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 Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:33 pm
I'm fighting a jinjuuriki... In a one tailed form... they DO NOT USE JUTSU WHILE IN BEAST FORM
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:28 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:36 pm
tsubaka inoue Rpc Name: Ichigo Yuki Village: Kiri Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ink Artistry What you know about the clan/bl: Ink Artistry bloodline uses scroll and ink as weapons. Using ninja ink this bloodline can create a variety of animals do to various things. Birds for flying, Lions/Bears for attack and can even create small animals to sneak up on an opponent. Rp Sample: Ichigo looked at the time. It's time to train. He walked out into the garden to practice his ninjutsu. "Sumi Buushin no Jutsu," He said making a ink clone of himself. The ink clone ran off into the distance of the garden. Ichigo pulled out his sword Jezumo and ran after his clone. The clone threw some kunais at him; he dodged and sheathed his sword and took out a scroll and drew a tiger, "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said, rapidly moving the brush on the paper. The tiger jumped out of the scroll ran after the clone. The clone had ran off, and tried going behind Ichigo, spraying senbon needles everywhere. He whipped around, and grabbed his scroll, moving the brush across the paper again and started to draw an umbrella that had each symbol of each village. "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said summoning the umbrella. The umbrella dispersed, and the ink went everywhere, when it was hit. Ichigo got closer and tried a new technique, "Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu," the area started to fog up with ink. He unsheathed his sword and attacked the clone but the clone, reacted by jumping back, I'm becoming stronger then usual my clones would have died by now. Where will he hit me next? Will it use some taijutsu or my genjutsu? The clone came behind Ichigo and pulled out some shurikens into his hand and threw them at him. Ichigo had to jump back but he had ,gotten hit by one of the shurikens. "Good, Good, let us end this right now," Ichigo said. The clone drew out his sword and they both were ready to strike each other down. They ran at each other and slashed upward at the same time. It seemed minutes had gone by and then The clone dissipated back into ink. "I took a good blow from that attack. I think I might need medical attention," Ichigo said walking off to the hospital, favoring his wound. i hope i don't have to re-post this again because this is the second time its been skipped crying
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:42 pm
Rpc Name: Zetsubou Tenshi Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: I know that you must see at least ten animals to achieves first stage. You can only turn into animals at the last stage, but, you'll have to see twenty animals. Within the first stage you can only gain traits such as speed and strength. Second stage gives you features; and so forth. The user can only access the power of one animal at a time, until the final stage has been reached. Raiton techniques also disrupt the user's Anigan. Their are no handsigns required. The only ways to awaken re to experience something stressful or life-altering or through massive amounts of training. Rp Sample: Zet sat on a tree limb; reading a book that he had bought the other day. He heard rustling in the bushes behind him. He smirked as he concentrated on the sound; letting his hearing heighten to that of a fox. He could hear the wind whistle as a kunai barely nicked his forehead as it whirled past. "Damn!" He yelled, noticing blood dripping down over his nose, coming from his head. He jumped onto another tree limb to see his attacker; they were scanning the area for him. "Two can play at that game." He said with a smirk. He could feel chakra rushing through his legs as the veins came out a bit; causing him to run at an amazing speed; jumping from tree limb to tree limb with speedy grace. He landed behind the ninja swiftly; but not so quietly. The ninja turned around and kicked at Zet, who quickly brought his arms up to guard. He let chakra run through his arms as he envisioned a gorill bashing it's prey, letting the veins pump through their he let out a raging punch; sending the ninja flying. The ninja indeed went flying, into a tree. They stood up slowly and made some handsigns. He watched as an Raiton based Jutsu struck him; causing his Anigan to shut down as he knelled. The enemy ninja rushed over as he took a step back, not trying to get hit. After a couple of minutes which felt like forever, his eyes became slitted once more as he smirked. "I'm gonna tear through you right now!" He exclaimed; running at his enemy and jumping; envisioning a kangaroo doing the same thing. Thanks to the Raiton jutsu the jump wasn't as high as it could've been, but, it worked. As he came down, he put out his foot, catching the enemy in the jaw. Right as the enmy hit the ground as their head bounced up, he tossed a kunai, striking the enemy in the enck as blood came from their mouth and from the hole in the throat. Zet sighed and picked up his book from the ground and walked away. "I should tell someone about this..."
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:20 pm
@tsubaka: Ima have enough Crew member look at that, Im not familiar with the bloodline.
@angelo: thats the 2nd time you'v posted it after i said wait till I got everyone who was skipped... Because of that I'm not going to comment on yours till we open the apps again. Sorry.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:23 pm
I thought you said go ahead and post...x.x
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:25 pm
so wait for cobra k got it xP
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:53 am
O i didn't know ill go check now, and im sorry for overstepping my bounderies
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:58 am
Vexin: Alright Vexin a couple things here...
1) Spelling needs a lot of work. I suggest using Firefox since the browser itself has a built in spell checker which will underline spelling errors and the like so you can easily correct them.
2) Your use of the bloodline was, okay, but not great... (which is the standard I require to approve use of this Bloodline).
- When you used 'Chakra Sight' you made no mention of blurred vision, or of any pain after using the technique, which are both NECESSARY as part of the bloodline technique.
- When you augment chakra, it's to your limbs, not to your abs of anything like that (not until later). Augmenting your Arms/ legs will make them stronger, but remember augmenting them all at the same time would be REALLY painful, which is why I tend to only augment one arm at a time, or maybe two legs.
- Also, with the above, Augmentations are not meant to be long-lasting through a fight. An augmentation is a BURST effect, increasing the power of the augmented limb for a brief period of time before the energy is expelled. I feel like you were using it as a prolonged effect, which is not the intent of the bloodline.
3) After meditating... you woke up, fought a bear, and began meditating again. This is just silly. Yes, Meditation bears the ability to do this as a Konaga, BUT only a complete idiot would do so RIGHT NEXT TO A BEAR WHICH HAD PREVIOUSLY TRIED TO KILL HIM.
...also, even though you used multiple augmentations, it's not like you would have been completely wiped out. You'd still be able to move and everything. There would be no need for such haste in meditation. You should simply bear with the pain, endure and suffer through it, and continue on.
All of this said... I must unfortunately Deny your application.
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Muffin: I didn't really see much of you using the bloodline. I mean, I guess I saw somewhat that you kind of understood what the Bloodline entailed, but it was told from a strange perspective of noting someone else's agony.
I would rather a more detailed description of your own character using/interacting with the bloodline. If you need, your character can pretend they are Jounin level. The important thing with Konaga is expressing how your character deals with the pain and uses the techniques, so please do that. I can then re-evaluate your application.
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:54 am
Cobra_X Vexin: Alright Vexin a couple things here...
1) Spelling needs a lot of work. I suggest using Firefox since the browser itself has a built in spell checker which will underline spelling errors and the like so you can easily correct them.
2) Your use of the bloodline was, okay, but not great... (which is the standard I require to approve use of this Bloodline).
- When you used 'Chakra Sight' you made no mention of blurred vision, or of any pain after using the technique, which are both NECESSARY as part of the bloodline technique.
- When you augment chakra, it's to your limbs, not to your abs of anything like that (not until later). Augmenting your Arms/ legs will make them stronger, but remember augmenting them all at the same time would be REALLY painful, which is why I tend to only augment one arm at a time, or maybe two legs.
- Also, with the above, Augmentations are not meant to be long-lasting through a fight. An augmentation is a BURST effect, increasing the power of the augmented limb for a brief period of time before the energy is expelled. I feel like you were using it as a prolonged effect, which is not the intent of the bloodline.
3) After meditating... you woke up, fought a bear, and began meditating again. This is just silly. Yes, Meditation bears the ability to do this as a Konaga, BUT only a complete idiot would do so RIGHT NEXT TO A BEAR WHICH HAD PREVIOUSLY TRIED TO KILL HIM.
...also, even though you used multiple augmentations, it's not like you would have been completely wiped out. You'd still be able to move and everything. There would be no need for such haste in meditation. You should simply bear with the pain, endure and suffer through it, and continue on.
All of this said... I must unfortunately Deny your application.--------------------------------------------------------------------------- Muffin: I didn't really see much of you using the bloodline. I mean, I guess I saw somewhat that you kind of understood what the Bloodline entailed, but it was told from a strange perspective of noting someone else's agony.
I would rather a more detailed description of your own character using/interacting with the bloodline. If you need, your character can pretend they are Jounin level. The important thing with Konaga is expressing how your character deals with the pain and uses the techniques, so please do that. I can then re-evaluate your application.
i edited it and fixed the spelling and i donated 10k to blue already so i think im covered there
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:06 pm
Vexin_Dono i edited it and fixed the spelling and i donated 10k to blue already so i think im covered there
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:43 pm
Wow... Burning Rasengan, which I wouldn't consider that having been a Tailed ofrm, sure it had a tail, but he wasn't animalistic, He was still in control, He was still normal enough to Yell Sasuke and pound him a couple of times with his fist.
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:46 pm
Orchid Moon Zetsu:  The information about the Bloodline is wrong.. and you did not show mokutons weakness in your rp sample. Yes because Me incinerating them with Katon is completely not showing a weakness. Also, The only weakness I didn't show was the Weakness to Raiton. Also the info is wrong? Really? name one thing about it that is wrong. Oh, And you have no feasable way of saying wether or not they are easy to find, just because two Mokuton characters have been made doesn't mean there aren't more... So yeah...
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