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 Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 4:47 am
A faint smile RPC Name: Lilith Odam Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Succubus/Necromancer Talent Description: Lilith has developed the ability to detect the emotional state of the people near her and manipulate her succubus aura to merely make people around her feel very wanting of the more pleasurable acts. They become lascivious ratchet hoes, making it easier for Lilith to seduce people. Talent Weakness: If the opponent thinks they will be harmed the aura is broken. How did the character get this talent?: Lilith naturally developed this talent through her years of being a workin' gal. Are you sure you just want something to compliment your seduction capabilities? You could wait a bit until you rank up to make a talent. At least then, you'll know what you lack in strength and how to fix that. If not, be a bit clearer with the talent. How easier is it to seduce people?
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:39 am
Hiro Hates Nothing A faint smile RPC Name: Lilith Odam Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Succubus/Necromancer Talent Description: Lilith has developed the ability to detect the emotional state of the people near her and manipulate her succubus aura to merely make people around her feel very wanting of the more pleasurable acts. They become lascivious ratchet hoes, making it easier for Lilith to seduce people. Talent Weakness: If the opponent thinks they will be harmed the aura is broken. How did the character get this talent?: Lilith naturally developed this talent through her years of being a workin' gal. Are you sure you just want something to compliment your seduction capabilities? You could wait a bit until you rank up to make a talent. At least then, you'll know what you lack in strength and how to fix that. If not, be a bit clearer with the talent. How easier is it to seduce people?
I wasn't sure exactly how much I could make it easier. What's the limit?
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 2:28 pm
A faint smile Hiro Hates Nothing A faint smile RPC Name: Lilith Odam Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Succubus/Necromancer Talent Description: Lilith has developed the ability to detect the emotional state of the people near her and manipulate her succubus aura to merely make people around her feel very wanting of the more pleasurable acts. They become lascivious ratchet hoes, making it easier for Lilith to seduce people. Talent Weakness: If the opponent thinks they will be harmed the aura is broken. How did the character get this talent?: Lilith naturally developed this talent through her years of being a workin' gal. Are you sure you just want something to compliment your seduction capabilities? You could wait a bit until you rank up to make a talent. At least then, you'll know what you lack in strength and how to fix that. If not, be a bit clearer with the talent. How easier is it to seduce people?
I wasn't sure exactly how much I could make it easier. What's the limit?
You could say that people one rank below you are instantly seduced, but you'd need a drawback like Shane's that says if you try and kill them or something, they snap out of it.
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Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 8:58 am
RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro
Rank: Adept
Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist
Talent Description:
Curse of the Arm:
Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts.
Energy Frequency(Alpha)
Rank: C(Passive once Expert rank)
The user is capable of releasing their energy out of their body, capable of tuning it to seek out certain energy types belonging to certain bloodlines. This can be used to track many of the same kind, or if the user tunes their energy directly onto a single person, they can track that character most anywhere, for there are areas that null energy tracking. However, if the user wishes to tune to a single person, they have to get a feel for the person's energy beforehand. When active, the frequency lasts for 3 posts.
Energy Frequency(Omega v1)
Rank: B
The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness.
Energy Frequency(Omega v2)
Rank: B
The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well.
Tainted Energy
Rank: B
The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack.
Energy Soul Shift
Rank: A
Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill.
For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user.
Talent Weakness:
Curse of the Arm(Negative)
The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is.
Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body.
Cannot learn the following:
Tool Tinkering: Flight
Terraforming Grenade
Stun Grenade (Flash Bang)
Wall of Fire
Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base.
How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear.
Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD
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Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:50 am
KnightsRoyal RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro Rank: Adept Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist Talent Description: Curse of the Arm: Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts. Energy Frequency(Alpha) Rank: C(Passive once Expert rank) The user is capable of releasing their energy out of their body, capable of tuning it to seek out certain energy types belonging to certain bloodlines. This can be used to track many of the same kind, or if the user tunes their energy directly onto a single person, they can track that character most anywhere, for there are areas that null energy tracking. However, if the user wishes to tune to a single person, they have to get a feel for the person's energy beforehand. When active, the frequency lasts for 3 posts. Energy Frequency(Omega v1) Rank: B The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness. Energy Frequency(Omega v2) Rank: B The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well. Tainted Energy Rank: B The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack. Energy Soul Shift Rank: A Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill. For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user. Talent Weakness: Curse of the Arm(Negative) The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is. Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body. Cannot learn the following: Tool Tinkering: Flight Terraforming Grenade Stun Grenade (Flash Bang) Wall of Fire Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base. How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear. Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD I won't allow anything that makes anyone able to track absolutely anyone from any given place at any given time. Pride is only capable of tracking someone in the same country/nation. I want to limit this to the same forum.
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Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 12:05 pm
H I R O I N G A C E KnightsRoyal RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro Rank: Adept Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist Talent Description: Curse of the Arm: Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts. Energy Frequency(Omega v1) Rank: B The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness. Energy Frequency(Omega v2) Rank: B The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well. Tainted Energy Rank: B The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack. Energy Soul Shift Rank: A Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill. For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user. Talent Weakness: Curse of the Arm(Negative) The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is. Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body. Cannot learn the following: Tool Tinkering: Flight Terraforming Grenade Stun Grenade (Flash Bang) Wall of Fire Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base. How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear. Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD I won't allow anything that makes anyone able to track absolutely anyone from any given place at any given time. Pride is only capable of tracking someone in the same country/nation. I want to limit this to the same forum. Removed the skill then. ^^ Anything else o'wonderful King or evaluation? XD
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Posted: Sat Feb 22, 2014 2:51 pm
H I R O I N G A C E A faint smile Hiro Hates Nothing A faint smile RPC Name: Lilith Odam Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Succubus/Necromancer Talent Description: Lilith has developed the ability to detect the emotional state of the people near her and manipulate her succubus aura to merely make people around her feel very wanting of the more pleasurable acts. They become lascivious ratchet hoes, making it easier for Lilith to seduce people. This makes it so people one rank under Lillith are instantly seduced. Talent Weakness: If the opponent thinks they will be harmed the aura is broken. If Lilith tries to kill the target they are snapped out of it as well. How did the character get this talent?: Lilith naturally developed this talent through her years of being a workin' gal. Are you sure you just want something to compliment your seduction capabilities? You could wait a bit until you rank up to make a talent. At least then, you'll know what you lack in strength and how to fix that. If not, be a bit clearer with the talent. How easier is it to seduce people?
I wasn't sure exactly how much I could make it easier. What's the limit?
You could say that people one rank below you are instantly seduced, but you'd need a drawback like Shane's that says if you try and kill them or something, they snap out of it.
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Posted: Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:25 pm
No one and nothing H I R O I N G A C E A faint smile Hiro Hates Nothing A faint smile RPC Name: Lilith Odam Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Succubus/Necromancer Talent Description: Lilith has developed the ability to detect the emotional state of the people near her and manipulate her succubus aura to merely make people around her feel very wanting of the more pleasurable acts. They become lascivious ratchet hoes, making it easier for Lilith to seduce people. This makes it so people one rank under Lillith are instantly seduced. Talent Weakness: If the opponent thinks they will be harmed the aura is broken. If Lilith tries to kill the target they are snapped out of it as well. How did the character get this talent?: Lilith naturally developed this talent through her years of being a workin' gal. Are you sure you just want something to compliment your seduction capabilities? You could wait a bit until you rank up to make a talent. At least then, you'll know what you lack in strength and how to fix that. If not, be a bit clearer with the talent. How easier is it to seduce people?
I wasn't sure exactly how much I could make it easier. What's the limit?
You could say that people one rank below you are instantly seduced, but you'd need a drawback like Shane's that says if you try and kill them or something, they snap out of it. Approved.
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Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:13 pm
KnightsRoyal H I R O I N G A C E KnightsRoyal RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro Rank: Adept Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist Talent Description: Curse of the Arm: Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts. Energy Frequency(Omega v1) Rank: B The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness. Energy Frequency(Omega v2) Rank: B The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well. Tainted Energy Rank: B The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack. Energy Soul Shift Rank: A Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill. For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user. Talent Weakness: Curse of the Arm(Negative) The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is. Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body. Cannot learn the following: Tool Tinkering: Flight Terraforming Grenade Stun Grenade (Flash Bang) Wall of Fire Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base. How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear. Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD I won't allow anything that makes anyone able to track absolutely anyone from any given place at any given time. Pride is only capable of tracking someone in the same country/nation. I want to limit this to the same forum. Removed the skill then. ^^ Anything else o'wonderful King or evaluation? XD My biggest question about this talent is why does a mechanist have a physical talent? It has nothing to do with his class or bloodline.
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Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:23 pm
H I R O I N G A C E KnightsRoyal H I R O I N G A C E KnightsRoyal RPC Name: 'Exceed' Nerro Rank: Adept Bloodline & Class: Human Mechanist Talent Description: Curse of the Arm: Exceed's left arm is not his, but instead came from someone close to his line, so it was easier to have attached due to their blood types being the same. However, this arm is the main source for Exceed's Fire elemental talent, since it has the Mage Revolt implant. Due to who the original user of the arm, the blood is tainted and contains energy ramnents of the user's spirit. This arm is what is behind Exceed's magical talents and being able to perform certain techniques that can be pushed off the charts. Energy Frequency(Omega v1) Rank: B The user draws a circle in the air before him, giving it a small design before he pushes it forward a few inches. While this hangs in the air, it acts as an anti-air attack, capable of shooting forth a powerful spear of the user's aura out. However, this can only activate if a foe were to attack from the air and only in the air will the opponent be. The Frequency circle lasts for 5 posts waiting on aerial movements from the foe before dispersing into nothingness. Energy Frequency(Omega v2) Rank: B The user draws a small insignia on the ground before a circle of 10 ft radius appears underneath them. The frequency acts as a energy generator, recovering any ally and the user's energy by E rank each post it remains active, and it takes off E rank energy from any attacks that require energy. This lasts for 5 posts but it can be dispersed by any ground pound attacks, weak to most earth techniques as well. Tainted Energy Rank: B The user traces the energy into the air and strikes out at it with the left arm, turning the energy black as it shoots out a number of 5 energy arrows. If any of them were to strike it would do D rank damage to the enemy and drain them of E rank energy for each arrow that hits. This has a 3 post cooldown after using to make sure that Exceed can recover from using his left arm's energy attack. Energy Soul Shift Rank: A Restriction: Requires the User to be near-death before using this skill. For a moment, upon reaching near death, Exceed will allow his left arms energy to spread throughout his body. The energy will spread like demented wildfire, reaching the soul and the mind of Exceed before he experiences some minor changes. His left arm will be engulfed in flames as his aura changes from whatever it is to one made out of shadow images. Exceed's technique list becomes invalid to be used and instead becomes a set of new skills + the fire elemental. Due to the change, Exceed becomes someone known as Rizen Nerro, a berzerker with fire elemental attacks. The only skill set besides the flame set available to be used is Rage Fist(Up to Stage Three) and only two Berzerker skills(Ki-Assault + Force Breaker). This only lasts for 3 posts and has the user stuck in whatever is equipped upon the user. Talent Weakness: Curse of the Arm(Negative) The user sustains a -150 Energy to their max energy pool, being forced to limit themselves each time with how their energy use is. Fire-based attacks now cost double energy to perform due to the dual frequency of the arm and the main human body. Cannot learn the following: Tool Tinkering: Flight Terraforming Grenade Stun Grenade (Flash Bang) Wall of Fire Can only subclass into Gunslinger and learn the Revolver + Shotgun skill set along with the base. How did the character get this talent?: A Mission from the king and being forced into a terrible nightmare to fight against his worst fear. Sample: Do you really need some samples from me on this one? XD I won't allow anything that makes anyone able to track absolutely anyone from any given place at any given time. Pride is only capable of tracking someone in the same country/nation. I want to limit this to the same forum. Removed the skill then. ^^ Anything else o'wonderful King or evaluation? XD My biggest question about this talent is why does a mechanist have a physical talent? It has nothing to do with his class or bloodline. Well, the reason why he has a Physical Talent is moreso to reveal some mystery about his time in Fraxen. The arm is actually from his brother as you can tell, it isn't suppose to be dealt with his class or the Human bloodline, but moreso his history of life. His Brother was a Human Berzerker, with Exceed having lost his original arm in a big falling out at Fraxen, which is why he chooses to speak of the simple things he's done whenever asked. I mean... we're quite far in the healing practices to replace lost limbs with new ones, most of the time cybernetics. So I thought, why not give him a reason as to why he possesses the Mage Revolt thing and the arm came to me. ^^;;;
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2014 10:15 pm
RPC Name: (hmmm no name yet)
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Waktu Ninja
Talent Description: hunters mask: naturally bending the air around his body. No amount of hearing or scent increasing abilities can detect him. He is also invisible to thermal imaging as the air regulates his thermal mask blending into his surroundings.
Talent Weakness:
This skill is passive but at a small price. Anyone who can detec magic can detect him. There is no disabling it.
How did the character get this talent?: Years of living on his own in the wilds he had to fend for himself. He always had an affinity for the wind element. He had trouble hunting any food so with his affinity he found a way for him to easily stalk his prey without running away.
Sample: (let me know if you need one)
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2014 11:56 pm
RPC Name: Shinji Shikamoto
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Vampirism/Cleric
Talent Description: Allows Shinji to heal himself and his allies through the manipulation and conjuring of darkness.
Talent Weakness: Healing through darkness corrupts the target adding a temporary damage/speed debuff (depending on where the heal was made) which decays slowly as time goes by. Darkness heals are not as strong as normal heals.
How did the character get this talent?: Shinji has lived in the shadows for his entire life. Adapting and conjuring the darkness to benefit himself. Through years of living within the shadows and striving for survival, Shinji has gained the ability to heal wounds using the powers of the darkness.
Sample: Shinji noticed the shattered femur of his ally and quickly resolved to renew it to its original state. However, in this cavernous and shadowy hole in which no light illuminates reality, Shinji made an endeavor to bring back the remains through the manipulation of darkness. The murkiness of the shadows formed a claw-shaped figure that trespassed his ally's paralyzed leg, allowing for an extremely painful refurbishment of the bone structure. As the figure exited the leg it remained as silent as it had once come, and the new leg was now as it was beforehand. Shinji gave a silent sigh of relief as the claw-like substance disappeared into the abyss. Shinji examined his ally's leg for any lurking complications, and Shinji noticed that there were remnants of corrupt darkness inside the bone marrow. Shinji knew that the leg was going to be torpid for a few moments. There was nothing else that Shinji could do, without the mericiful rays of light, Shinji could not completely rejuvenate his ally's leg. "Perhaps it will just go away will due time, just like a cold", Shinji thought.
Do I need to add specifics in there? Like how much weaker or how much the debuff is?
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:30 pm
RPC Name: Brydent deValois
Rank: Adept. 300% OG
Bloodline & Class: Werewolf, Knight
Talent Name: Halves
Talent Description: More in touch with his animal half, Brydent is known for a particular ability, one that is simple but can effect him in many ways. It is the ability to be fully in touch with darkness rather than light, with supernatural rather than human. Brydent has mastered his feral side, and so it is significantly stronger.
First of all, Brydent can freely swing through a transformation and a regular human body. This is essentially true of all werewolves, especially living in Nocturne, but for him it is not something that is uncontrollable. It is not an impulse, but a desire, a want. This means that his transformation is a weapon to be used, not a monster to be tamed. In his lycan form, his werewolf abilities are cut in cost by a rank.
In regards to his transformation, the aesthetics will differ. All that will be visibly different is black veins clinging to his arm, and a deep and ominous golden glow in his eyes. His hair will also start to spike, and his face will seem... angered.
Second, his senses are more adept. He can smell and differentiate between smells much farther than other lycans, and he can also "smell" energy alongside the lycan's regular ability of being able to feel it and see it. This is extremely useful for sensory.
Finally, he can project some of his energy into any canine, even a regular dog, and be able to see and smell through them. This is, of course, meant for spying. He must have at least touched the canine in order for this to work. Once he has touched them, he has full control of their will and everything they think is linked to him.
Talent Weakness: More keen to his animal/werewolf side, he is two ranks weaker to all silver, making it easily and inevitably fatal for him.
Furthermore, his full transformation costs 100 more energy than usual, when it is forced into rather than eased by the presence of a full moon.
How did the character get this talent?: He was born by the thousand blades of Shane's enemies, forged in the flames of Hiro the Dreadfire.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:32 pm
Yes, there need to be a lot more specifics. First off, how much energy does it cost to heal them? How strong is the heal? How exactly does the "darkness and shadows" heal them? What's the debuff's specifics? Right now it's really vague and easily super OP, so it needs a lot of specifying.
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