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 Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:01 pm
9/10
I don't know something is throwing me off...
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:58 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 12:38 am
7/10 idea though the complete version you have in your sig I'd say 9/10
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 3:18 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2012 7:48 am
LANxMIxPUNK 7/10 idea though the complete version you have in your sig I'd say 9/10 wow you really took time to look at my dream avi biggrin
oh and 9/10
something is throwing it off...maybe make use of long hair?
maybe the eyes need to change to biggrin
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:25 am
Donpru wow you really took time to look at my dream avi biggrin
oh and 9/10
something is throwing it off...maybe make use of long hair?
maybe the eyes need to change to biggrin 9/10 for this avi. It's a cute furry and it's amazing. I'm actually not a big fan of the final project you're aiming for. So that's at a 8/10. It needs something more I think. (Person below me, quote please! I want feedback! biggrin )
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:40 am
Strong Pokemon... Weak Pokemon...
That is only the selfish perception of people... Overall, this is decent, but there are flaws. There are minor issues with the colour scheme, there isn't really a flow, and the theme isn't very apparent.
But into more detail... I'll start with the colour scheme. The cyan that's on the ends of the pig tails on the hair are only [visibly] apparent there, which means you should either add it more elsewhere, or remove it completely. I would suggest removing it, as the cyan doesn't match the purple and cream. Secondly, it doesn't look like there is enough cream on the lower half, and not enough purple on the chest and stomach area. Seeing that you went for purple on the head, I suggest you just add more purple onto the middle-section.
Onto the next part. The flow isn't really there. Looking at the avatar from top to bottom, the flow goes like so; straight, straight, straight/75 degrees, straight, 35 degrees/straight. It doesn't match, is my point.
My last point is the theme. You might like to implement a more apparent theme, to make the avatar a little more than just an average avatar. Normally there is a thought process, theme, concept, behind an avatar, and that is the most important part of it. It's what everything else is based off of, and in this avatar, I'm not really seeing one.
All in all, I'd rate this a 4.5/10. Truly skilled Trainers should try to win...
With the Pokemon they love best.
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 9:01 am
iiTetshinji-Kun Strong Pokemon... Weak Pokemon...
That is only the selfish perception of people... Overall, this is decent, but there are flaws. There are minor issues with the colour scheme, there isn't really a flow, and the theme isn't very apparent.
But into more detail... I'll start with the colour scheme. The cyan that's on the ends of the pig tails on the hair are only [visibly] apparent there, which means you should either add it more elsewhere, or remove it completely. I would suggest removing it, as the cyan doesn't match the purple and cream. Secondly, it doesn't look like there is enough cream on the lower half, and not enough purple on the chest and stomach area. Seeing that you went for purple on the head, I suggest you just add more purple onto the middle-section.
Onto the next part. The flow isn't really there. Looking at the avatar from top to bottom, the flow goes like so; straight, straight, straight/75 degrees, straight, 35 degrees/straight. It doesn't match, is my point.
My last point is the theme. You might like to implement a more apparent theme, to make the avatar a little more than just an average avatar. Normally there is a thought process, theme, concept, behind an avatar, and that is the most important part of it. It's what everything else is based off of, and in this avatar, I'm not really seeing one.
All in all, I'd rate this a 4.5/10. Truly skilled Trainers should try to win...
With the Pokemon they love best. I didn't expect so much. smile I thew this avi together yesterday when I decided hanging on to 1.5 mill was getting boring with nothing to do with it. It's probably a better score than I expected.
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:28 pm
Dressia iiTetshinji-Kun Strong Pokemon... Weak Pokemon...
That is only the selfish perception of people... Overall, this is decent, but there are flaws. There are minor issues with the colour scheme, there isn't really a flow, and the theme isn't very apparent.
But into more detail... I'll start with the colour scheme. The cyan that's on the ends of the pig tails on the hair are only [visibly] apparent there, which means you should either add it more elsewhere, or remove it completely. I would suggest removing it, as the cyan doesn't match the purple and cream. Secondly, it doesn't look like there is enough cream on the lower half, and not enough purple on the chest and stomach area. Seeing that you went for purple on the head, I suggest you just add more purple onto the middle-section.
Onto the next part. The flow isn't really there. Looking at the avatar from top to bottom, the flow goes like so; straight, straight, straight/75 degrees, straight, 35 degrees/straight. It doesn't match, is my point.
My last point is the theme. You might like to implement a more apparent theme, to make the avatar a little more than just an average avatar. Normally there is a thought process, theme, concept, behind an avatar, and that is the most important part of it. It's what everything else is based off of, and in this avatar, I'm not really seeing one.
All in all, I'd rate this a 4.5/10. Truly skilled Trainers should try to win...
With the Pokemon they love best. I didn't expect so much. smile I thew this avi together yesterday when I decided hanging on to 1.5 mill was getting boring with nothing to do with it. It's probably a better score than I expected. oh i see! thanks! oh and what's your avi supposed to be? looks interesting biggrin and i'll change the dream avi to!
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:35 pm
10/10, simply because of the added adorability factor
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 12:46 pm
Donpru oh i see! thanks! oh and what's your avi supposed to be? looks interesting biggrin and i'll change the dream avi to! Right now I don't think I have a theme. I just enjoy the creepy fantasy edge she has. (I changed outfits after I posted my last reply)
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 1:01 pm
Strong Pokemon... Weak Pokemon...
That is only the selfish perception of people... If you are going to hold a conversation with someone in this thread, please at least rate the person who you are posting below. This is an avatar rate thread, if you have not forgotten.
Overall, this avatar has a nice concept to it, but a few flaws. The colour scheme is a little off, but not too much. The flow of the bottom half could also be fixed a tad.
But now moving into more specifics. The colour scheme is a little awkward around the neck and the legs of the avatar. The large area of white around the neck seems to only appear on the neck, making it rather distinct. I think the best choice would be removal, if possible. Otherwise, do your best to spread the white around the rest of the avatar. Regarding the legs, they are only cream, and don't hold any red, black [,or white, for that matter], making them not really cooperating with the rest of the avatar. I suggest removing the leg-pose, and using actual items; it will give you more variety and more choice.
Otherwise, the flow around the avatar is a little out of place. The legs push inwards, which doesn't correspond with the straight flow of the body, and the outward flow of the excess areas. As I said previously, removing the leg-pose with actual items should do more than fix that, with the right items.
All in all, though, I'd rate this a 7.5/10.
Kudos on the theme, by the way. I very much like it. Truly skilled Trainers should try to win...
With the Pokemon they love best.
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:32 pm
Dressia Donpru oh i see! thanks! oh and what's your avi supposed to be? looks interesting biggrin and i'll change the dream avi to! Right now I don't think I have a theme. I just enjoy the creepy fantasy edge she has. (I changed outfits after I posted my last reply) that creepy fantasy edge is what i like about it biggrin
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:29 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:29 pm
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