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Fist of the Bro Star

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:02 am


A character may have ONE special talent that makes he/she unique. This is usually the product of the character's past, where something may have happened to set them apart from others. For example, a warrior who was made blind during a battle may have developed strengthened hearing and other senses to make up for his lack of sight.

[b]RPC Name:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Bloodline & Class:[/b]
[b]Talent Description:[/b] (what does it do)
[b]Talent Weakness:[/b] (you have to have one. no talent can be gained without losing something along the way.)
[b]How did the character get this talent?:[/b]
[b]Sample:[/b] (at least ten sentences)
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:14 pm


RPC Name:
Rank:
Talent Description: Allow Lyethery to learn hand to hand combat skills like a berserker.
Talent Weakness: No weapon skill.
How did the character get this talent?: Lyethery was once a berserker for the Yuran Empire. He died as a berserker but was revived as an undead feral with no past memory. His body though still remember that they were once a berserker.
Sample:

"How do you do that?" The surprised man asked Lyethery as he stood over the traitor dying body. Five fingers mark surrounded the area where his heart is. Blood was flowing out of his mouth as he lied there, dying. Without knowing it, Lyethery have performed a hand to hand technique that could only be learned by a berserker, the skill that is known as Heart Explosion, and not only that but he did it without even touching the man. He expelled his chi out of his fingers, something in which only one who have mastered the hand to hand style Dim Mak can do, and only berserker can do that. Lyethery slowly backed away from the dying man as he took his final breath and succumbed to the darkness. He stared at his hands as though they were something that is not his. Not knowing it, Lyethery have unleashed the once dead part of his old self. He have awakened the sleeping berserker that was thought to be forgotten. And without knowing it, Lyethery have opened up the door that will allow him to recreate the ultimate combat style. It is though too bad that he can not learn any weapon skill. He just can't seem to get the hang of it. If only he could learn a weapon style, any really. He would rule the world then, if only.

tinymini7


Ro Mayvine

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:45 pm


Um Tiny re-read your weakness.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:48 pm


yeah...that's the thing. It meant that he can not learn any weapon skill and he can't learn any berserker skill...you know, since he is an ex berserker it kind of seem like he could learn a berserker skill...well it seem right at the time in which I made it...or is there something else that is wrong with it?

tinymini7


Ro Mayvine

Pesky Ghost

PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:56 pm


tinymini7
yeah...that's the thing. It meant that he can not learn any weapon skill and he can't learn any berserker skill...you know, since he is an ex berserker it kind of seem like he could learn a berserker skill...well it seem right at the time in which I made it...or is there something else that is wrong with it?
*facepalm* The way you have it set up, Lyethery will gain no benefits from this talent. You've described it so that he can learn and use Berzerker-only skills, but his weakness is that he can't learn and use Berzerker-only skills.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 5:02 pm


well...I don't know whether Fenrir would allow the talent to pass or not...I'll change it.

tinymini7


The Urban Superstition

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:30 pm


tinymini7
RPC Name:
Rank:
Talent Description: Allow Lyethery to learn hand to hand combat skills like a berserker.
Talent Weakness: No weapon skill.
How did the character get this talent?: Lyethery was once a berserker for the Yuran Empire. He died as a berserker but was revived as an undead feral with no past memory. His body though still remember that they were once a berserker.
Sample:

"How do you do that?" The surprised man asked Lyethery as he stood over the traitor dying body. Five fingers mark surrounded the area where his heart is. Blood was flowing out of his mouth as he lied there, dying. Without knowing it, Lyethery have performed a hand to hand technique that could only be learned by a berserker, the skill that is known as Heart Explosion, and not only that but he did it without even touching the man. He expelled his chi out of his fingers, something in which only one who have mastered the hand to hand style Dim Mak can do, and only berserker can do that. Lyethery slowly backed away from the dying man as he took his final breath and succumbed to the darkness. He stared at his hands as though they were something that is not his. Not knowing it, Lyethery have unleashed the once dead part of his old self. He have awakened the sleeping berserker that was thought to be forgotten. And without knowing it, Lyethery have opened up the door that will allow him to recreate the ultimate combat style. It is though too bad that he can not learn any weapon skill. He just can't seem to get the hang of it. If only he could learn a weapon style, any really. He would rule the world then, if only.


Epically Denied.
That'd go against the whole point of having the skills be berserker only. Nice try though!
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:44 pm


yeah, I was going to do something else but then I thought about dim mak and just got to try it.

RPC Name: Lyethery Grey Time
Rank: Novice
Talent Description: Any physical related attack is one rank stronger.
Talent Weakness: Any magic attack is one rank weaker
How did the character get this talent?: Before he died Lyethery was a natural born fighter. When he died those skill was forgotten but his body did not forget it.
Sample:

Lyethery ran toward his opponent before the man could get into a ready stance. He waited until he was close enough to perform the attack before taking a strong step forward and bend his body, bringing his right leg up. He twisted his waist and kick out with his right leg as he swung his hands back. His knee flew through the air and hit his opponent on the side, cracking the man ribs. The move, if perform by a normal fighter, would not be able to break bones so easily, but Lyethery is not a normal fighter. His attack was much stronger than the normal. He quickly flipped backward, placing distance between him and his opponent.
The man did not try and pursue him but instead began chanting some words of power as he clutched his side. Lyethery knew that this would be bad as he too began summoning up his own power. Lyethery opponent whip his staff, sending a wave of air toward him. He in return kicked the ground, sending a powerful wave of earth at his opponent. The two spell canceled each other out, even though his is supposingly more powerful. It was due to his weak magic power that his magic attack was actually weaker than the normal. Instead of having an S rank power, his attack was instead A rank. Dust filled the air and the battle ended with his opponent on the floor and him standing on top of him.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:47 pm


Tiny, tell me. What all magical attacks does a Feral have?

None. Though you have elements.
I'll compromise with you. If you really want this skill, you'll only be able to get up to, oh, let's saaay~ D rank elemental skills?

Before there are any complications, you get one element. That's it.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:49 pm


ok, so only learn up to d rank magical skill...k

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:25 pm


Alright, then it is accepted.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:35 am


What? SO no one wants to be special and talented?

Only reason I haven't made a talent yet is because I'm still waiting.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:27 am


RPC Name: Xiomar of the Deep Sea
Rank: Master

Talent Description: In short, the talent is basically Psychometry. The ability to establish information on an object, person, place, or thing. When using this, he can make out all the information of something. Such as it's past, purpose, race, gender, faction,rank, and skills. All in all, he will know everything from contact with another RPC, creature, or item.

Talent Weakness: In gathering information, he displays a slight pain, often feeling what the other person feels. If they had a happy past however, the opposite happens. A euphoria of happiness washes over him, almost making him seem drunk.
Using this talent requires 100 energy, which can only be regained with a whole day (RL), meaning if he uses it constantly, he becomes weakened.
Another slight problem is Xiomar's memory, which can only hold so much information, albeit a grand amount. He keeps all the information he collects on file in Uuma, Aramil, hidden away in the vault.

How did the character get this talent?: Because of his magical prowess, he left home early to seek fortune. In seeking fortune, he came across a tribe of people who worshipped "A white haired man, who could summon storms." It so happened Xiomar looked identical to this man, and so they tattooed his body with an ink, made from their "gods" blood, thus giving him his talent.

Sample: Xiomar stood at the scene of a murder. A man, ripped in half laid in pieces on the floor. A cat sat in the corner, cleaning its body off. With a snap of his fingers, Xiomar used magic to pull the cat to his hand (Acsio). He began to read the information from the cat. It was exactly 13 years, 47 day, 1 hour, 42 minutes, and 12 seconds old at that time. It had lived in Aramil since the day it's master had brought it there. It liked sharpening its claws on the walls of the room too. As Xiomar sifted through the information, he found what he was looking for. A man, from the cat's view was huge, had become some other creature, one that snarled and had large claws, and ripped the man in half with ease. Xiomar saw as the cat saw, recalling the memory even better then the cat could. The murderer was a Werewolf. Although he knew nothing more, he knew what the murder's face looked like, and that was enough. He quickly set out to find the murderer.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:36 am


Urban to over powered.And I know a thing about over powering!

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