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-X Duo Yiro X-

Devoted Businessman

PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:48 pm


@ Lilly: Hey to you too. : P

Only this time, Cobra requested I join Suna. As for the info, I went through 4 trial and era clans (Nara, Hatake, Uchiha, Ghost Weilders) before actually finding one I liked, adding the fact that it was 3 o'clock in the morning didn't help at all, my mind was fried.

As for Cobra approving it, I'm totally fine with it and I also have a couple of Questions for him, since he created/revamped it.

1.) When Senbonzakura is activated and the wielder of the ability is rendered unconscious, what happens to the weapon itself? Does it hover motionlessly, return to it's original form or what?

2.) Are the 'cherry leaves' considered a part of your body in combat? Meaning, if you where hit while using them, what would happen.

3.) When having the Senbonzakura out for an extended period of post, will it constantly deplete chakra?

Those are my questions that really hit me when I saw it, it's a great clan, it just might need a Q&A or something. xD Thanks in advance, Cobra.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:59 pm


-X Duo Yiro X-
@ Lilly: Hey to you too. : P

Only this time, Cobra requested I join Suna. As for the info, I went through 4 trial and era clans (Nara, Hatake, Uchiha, Ghost Weilders) before actually finding one I liked, adding the fact that it was 3 o'clock in the morning didn't help at all, my mind was fried.

As for Cobra approving it, I'm totally fine with it and I also have a couple of Questions for him, since he created/revamped it.

1.) When Senbonzakura is activated and the wielder of the ability is rendered unconscious, what happens to the weapon itself? Does it hover motionlessly, return to it's original form or what?

2.) Are the 'cherry leaves' considered a part of your body in combat? Meaning, if you where hit while using them, what would happen.

3.) When having the Senbonzakura out for an extended period of post, will it constantly deplete chakra?

Those are my questions that really hit me when I saw it, it's a great clan, it just might need a Q&A or something. xD Thanks in advance, Cobra.

1. It would return to it's original form and fall to the ground.

2. Ever watched Bleach?... no the cherry leaves are a separate construct. The whole point of using them as a shield would be pointless if the user was harmed in the process.

3. Did you read the bloodline?

Cobra_X
Captain

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-X Duo Yiro X-

Devoted Businessman

PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 8:25 pm


Cobra_X
-X Duo Yiro X-
@ Lilly: Hey to you too. : P

Only this time, Cobra requested I join Suna. As for the info, I went through 4 trial and era clans (Nara, Hatake, Uchiha, Ghost Weilders) before actually finding one I liked, adding the fact that it was 3 o'clock in the morning didn't help at all, my mind was fried.

As for Cobra approving it, I'm totally fine with it and I also have a couple of Questions for him, since he created/revamped it.

1.) When Senbonzakura is activated and the wielder of the ability is rendered unconscious, what happens to the weapon itself? Does it hover motionlessly, return to it's original form or what?

2.) Are the 'cherry leaves' considered a part of your body in combat? Meaning, if you where hit while using them, what would happen.

3.) When having the Senbonzakura out for an extended period of post, will it constantly deplete chakra?

Those are my questions that really hit me when I saw it, it's a great clan, it just might need a Q&A or something. xD Thanks in advance, Cobra.

1. It would return to it's original form and fall to the ground.

2. Ever watched Bleach?... no the cherry leaves are a separate construct. The whole point of using them as a shield would be pointless if the user was harmed in the process.

3. Did you read the bloodline?


1.) Ok

2.) Not enough I guess, lol. I was thinking in a more literate term, as Genin, per say. Sometimes the user might not be able to bring put it to use fast enough.

3.) Yes I did, but as I said it was 3 o'clock in the morning. I'll check again now. Lilly's post actually reminded me about it. So it just came back to mind.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 9:41 pm


RPC Name: Mileena Mayu

Bloodline/Clan Requested: Mayu Clan

Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I chose this Clan because, honestly, I have been thinking of making my character have these traits from the very beginning. I searched the Bloodlines thread and stopped immediately upon finding this one. It apprehended my interest in its telekinetic hands and refused to grant release. Nothing can compare to the power of the mind!

What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The Mayu Clan is a group of inordinately intelligent individuals. Though lacking the physical strength of all other clans and making due without illusory paranoia, they make up for it with the sheer power of their mind. They are able to move objects or people with but a thought. By raising a hand to the desired target, their ability takes effect and sends said target flying. They are devoid of the ability to speak...yet this gives rise to an ability far greater. Prying into the minds of others, whether to learn secrets or simply to converse. It has its limitations however. One with this ability cannot easily force themselves into the mind of a strong-willed individual. They cannot influence a person's actions to the point of causing them to injure themselves. They can move a person around, but they cannot turn a person's own weapon against them. This ability does not come without cost. The user spends a certain amount of mental stamina and Chakra for each ability used. Meaning that, though having no need for physical stamina, both are of the same concept.

Please supply a Brief RP Sample:

Hate. Sadness. Despair. The feelings came in waves and Mileena was unable to tune the entirety of them out. She could do nothing but watch as the village burned down around her. The massive fires crackled and roared, soliciting terrified screams from some of the children. A woman bellowed to the right, and Mileena's head veered around as she noticed another's consciousness creeping closer to her position. The villagers stepped back quickly as the large figure approached. The man stopped only once he was standing directly before Mileena, the only one who refused to step aside as he strode through the village. He towered over her slight frame menacingly, casting a shadow on her as he blotted out the moon's glow. "Get out of my way little girl!" Mileena stood her ground as she peered into his soul. He grew angrier by the second, and faster than should have been able for him, he lifted one massive hand and brought it around in attempts at connecting with her face. It came close, but found that it only made contact with the air next to Mileena's beautiful face. She held one small hand up, touching him on his broad chest before he was sent flying backwards through the air, landing on a pile of burned wood.

The man stayed down for a while before he was back on his feet, shock and confusion creasing his face more than anything else. He had gotten orders to destroy the small village, and was told that none of the villagers were Ninja. His intel was apparently wrong. In a flash, he had a Kunai in his hand, but Mileena had foreseen this in his mind and was all too prepared for it. With her index finger protruded, and her right hand set before her with palm upraised, she motioned to the Kunai with a flick of her wrist and it flew toward her, only to fall a few feet away. The man ran toward her with deadly speed, and he would have collided with her had she not stepped away at the eleventh hour. He brought a fist around to meet her, but winced in pain as his hand collided with a solid barrier of sorts. He found himself flying away into yet another building. The villagers began laughing, and most of them had produced weapons from the debris lying around.

The large man found himself pinned to the ground by an unseen force as Mileena held her hand over him. "You have caused far too much trouble here. You are no longer welcome". His face took on a visor of horror at her unspoken words as he found himself the victim of the villagers' assault as they bludgeoned him with all the blunt debris they could find. The children threw stones of various sizes on him until he was rendered unconscious. Mileena felt exhausted when she finally released him from her ability. She fell to the ground and fainted as Ninja from the a neighbour villages finally arrived. The man was taken into custody and the villagers began to make steady repairs on the village.

JellytheBeany

Omnipresent Noob


Deil Grist
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 11:31 pm


Jelani564

Actually, the Mayu aren't a family at all in terms of blood relation. It says in the bloodline that the genes for this bloodline appear at random. The label Mayu is applied because that is Daichi's last name, who is the first person to show these traits, and so people of this bloodline are categorized as having the last name Mayu (this wasn't explained in the bloodline, but it's a good reason why everyone calls them by this last name unless the rpc prefers to be called by their real last name). I think I'm going to remove "Clan" from the bloodline header so there is no confusion.

Mayu actually don't have the ability to "influence" the minds of people through sheer brain power, except in the instance of Battle Meditation. Telepathy simply allows you to share information and thoughts with some and determine the thoughts, emotions, and intentions of others with varying degrees of complexity and ability based on your rank.

Telekinetic moves actually cost chakra as well as mental stamina when they are techniques of your rank. You didn't mention that they cost Chakra, only Mental Stamina.

I like the RP sample. It's too bad we have to wait to get to jounin rank to get that kind of power though >.< Oh well, the mental abilities more than make up for the slow power curve.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 11:41 pm


Deil Grist
Jelani564

Actually, the Mayu aren't a family at all in terms of blood relation. It says in the bloodline that the genes for this bloodline appear at random. The label Mayu is applied because that is Daichi's last name, who is the first person to show these traits, and so people of this bloodline are categorized as having the last name Mayu (this wasn't explained in the bloodline, but it's a good reason why everyone calls them by this last name unless the rpc prefers to be called by their real last name). I think I'm going to remove "Clan" from the bloodline header so there is no confusion.

Mayu actually don't have the ability to "influence" the minds of people through sheer brain power, except in the instance of Battle Meditation. Telepathy simply allows you to share information and thoughts with some and determine the thoughts, emotions, and intentions of others with varying degrees of complexity and ability based on your rank.

Telekinetic moves actually cost chakra as well as mental stamina when they are techniques of your rank. You didn't mention that they cost Chakra, only Mental Stamina.

I like the RP sample. It's too bad we have to wait to get to jounin rank to get that kind of power though >.< Oh well, the mental abilities more than make up for the slow power curve.


Aww... I think it would be better if they were a family. Oh well. You're the boss 8D

Allow me to stave off some of the confusion here. When I said 'influence', I didn't mean overriding a persons brain or anything to those extremes. I used the word lightly to mean moving a person's own body against their will. This is why I clearly stated that they influence a person's 'actions'.

I forgot to mention that. I really wanted to start on the rp sample. I'll edit now.

Thank you. I know that these skills aren't for my use. At the moment at least. Please let me know if you want the rp sample to be longer. I'd be more than happy to oblige.

JellytheBeany

Omnipresent Noob


Aqua Fall 12

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:35 am


R-r-r-repost!

RPC Name: Cory Kiseru (Not created yet)

Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ippukuton (Smoke Release) - Kiseru Clan

Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Truth be told, I've been meaning to use this bloodline after I created it back in VR. I think it will fit well with my RPC because he uses his techniques to distract his opponents, and this bloodline seemed perfect for when he has to compete in 1-on-1 battles.

What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: All of the techniques used by the clan utilize smoke that is created by their bodies or their kiseru. Members are immune to their own smoke techniques, and can see through their own smoke. When the smoke generated by the Kiseru member is inhaled, smoke will fill the lungs and make breathing harder. If enough smoke is inhaled, breathing will gradually degenerate from trouble breathing to possible suffocation. Techniques that don't exclusively use smoke also utilize cinders to hide within black smoke and burn the opponent.

Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
Cory got into his battle stance, preparing to face his enemy: An enemy shinobi from Konohagakure named Kevin. He hoped that Kevin was not a genjutsu user, or at least stupid enough to the point he didn't notice when he was under an illusion. Cory performed his handsigns, and activated a genjutsu to place on Kevin, only to have the genjutsu deactivated by an abnormally powerful kai. Cory flinched from the ferocity of Kevin's chakra, and decided it wouldn't be too smart to keep trying to use genjutsu against someone who knew their way around chakra and noticing abnormalities within the illusions. Instead, Cory tapped into his chakra, and performed handsigns as he focused his gray chakra into his lungs, and spit out a glob of solid smoke at Kevin's feet, knowing that his bloodline would be the only thing that could save him in this ordeal.
"Smoke Bomb Technique!" He announced afterwards, the glob nestled in grass in front of Kevin. Cory kept his calm composure despite being terrified of Kevin, fearing that his own physical prowess would allow Kevin to gain the upper hand. But thankfully, Cory had a balanced breakfast.
He took his kiseru from his jacket, and place it in his mouth, inhaling some smoke as he got into a position to run towards Kevin.

The smokey glob detonated, and Cory began his sprint towards Kevin, using the smoke to obscure his advance as he used smoke body to emit smoke from his pores and ultimately cover the area in a haze. Cory averted his course from toward Kevin, to around him, to affectively cover the area in a thick smokescreen. Cory could see perfectly through the smoke at Kevin, who he could see was completely flustered by the fact that he couldn't see and that his lungs started to get irritated. Cory breathed in the smoke, welcoming it's sweet scent as if it were clean, outdoor air. Cory hated using ninjutsu, seeing as how it was taxing on his body as well his mind, feeling his muscles getting tired, but his chakra pools still fairly strong. With his kiseru still in his mouth, Cory let loose a few sparks from his kiseru, the cinders being seen through the smoke by Kevin.
"I can see you!" Kevin yelled, and ran towards Cory.
Side-stepping to the left as he let the cinders flicker out, Cory decided that we should end the battle as quickly as possible. As Kevin whizzed by, Cory tripped him as he took a kunai from his holster on his thigh. Kevin laid on the ground face down, still skidding across the ground by the time Cory looked back. He saw him get up on his knees, and start to cough hysterically as the smoke filled his lungs.
"Please!" Kevin coughed, "Stop!"
Cory outstretched his arms, and slowly moved them to his sides as if he were tearing something open, and the smokescreen parted away from Kevin and faded. He walked up to Kevin.
"You are free to go if you are able, but if I come back here in 15 minutes, I'll finish the job." Cory threatened, doing an about-face and walking away from Kevin.
"Wh-who are you?" Kevin coughed, holding his sore throat as if he were choking.
"My name is of no importance... So please... Leave."
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:53 am


[Lilly] [Vice Captain]

"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
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Duo: =D
Well Suna's a pretty nice place. Shame its all filled with males though. XP (Malfrost is sooo gonna kill me if/when he reads this. lol)

Jelani: Hi again! Well from the looks of it, everything is in order so I would say
APPROVED! Unless Deil has a veto on it. Lets hope not. xp

Cory: Great job. Thanks for all the minor edits.
APPROVED!



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White Water Lilly
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JellytheBeany

Omnipresent Noob

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 3:43 am


*Jumps up and down*
I'm so happy now! So how soon can I start?!

P.S. If meaningless spamming is illicit then by all means, remove this.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 3:48 am


Jelani564
*Jumps up and down*
I'm so happy now! So how soon can I start?!

P.S. If meaningless spamming is illicit then by all means, remove this.


lol, it's alright. As to when you can stat, as soon as you get you're profiled approved by Cobra, you're good to go. mrgreen

White Water Lilly
Vice Captain


JellytheBeany

Omnipresent Noob

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 3:54 am


Then I'm resigned to waiting patiently.

*Sits down for exactly five seconds, fiddling with my fingers*

What the hell is taking so long?!

*Another five seconds pass and I jump out of my seat, causing the chair to teeter then fall*

I can't wait any longer!! I might as well just shrivel up and die right now!

*Turns around and storms out of the room with steam coming from every pore*

XD
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 6:27 am


I pulled a all-nighter! Now I'm going to bed...

*Waits patiently for Cobra to approve the Clan.*

@ Lilly: 0.o I might need to re-think that one... xp
I don't think Cobra knows you want him to have the final say on the clan approval...

-X Duo Yiro X-

Devoted Businessman


The Sorting Helmet

O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:13 pm


RPC Name: Altrius Albane

Bloodline/Clan Requested: Kaguya Bloodline

Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: (( -Intelligible Snarls- ... I hate Apps... )) Altrius is a agile type of fighter and he relies on sheer agility and speed to take out his opponents. I have used the Kaguya blood line in another guild with a character named Akira. I'd like to try out in this guild since it is more "stage" like.

What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: A Kaguya is his own weapon, that being his own bone structure. They are originally from the land of water and have been supposedly wiped out. These men and women have the ability to manipulate their bones in many different ways. By combining a mixture of agile dances and taijutsu, a Kaguya member can be one devastating weapon. << Nngh. Hopefully this is enough >>

Please supply a Brief RP Sample:

Sand blew in the wind, creating a dusty brown veil in Sunagakure. The Shinobi named Altrius Albane, a Kaguya through birth but not in name was on a mission with a squad. They were typical shinobi, mainly those of lesser value in Altrius' mind. Yet, they were required for the task at hand, one that required the neutralization of a rouge. Fun...

A plan had already been set, an ambush. Yuki, another member who was a natural weapon user was to lure the rouge into the vicinity of the ambush. While that was done, another member named Haito was to inflict the enemy with his genjutsu. Altrius' job was simple, confront the man with Yuki as support. Though, Altrius was not a front on fighter like most people would think because of his heritage; the Kaguya bloodline. But, he was naturally agile and speedy along with his own twist of utilizing the bloodline to his advantage.

The day dragged on as Altrius sat in his hiding spot, waiting for Yuki to run back and commence the plan. Sitting all day in the sand made him tired and irritable. A few ideas of Yuki's distraction going wrong had also floated across the young boy's mind as well. She may had been annoying, but Altrius didn't like losing a friend.

"Help!"

A plea for help disturbed Altrius' thoughts as he almost leaped out of hiding. It was Yuki. The teen peeked above his hiding spot and saw a man with brown hair and a typical cowl of the Suna Ninja. With him, he had both Haito and Yuki tied up. b*****d... Altrius thought to himself as he shoved one hand forward, spreading his fingers apart.

Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets

His fingers shot out five (one from each finger) milk white bullet projectiles towards the Rouge. They whirled through the air with almost a hissing sound as the spin took place. Altrius half hoped his attack would land without the man knowing, but he did and surprisingly easily. The brown haired swordsman ducked off to his right as the bone bullet landed with pelting sounds in the brown sandy earth behind himself. "Appears I missed a runt..." the man said as Altrius came out of his own hiding location, decked out in his dull brown uniform suited for the sand.

A cold expression played upon Altrius's face as he walked forward towards the rouge, silently challenging him to a fight. He spoke no words and commenced the first action against his opponent. Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows Two bone white protrusions struck through his palms as the young blonde haired teen rushed forth at his enemy. His right hand aimed to strike at the man's chest, who easily moved off towards the right flank of Altrius' initial strike.

The rouge drew out a katana and went to do a downward diagonal angle to sever the kidney area in Altrius' body. However, the teen anticipated the attack and twirled counter clockwise (to the left) and parried the blow with his left bone spike. As he did that, the right bone was ready to stab into the chest to pierce the vital organs.

It was a successful hit as blood flew into the air and spilled out onto the dusty ground. A hoarse growl erupted from the man's mouth as he stumbled backwards from the mortal wound dealt by the Kaguya teen. Altrius had retracted his bone like weapons and stood in silence, watching his opponent stumble onto his back like a helpless infant. From what he could tell, he was lung shot. The sounds of his breathing was harsh and blood flowed from the gaping chest wound and from the mouth.

Like a fish out of water, the man laid there dying as Altrius casually walked over to finish the man off. He placed his left foot onto the man's throat, pushing down hard and closing his airway. His pale blue eyes stared down into the dying man as one finger pointed directly between his eyes. With no expression upon his face, Altrius spoke "This is for Sunagakure, treachery will be dealt with in blood..." the cold sultry voice rang out of his voice as the boy aimed his hand. Wasting no more time, another bullet shot out of his finger tip and right between the eyes of the rouge. His life was ended swiftly at that moment, spraying more of the blood onto the sand.

Altrius left the corpse in the dust and went to free his allies and return home. Another day, another death.


((( Bluuuuuuurg, sorry for the length... I suck at RP samples being short << I made this one a bit...story based. ))
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:58 pm


RPC Name: Konaga, Seiji

Bloodline/Clan Requested: Konaga

Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: It's an interesting bloodline to have, I've liked it since I've seen it. I like it most so I thought I'd try it out once.

What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: The most iconic characteristic of the Konaga is their infinite supply of Chakra. And their Chakra is so intense and powerful that it causes permanent distress on the body. The Konaga are born with this pain; much stronger than a normal human would ever feel and have to suffer it along their life. Their Chakra can be used in different ways however mostly it is used as augmentation of the body. After the use of chakra, the Kanaga suffer from 'The Burn'. A state in which the augmented part of body is left fatigued and unable to use chakra; dependent on the Burn Rank. Another benefit of being a Konaga is the Genjutsu Immunity, the chakra flow being so intense and raw, cannot be influenced by Genjutsu.

Please supply a Brief RP Sample: After a long chase and battle of speed and agility, the two Genin had taken a pause. On one side, the ancestor of the infamous Konaga stood tall. The killing intent on his eyes couldn't be ignored. This hate and pain he gathered inside was too much for a Genin. On the other side stood the special offspring of the Kaguya, bearing the Shikotsumyaku Bloodline. He was the only one of his generation to bear these genes, so his survival was of high priority for the Mist Village. Suna had sent Seiji to cut the Bloodline from spreading any further. The Konaga Bloodline was important for the Suna too, but it wouldn't dissapear. The Konaga Nomads would still exist. Another reason they sent Seiji was because of the Power his Bloodline had given him. He had the power to end any battle quickly. And he would aim for it too. A long-lasting battle could prove to be fatal for a Konaga. The clashing of the Bloodlines was set in a special scenario. A Dark Forest located in the skirts of Kirigakure. Until now, the Kaguya was running but after a time, he had realised it was pointless as Seiji could keep up. Now, as the two stood up against each other, it had become Dusk. The Kaguya boy was standing under the shadow of a tree so it was hard to see where he was. While Seiji was still reflecting faint rays of light, enough to be seen. After all the chasing, he had built up a headache and his senses were pretty dulled to rely on. He had to use a jutsu in order to just see the opponent. As Seiji was still on his thoughts, trying to focus on the enemy and not the constant pain on his body, and a rather abnormal headache, the enemy signed the beginning of the battle with the use of his Finger-Bone Bullets.

Even before the bullts hit, there was a sweeping sound released by the movements of the Kaguya's arm. Seiji quickly realized that and barely managed to side-step to his right. Yet, his reaction was a bit off on timing, so he was hit in the right left shoulder. That done only once. Seini kept his expressionless face, throwing a simple look at the shoulder. His muscles were damaged and that very deep. However he didn't even feel it, the pain that should be cause by the wound was overpowered by Seiji's daily pain. He tried to move his left arm and he succeeded, that was all he needed to confirm. The Kaguya boy saw this abnormality and decided to stay in the shadows, hs enemy proved to be an unstoppable enemy. Collateral damage was nothing to a Konaga, he needed to take on fatal strike and kill him. With this decided, the Kaguya boy jumped back ten meters and dissapeared into the shadows, slowly going down on all four limbs, waiting for the right moment to attack. Seiji looked out to the battlefield, nothing to be seen or heard. A moment of thinking was needed and there was a plan, Seiji concentrated his chakra on his left eye, closing his right one. His left iris suddenly started to glow, more than usually and he could see chakra all around him. Within a second, the Kaguya was spotted. Standing on the limbs, like a lizard. He didn't know what was coming for him. Seiji channeled his hcakra into his leg muscles. Augmenting them temporarily so that his speed would be doubled. The ground below his feet started to slowly deteriorate and grass would be immediately destroyed by the raw chakra. A simple push was enough to start his run; Seiji ran with his full speed towards the Kaguya boy, while in the same time using the Chakra Force technique on his right foot. Which was engulfed on the raw and violent bloodline chakra, which was just waiting for a contact with the enemy. The Kaguya boy was caught on surprise, on one moment he saw his enemy on light, and the other moment he dissapeared inside the shadows. Just as the Kaguya boy tried to straighted up, he was hit on his chin by the right foot of Seiji. The power released on the impact was horrifying. The kinetic enegy gathered from the run, which was two-times faster than usually and the explosion cause by the Chakra Force which by itself had the power of an Explosive Tag were enough to completely destroy the upper body of a normal person. But, the Kaguya boy had his abilities too, his bones two to three times harder than normaly could withstand this attack, even if it was barely. Even though he survived, the Kaguya boy was catapulted through the Forest and only stopped as he hit against a tree trunk.

Seiji was left there on the impact ground, standing, of course he didn't take any damage from the explosion but the consequences of using the jutsu were existent. The pain on his right foot had intensified and it was kind of strangling and was constantly pulsing. He lifted up his right foot, keeping it up just above the ground, waiting for this effect to wear off, furthemore his speed had been reduced to that of a beginner, an Academy Student. He knew it, so he needed to know if he had to continue fighting, while the Chakra Sight technique was still active, he used it to look around. It was faint, however he could still see the chakra of the Kaguya boy in the distance. In the same time, the Kaguya boy had been stuck into the tree trunk, he needed some time to push himself off the tree and jump down to the ground. His jaw was dislocated and he used his chakra to relocated it and regenerate damaged parts of it. He had to lunch a high speed attack now, but before doing that, he created another layer of bones just beneath his skin. He began the run, drawing two bone blades throughout his palms and gripping them tightly. They resembled daggers as they weren't really long, but they were extremely sharp. As he gathered enough speed, he jumped forwards, rotating sideways while holding the blades forwards. This would create a drilling effect. Seiji saw this coming with his Chakra Sight. But he couldn't react to it. He couldn't run away as his speed was in the basement. But he managed to clench his right hand into a fist and create a chakra blade which would extend downwards [from his fist]. He wanted to stop the Kaguya with his left hand and then slice him down. But the injury on the shoulder had slowed him down, so the Drilling Attack of the Kaguya hit him down on the stomach. This was very heavy, as Seiji was pushed backwads for three meters, the Kaguya boy stood back on his feet again, with his right blade sticking on Seiji's stomach. Yet, Seiji had managed to grab it, not letting it dig any further. "Why won't you die? Don't you feel your abdomen completely crushed?!" the Kaguya boy shouted, a mix of emotions was released by the first words between the Genin. The Kaguya was shocked and panicking as he saw the Konaga still standing. The Kaguya boy continued pushing his right blade towards the stomach of the Konaga but this just didn't work. Seiji had gripped the bone tightly, using another time his bloodline abilities. This time it was Chakra Strength. He looked up with both his eyes at the trembling Kaguya and grinned. Those glowing eyes now seemed evil and sadistic. Seiji pushed the bone blade out of his stomach and rose it up over his opponents shoulder, just enough so it would be seen. In that moment he broke the bone blade with just a flick of his wrist. The Kaguya stared at this with fear and then quickly turned to the Konaga. Seiji looked his enemy into the eyes and slowly spoke "I...I cannot feel that pain. I am one of the Konaga Survivors, call me a monster but I do not feel your pain...I won't stop until my head is torn from my body and my body drops to the ground...Let me teach you...Pain." saying this, he gripped this Chakra Blade on his right fist tightly before flicking his wirst. He cut the Kaguya's arms off and watched him drop to his knees while screaming in agony. He looked at the enemy with an evil grin on his face, before stabbing him in the middle of the chest, the Chakra Blade slowly eating away his flesh and bones, creating a hole throughout the Kaguya's body. Then Seiji simply let go. And turned around. He started walking. His left eye blurry and his senses almost dulling away completely from the headache. His legs were working slower. And he couldn't even clench his fist normally. An open wound on his stomach, a stab and many scratches going down into his muscles. Yet, he continued walking, he felt better. As he could hear the faint screams into the background, his enemy slowly drifting into Death.

[I'm sorry if I made a mistake in grammar or something, I finished this late in the night, so I'm sleepy and may let out pointless mistakes. If it is too long I could cut it somehow, I just got lost into the battle and didn't see the length.]

phlegmatic waste


Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:09 am


-X Duo Yiro X-
RPC Name: idk

Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)

Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: Because I've never actually 'dabbled' into the clan side of Naruto Rping, I just stayed original. Also this clan actually fits the character I am planning to make.

What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: This clan was created/based off of Bleach. It is/will be watched strictly. The art of this clan is strictly weapon based and must have some sort of royal blood.

Your knowledge section of the Bloodline is strangely lacking, You don't need to write a new sample or anything, but could you perhaps explain the ins and outs of the Bloodline to me.

...I wasn't too impressed with the questions you had before, since the answers were all clearly described within the bloodline.
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