuu This talent is extremely weak, you can edit it to make it stronger, if you want to keep it as is it's approved...I guess. Gerrik Collins Rank: Novice Bloodline & Class: Human/Mechanist Talent Description: You Can't Silence An Efficiant Mind - Add-On Creation and Advanced Functions can be learned at Novice and Expert ranks respectfully. He is also able to subclass into Gunslinger at Novice. Talent Weakness: Gerrik cannot activate more machines than his alloted amount on his own. If he does, the excess machines are guaranteed to go berserk. How did the character get this talent?: Gerrik has an over active imagination. Every ten seconds, a new idea for a machine or a way to improve old ones. This better or too much now? >< It's still really weak. Example of a good one. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=63&t=19762803#364264989
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:34 pm
Enzio Kageryuu iSuperKamiTenchi-kun Enzio Kageryuu This talent is extremely weak, you can edit it to make it stronger, if you want to keep it as is it's approved...I guess. Gerrik Collins Rank: Novice Bloodline & Class: Human/Mechanist Talent Description: You Can't Silence An Efficiant Mind - Add-On Creation and Advanced Functions can be learned at Novice and Expert ranks respectfully. - Subclass of Gunslinger available at Novice and Revolver can be mastered - Add-Ons require one less add on slot and are twice as effective - One more machine per rank - Learning class skills takes three less posts. Talent Weakness: Gerrik cannot activate more machines than his alloted amount on his own. If he does, the excess machines are guaranteed to go berserk. He can also no longer use non-class elemental magic. How did the character get this talent?: Gerrik has an over active imagination. Every ten seconds, a new idea for a machine or a way to improve old ones. This better or too much now? >< It's still really weak. Example of a good one. ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=63&t=19762803#364264989What about.... This?
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 11:11 pm
iSuperKamiTenchi-kun Enzio Kageryuu iSuperKamiTenchi-kun Enzio Kageryuu This talent is extremely weak, you can edit it to make it stronger, if you want to keep it as is it's approved...I guess. Gerrik Collins Rank: Novice Bloodline & Class: Human/Mechanist Talent Description: You Can't Silence An Efficiant Mind - Add-On Creation and Advanced Functions can be learned at Novice and Expert ranks respectfully. - Subclass of Gunslinger available at Novice and Revolver can be mastered - Add-Ons require one less add on slot and are twice as effective - One more machine per rank - Learning class skills takes three less posts. Talent Weakness: Gerrik cannot activate more machines than his alloted amount on his own. If he does, the excess machines are guaranteed to go berserk. He can also no longer use non-class elemental magic. How did the character get this talent?: Gerrik has an over active imagination. Every ten seconds, a new idea for a machine or a way to improve old ones. This better or too much now? >< It's still really weak. Example of a good one. ]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=63&t=19762803#364264989What about.... This? If that's what you want. Approved.
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2014 1:15 am
RPC Name: Gemini Yamato
Rank: Novice
Bloodline & Class: Feral/Berserker
Talent Description: Enhanced Sense, Mental Mapping:
All of Gemini's senses are enhanced to the extreme. They are enhanced to the point where he literally constantly creates a mental map of a 50 foot radius around himself. This is due to the high amount of information constantly being relayed to his mind through his body. He creates a mental form of sight, in which he sees something in his mind due to all of this information, but not with his eyes. The mental sight does not give 100% knowledge, such as being incapable of telling colors, as colors require true sight. Everything simply appears as a frame like grid like state.
Talent Weakness: Extremely Loud, sounds can distort the mental map.
How did the character get this talent?: He was created blind, he developed it along the way of his journey.
Sample: (at least ten sentences)
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2014 2:08 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:50 am
RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro
Rank: Adept
Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist
Talent Description:
Curse of the Arm:
Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts.
Energy Frequency(Omega v1)
Rank: B
The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness.
Energy Frequency(Omega v2)
Rank: B
The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well.
Tainted Energy
Rank: B
The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack.
Energy Soul Shift
Rank: A
Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill.
For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user.
Talent Weakness:
Curse of the Arm(Negative)
The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is.
Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body.
Cannot learn the following:
Tool Tinkering: Flight
Terraforming Grenade
Stun Grenade (Flash Bang)
Wall of Fire
Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base.
How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear.
Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD
This has been in hiatus wait since February from when Hiro was last reviewing it. Never got approved because Hiro got busy with life. XD
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2014 4:52 pm
It's...kinda weak...but w/e Approved.
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