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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:16 am
xLieselotte Hi there! I'll be taking over for Strawberry for your character. So, let's get started! It's looking good so far, but there are still a few more changes that you need to make. Superior strength and speed are already a very powerful ability, you might want to cut back on one more power. Usually we have people use superior strength and speed and then one other ability, but your character has multiple abilities that go with it and it's really just too much and unfair to the people who just stuck with superior strength and speed. So you will probably need to narrow down the amount of abilities he has since he can also talk to animals, heal people, and his regeneration rate is really fast. So all you need to do is take one power out and probably slow down the regeneration rate since a regeneration rate that's 50% faster than average is quite fast. And I was also wondering about his being frail. Does it nullify his strength and speed or does it happen at random moments? You might want to clarify that since it'll be hard for you to portray both of them in the RP. So once you've made your changes, just quote me and I'll come back to take a look! Thanks! =D hmmm, sorry about that i'll clarify the when and why he becomes frail at times, also about the superior strength and speed..i only mean compared to humans...since he is not all human after all...
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:37 am
Lady Shizika xLieselotte Hi there! I'll be taking over for Strawberry for your character. So, let's get started! It's looking good so far, but there are still a few more changes that you need to make. Superior strength and speed are already a very powerful ability, you might want to cut back on one more power. Usually we have people use superior strength and speed and then one other ability, but your character has multiple abilities that go with it and it's really just too much and unfair to the people who just stuck with superior strength and speed. So you will probably need to narrow down the amount of abilities he has since he can also talk to animals, heal people, and his regeneration rate is really fast. So all you need to do is take one power out and probably slow down the regeneration rate since a regeneration rate that's 50% faster than average is quite fast. And I was also wondering about his being frail. Does it nullify his strength and speed or does it happen at random moments? You might want to clarify that since it'll be hard for you to portray both of them in the RP. So once you've made your changes, just quote me and I'll come back to take a look! Thanks! =D hmmm, sorry about that i'll clarify the when and why he becomes frail at times, also about the superior strength and speed..i only mean compared to humans...since he is not all human after all... Yes, but many of the other nonhuman characters that are about as fast as normal humans too and there are some species that have a slower regeneration rate than humans. Just because a character is not human, doesn't necessarily mean they are stronger and faster. The only ones that are faster are the ones that have the ability listed in their skills and abilities. But since you've added the limitations, he's accepted. He can stay in the Malachite Dorm. And remember to put his profile in the accepted character profiles subforum and to sign him up for his classes. Today is Week 2 - Monday, so it's fourth period right now. =D
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:45 am
xLieselotte Lady Shizika xLieselotte Hi there! I'll be taking over for Strawberry for your character. So, let's get started! It's looking good so far, but there are still a few more changes that you need to make. Superior strength and speed are already a very powerful ability, you might want to cut back on one more power. Usually we have people use superior strength and speed and then one other ability, but your character has multiple abilities that go with it and it's really just too much and unfair to the people who just stuck with superior strength and speed. So you will probably need to narrow down the amount of abilities he has since he can also talk to animals, heal people, and his regeneration rate is really fast. So all you need to do is take one power out and probably slow down the regeneration rate since a regeneration rate that's 50% faster than average is quite fast. And I was also wondering about his being frail. Does it nullify his strength and speed or does it happen at random moments? You might want to clarify that since it'll be hard for you to portray both of them in the RP. So once you've made your changes, just quote me and I'll come back to take a look! Thanks! =D hmmm, sorry about that i'll clarify the when and why he becomes frail at times, also about the superior strength and speed..i only mean compared to humans...since he is not all human after all... Yes, but many of the other nonhuman characters that are about as fast as normal humans too and there are some species that have a slower regeneration rate than humans. Just because a character is not human, doesn't necessarily mean they are stronger and faster. The only ones that are faster are the ones that have the ability listed in their skills and abilities. But since you've added the limitations, he's accepted. He can stay in the Malachite Dorm. And remember to put his profile in the accepted character profiles subforum and to sign him up for his classes. Today is Week 2 - Monday, so it's fourth period right now. =D oh thank you, i thought i needed to think and edit more xD anyways thanks for the help <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 3:42 am
Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Angel Mhai Perfcktionist xLieselotte Okay, he's accepted. He can stay in the Graphite Dorm. =D But just so you know. Hard-headed and proud counts as two flaws. His need for blood is a vampire trait that goes with the race so it wouldn't count as a flaw. It's kind of like how humans can't live very long if they don't eat. And also, you might want to figure out what to do with his need for blood since you can't have him eating other characters. ^^
I'll figure something out with Mhai. Thanks. emotion_yatta
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Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD! he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl He can eat Isamu all he wants, lol xD rofl where can i find his/her bio? o.o It needs to be updated But here IsamuI have to go to school but I can RP with you when I get home if you want smile
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:32 am
Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Angel Mhai Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD! he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl He can eat Isamu all he wants, lol xD rofl where can i find his/her bio? o.o It needs to be updated But here IsamuI have to go to school but I can RP with you when I get home if you want smile i'll be looking forward to it <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:10 pm
Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Angel Mhai Why was I involved in here? I demand an explanation from you emotion_donotwant Kidding emotion_yatta yup I'll help you out xD! he said you'll be the one incharge of the blood bags specifically type O- rofl He can eat Isamu all he wants, lol xD rofl where can i find his/her bio? o.o It needs to be updated But here IsamuI have to go to school but I can RP with you when I get home if you want smile i'll be looking forward to it <3 Yay! lol
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:37 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Rose Martin
Species: Fairy
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance description: Her skin is slightly darker, she also has a nose piercing
Personality: Rose is a caring person, she loves to help others. She is not shy and will socialise with people, as long as they let her. She is very cheery and happy, but sometimes, she can be very angry and rude.
Bio: Rose lived her entire life under the watch or her grandmother and father. Her parents died only a few months after she was born. Her grandmother would always tell her stories about what her parents were like. Only the females in Rose's family are fairies, and they grow their wings on their 13th birthday. When Rose grew hers, her grandmother keep her inside the house, she didn't want anyone to find out about her granddaughters gift.
Skills and Abilities:
Rose is an exellcent flyer, since her wings grew, it has been hard to keep her from flying, she is also very brainy
Character Flaws:
~ Over-protective
~ Talks to much
~ Short temper
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes:
- Puppies
- Strawberries
- School
Dislikes:
- Loud noises
- Hospitals
- Apples
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:45 pm
Hello! Rosentale's Rules require that new members wait at least two weeks before submitting a second character. This ensures your first character is well situated and won't be neglected when you put in another. Please feel free to re-submit your character in a couple of weeks!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:51 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Hello! Rosentale's Rules require that new members wait at least two weeks before submitting a second character. This ensures your first character is well situated and won't be neglected when you put in another. Please feel free to re-submit your character in a couple of weeks! Oops.. My apologies!
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:54 pm
Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine Lady Shizika Ayame Sunshine He can eat Isamu all he wants, lol xD rofl where can i find his/her bio? o.o It needs to be updated But here IsamuI have to go to school but I can RP with you when I get home if you want smile i'll be looking forward to it <3 Yay! lol
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:23 pm
 Character Information:
Student ▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄Name: Jinx Rosen
Species: Siren
Age: almost 16
Gender: Female
Personality: Jinx is complex. She says the meanest things and acts rude as she wants but the moment she thinks no one is looking she is kind,sweet, and very vulnerable.
Bio: She grew up with the perfect family. Lovely mother, caring father, and the best brother anyone could ask for. Her school life, however, was the opposite. SHe was made fun of and taunted all year round. She tried just keeping to herself and staying out of peoples way but they always had a way of finding her. Just as they did the week before homecoming. They were bullying her as they always did but that day she been fed and so she yelled unknowing she was damaging their brains until they were all unconscious. On homecoming day while they were in the hospital in coma's she was packing to be sent off to what her once perfect parents called a school for freaks like her.
Skills and Abilities: She can lure people with her song and can cause pain in peoples heads with her yell.
Character Flaws biggrin o to insomnia she has oneirophrenia (hallucinations), this disorder causes her to to live in a mostly dream-like haze. She tends to see things that aren't there, and sometimes talks about things that never happened as if it did, in turn making her a liar on some accounts (such as when she swears that something happened when the people around her knows that it didn't). Also also has a bad memory so she has forget most of her past life -excluding a few especially horrible events- and she has a bad self-image.
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Status: Single
Likes:
- Sleep
- Music
- Playing football
Dislikes:
- People
- Television
- School ▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄Ⓛove is Ⓦar.
Ⓦar is a Ⓖame.
Ⓓo you want to play?
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:42 pm
There are some changes that you will need to make with your character before she can be accepted. You'll need to make some changes with her ability. We can't have her killing anyone with her yell. As for luring people with her song, you need to always ask before she does any luring. If you don't ask, then we'll be having a problem. Her first flaw won't really work since she already takes medicine for it and the only time it'd come into effect is when she's stressed. We're looking for flaws that follow the character around all the time and not only at certain situations. Low self-esteem and being forgetful are proper flaws, but you need to make sure you can RP them. Being forgetful isn't just forgetting people's names or a book every once in a while. To make it a flaw, it means she has to forget all the time. Some examples is that she'll probably take longer to learn people's names since she's usually forgetting them or she's always forgetting the necessary supplies for her classes every or at least every other day which will inconvenience and annoy the people around her. Once you fix everything, you can quote me and I can take another look. You can always look to our Resources for better characters and coding if you need help with character building. =D
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 8:09 pm
Thanks for the advice on really bringing her bad memory into the RP. And will this do?
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 8:28 pm
Adonyx Ravenblood Thanks for the advice on really bringing her bad memory into the RP. And will this do? You're welcome. ^^ The powers are good, but make sure she doesn't yell all the time or it might get annoying to your fellow RPers. As for her flaws, you might want to add the resulting flaw in her oneirophrenia because listing that alone isn't a flaw. It's a cause of one. So what about her having hallucination makes it such a flaw? So once you fix the flaws, quote me again and I'll look again. =D
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 9:28 pm
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