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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:49 am
STOP SUBMITTING THESE UNTIL THE APPS ABOVE THIS POST ARE LOOKED AT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:41 pm
Angel:  It doesn't seem like you know enough about the bloodline/clan,so please go and reread it then re apply Tavers:  Chaotic:  .Could you please put more detail in it like use some of the jutsu for that bloodline Muffin:I will let some one judge yours,because i don't have any knowledge about this clan Zetsu:  to me it looks like you have fairly good understanding of the bloodline,but remember you need to use hand signs Wish:  Raven REMEMBER MY DECISIONS CAN BE OVERTURNED OK
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:11 pm
The free roam has been over for awhile Misa, and you're not a bloodline mod.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:15 pm
So, who is a Bloodline Mod?
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:19 pm
I hate waiting. But, it's worth it. x.x
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:01 pm
Panthers is the app mod right Hinote? ( It's been a while since I did one of these applications )
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:03 pm
He's not even crew...
Check the PM list to see who is a bloodline mod. I'm pretty sure it's Cobra right now.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:16 pm
Jade and Stormold. Those are the bloodline app mods... >.<
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:18 pm
I wish I could accept stuff.... D: ;Was the assistant/adept of profile Nazism in VR, Cobra's apprentice.;
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:00 pm
Rpc Name: Vexin Village: konohagakure Rank: academy Bloodline or Clan applied for:Konaga Clan What you know about the clan/bl: In the Konaga Clan no one knows there history. they are masters of chakura. It is like the chakura around them said, "hey you look like a good home." Then causing the chakura to move at a cellular level soaking into every cell. these ninjas of this clan are always in intense pain witch causes them to never achieve a deep sleep. this clan has limitless chakura, but they cannot control it fully. this clan can also augment its body for more strength and speed, but doing this will cause a very painful burn known as a chakura burn. because of there intense chakura levels not to menchen the pain this clan can not do genjutsu ever. when some one trys to inflict genjutsu on them they feel the pain form the clan and most likely will beforced out of the technique. there bodys can with stand much more than a normal persons body from birth they are pushed beyond there limits, so for them its a fight for life from the very start. Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
Vexin looks up having just completed his mediation cycle. he hears something off in the distance. he thinks to himself 'i wonder what that is.' vexin concentrates a large amout of chakura into his left eye and closes his right eye wanting to see what the thing he herd was. his eye begins to glow with a vibrant blue color. it was a large grizzly bear and it was coming strait for him. vexin signs and gets up then says, "well ones got to eat right, but mr. bear i dont want to be your next meal." vexin releases the chakura in his eye and closes it tightly for the pain was so intense. a signal tear fell from his left eye. this tear caused the pain to sky rocket, but vexin smiled at this pain for it let him know he was alive. when he opening back up his right eye his vision was blurred. vexin then concentrates a large amount of chakura in his legs, causing him to be come much faster and stronger in his legs. he concentrates chakura into his bones causing them to be much stronger so that they do not break with his new strength. this caused an explosion of pain in his legs, 'but it is better than being eaten. i must end this in one hit' he thought to himself.
the bear is only feet from him, vexin looks at the bear and says, "forgive me but this is going to hurt me a lot more than it will hurt you." As the bear leaped at vexin, he kick at the bears head just below its jaws, he swung his legs with more furry than a father finding out his daughter has a date. vexin pulled away from the bear after landing 13 consecutive hits to the bears neck and lower head. vexin fell to the ground the pain was so intense he couldn't move for a few seconds. he then made him self move so that if the bear survived he wouldn't get killed by it. when he looked up there was so much blood around the beard head, if you could even call it a head. it was more a pile of bloody mush. vexin looked at his feet they were covered in blood to. vexin turned and started heading for his destination fearing the smell would bring more enemies. as he took his first few steps he had a small limp to his walk, but it was instantly gone when he heard some one.
"ohh it just you Tsume." vexin said as he continued to walk. "what brings you to this neck of the woods."
"the smell of blood, are you hurt," Tsume asked vexin.
"no but a bear attacked me," vexin said not showing the intense pain he was in.
"really and your not hurt." tsume asked with a supprise.
"no im just find. race you back to konohagakure." vexin said with a smile.
"sure," tsume said looking astonished at vexin. 'to kill a grizzly bear and only just having been promoted to genin. im glad hes not my enemy.'
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:07 pm
Ok! Lance has made me into the Bloodline/Clan App Person! Angel:  I'm going to have to agree with Misa when she says, "It doesn't seem like you know enough about the bloodline/clan,so please go and reread it then re apply" But please reapply after im done with the current apps. Tavers:  Sorry but your Rp sample is lacking a bit. Quote: Tory uses the the shadows the fireball caused to use and extend his Shadow Possesion Technique. He catches the rouge ninja and with a smile- Also you need to form the hand seals.. and keep them constantly while using your Shadow Jutsus. Simply Re do your rp sample then resubmit after im done with the others. Chaotic:  . I agree with Misa on this one also "Could you please put more detail in it like use some of the jutsu for that bloodline" Muffin: Cobra is the App Mod for that Bloodline, He will get to your app When he can Zetsu:  The information about the Bloodline is wrong.. and you did not show mokutons weakness in your rp sample. Wish:  It seems you know the bloodline good enough to rp with so ACCEPTED! Raven:  It seems you know the bloodline good enough to rp with so ACCEPTED! IF there are any that were skipped before GREGAR'S announcement, Please re post your app. Once It is ok to start posting apps again, those who I said were denied can redo their apps.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:17 pm
Rpc Name: Zetsubou Tenshi Village: Kumogakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: I know that you must see at least ten animals to achieves first stage. You can only turn into animals at the last stage, but, you'll have to see twenty animals. Within the first stage you can only gain traits such as speed and strength. Second stage gives you features; and so forth. The user can only access the power of one animal at a time, until the final stage has been reached. Raiton techniques also disrupt the user's Anigan. Their are no handsigns required. The only ways to awaken re to experience something stressful or life-altering or through massive amounts of training. Rp Sample: Zet sat on a tree limb; reading a book that he had bought the other day. He heard rustling in the bushes behind him. He smirked as he concentrated on the sound; letting his hearing heighten to that of a fox. He could hear the wind whistle as a kunai barely nicked his forehead as it whirled past. "Damn!" He yelled, noticing blood dripping down over his nose, coming from his head. He jumped onto another tree limb to see his attacker; they were scanning the area for him. "Two can play at that game." He said with a smirk. He could feel chakra rushing through his legs as the veins came out a bit; causing him to run at an amazing speed; jumping from tree limb to tree limb with speedy grace. He landed behind the ninja swiftly; but not so quietly. The ninja turned around and kicked at Zet, who quickly brought his arms up to guard. He let chakra run through his arms as he envisioned a gorill bashing it's prey, letting the veins pump through their he let out a raging punch; sending the ninja flying. The ninja indeed went flying, into a tree. They stood up slowly and made some handsigns. He watched as an Raiton based Jutsu struck him; causing his Anigan to shut down as he knelled. The enemy ninja rushed over as he took a step back, not trying to get hit. After a couple of minutes which felt like forever, his eyes became slitted once more as he smirked. "I'm gonna tear through you right now!" He exclaimed; running at his enemy and jumping; envisioning a kangaroo doing the same thing. Thanks to the Raiton jutsu the jump wasn't as high as it could've been, but, it worked. As he came down, he put out his foot, catching the enemy in the jaw. Right as the enmy hit the ground as their head bounced up, he tossed a kunai, striking the enemy in the enck as blood came from their mouth and from the hole in the throat. Zet sighed and picked up his book from the ground and walked away. "I should tell someone about this..."
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:31 pm
The official person is SUPPOSED to be Jade, but I'll allow you to do it orchid, just to clear things up. Cobra is not bloodlines, but ONLY he may look at Konaga apps.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:36 pm
*nods* Thank you, I indeed put that Cobra was the App Mod for that (Konaga) bloodline.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:45 pm
Angelo, lengthen the App. It doesnt even fit the 10 line minimum, and it's just a jumble of the Anigan powers. Revise it (the longer the better)
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