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PostPosted: Sat Mar 23, 2013 5:11 pm


RPer's Name: Allegra Kori no Tamashi
Character's Name: Hanora Gonzu
Character's Rank: Genin
Wanted Bijuu: Hachibi- the Eight-tailed Demon

What are your plans for the Biju?
My plans are to train with it,so that both of can become stronger, learn it strengths and weakness, and become companions, if possible, if not contain and control it to help protect my cillage

What is a Jinchuriki's purpose?
The Jinchuriki's purpose is to become a container for the biju and hopefully learn how to peacefully co-exist with it.
RP Sample
Hanora was walking to the training grounds, when she noticed a jounin heading somewhere. So now, she had to two choices, not care about where the jounin was headed and she could go about her way, or she could follow him and see where he was going. As soon as she saw hand movements, the choice was made for her. There should be no reason to use jutsu when you think your alone, unless one, you are trying to lead someone away from you; but then that would beg the question of why use it, or better yet, why use it now? She thought. As she did not even hesitate to follow the jounin or copy that was headed left. She continued following him, until poof he disappeared “I knew it, he was trying to lead me away from him.”

She exclaimed as she instantly started going the other way. However, as soon as she had gone past where she saw him, she realized, she had no idea where he was going in the first place. Then it hit her, duh the only place he would go and need to use a copy jutsu to lead someone away would be the Kage’s mansion.” She thought with a nod and instantly started heading there. When she got, he was just about to open the door. She smirked” I was right, now the question is why would the kage need the jounin only for?”She asked slowly” A tailed demon sighting, that has to be it.”She said as she jumped and climbed a tree that was near the mansion, and then slowly scooted down a branch to slowly land on the building.

She knew the Kage’s office was on the top from the first time she went there. She also did not want to use stairs, because one that would alert them that was someone was their way to the office and two it would take too long and she might miss the location of the tailed demon, and this way was more fun. Therefore, as soon as she landed she instantly did the chakra masking justu she had just learned today, just in case that is. However, she hopped that they would all think all the genin were in the grounds training to not notice one. She slowly moved closer to the window to hear well. Then she heard the Kage start talking”No one followed you hear right, Marion?” Marion nodded”Of course not, they are all training and even if someone did, I did the copy justu to lead the away.”

The Kage sighed and nodded “Good, cuz I don’t want to alert anyone if this can be handled before it reaches here.”She said. Marion tilted his head “It, Kage?” He asked. Yes it, the eight-tailed demon was spotted somewhere near our village and the neighboring village. It said to be in the forest that surrounds the bridge between our two villages, your mission is to find it, and contain it, or defeat it. Either way I do not want it to enter our village. Understand, get the other jounin and shuunin to help you, you will need it.”She said. Hanora inwardly yes’d in “Now I can show them, they I can fight, and I don’t have be a medic” She whispered, then slowly got back on the branch, slowly scooted back to the trunk, and slowly climbed down the tree, and headed to her room.

She got some sutras, a lighter and some other essentials for her trip. She then closed the door and headed out of the village.”She said that it was somewhere in here. So I will be on my guard.” She told herself as she cautiously walked through the forest. Honestly, this was her first time out of the village, ever. Therefore, she was both excited and nervous. However, she shoved all those nerves down. She cannot go back now, or else they would, and even if they did not she would never forgive herself for missing out on this on this once in a lifetime chance. I mean seriously when is the next time a genin the beginning rank will ever get to fight a tailed-demon, let alone the eight-tailed demon.

She would not miss this chance. So she ventured further into the forest. She looked in all directions staying on her guard. That is when she heard something rattling; she slowly turned around and saw a snake. She did not move a muscle and watched as it passed by her. When it was out of sight, she let out a breath of relief, then she heard some more rattling and squawks and sounds of all kinds, she looked up and saw that all the birds were flying in the opposite direction of where she was headed and thought, “Ok, I am going in the right direction then, that’s good. Come on, Hano, you can’t back out now, you are so close, so close to proving them wrong. So close to becoming stronger, so close to what you have always wanted.”

She told herself kind of like a little motivational speech/ pep talk. She slowly moved closer, and that is when she saw it, the eight-tailed demon. Therefore, she could let it come to her or go to it. That choice was taken from her, when she accidentally stepped on a dead branch and made a noise. The demon slowly turned around and saw here. She slowly moved away only to make more noise. Great job Hanora, tell it exactly where to get its next meal.”She scolded herself. Then it attacked. It swung one of its eight wing in direction following up with another so that all four of its eight wings were in her direction she instantly jumped back and climbed up a tree to get a better view, unfortunately, the demon swung its other tail at the tree breaking it.

Before she felt, she took out a sutra and called out ”Fire Star” as the sutra caught on fire and was then shaped into a star that attacked the demon. The demon swung it away making the tree’s catch fire.”Oh snap “She said as she then did some hand signs and instantly called out”Octo- Fountain as she put out the fire then turned the fountain to attack him, then followed it up with ”Mud Shot” She said as she threw another sutra and it turned into mud that hit it in the eye. It blinded the demon but not without repercussions. The blinded demon swung his tails in every direction trying to find out where it was. She took that chance to attack it again, taking another sutra and throwing it calling out”Dragon Claws”

She said as the fire turned into huge dragon claws and scratched some of its tails leaving searing pain after word. She did a little victory dance at her head, at being able to hurt it even a little. Nevertheless, that was short lived as the demon got its sight back. Boy was it pissed as it quickly turned around and attack repeatedly, its attack hit my leg so hard it broke it. I bit my lip to keep from screaming out I n pain as I heard the bone break.”I will not go home without you sealed in me” She called out as she slowly got back up and hopped on her good leg. She was not going to let a broken leg slow her down. She then saw that there was still some fire left and smirked doing some hand signs calling out “Pandemonium”, as the left over fire from before grew to large proportions before burning the demon on all sides.

The demon screeched in pain trying to swat out the fire, but only helping it grow in size. The demon had enough and charged chakra in into its tail then let out making a roar sound as it was left out, it put the fire out as well as knock in into a tree, I was injured, but not giving up. So I got up again then did some hand signs and called out “Earth whip” as vines from underground come up and started to attack the demon hitting it repeatedly. I backed it up with “Rain of Fire" as I threw another sutra that turned into fireballs dropping on the demons tail and back and everywhere else. The demon swats the balls away; but the vines were attacking him. I then did some hand signs and called out” Union of the elements”. As fire, water and earth from everywhere all flew high in the sky and joined until they were one huge ball of elements. when they had reached their biggest size, they shot towards the demon gaining speed as they shot downwards which in turned fames the flames on the outside and hit the demon square on the back. Just be sure it could not move anymore.

I did some hand signs and called out” Elemental Cage” Earth, vines and fire came from everywhere and caged it, immobilizing it. I waited for a while before doing my last set of signs and calling out” Tekko Fuuin [ Iron Armour Seal ]” effectively sealing it in me. I smiled” I did it” I said as a tear rolled down my face “I proved them wrong”
PostPosted: Sun Mar 24, 2013 10:33 am


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I'm sorry but with this sample I cannot allow you to take a biju. You just aren't strong enough in skill to really roll with it and considering what may or may not come after you, it is dangerous to allow weaker roleplayers to be under constant threat from enemies that can defeat them easily. As well as this you went from third to first person narratives in your last paragraph; this is a third person based roleplay. Hopefully, given time, you will be good enough to take Gyuki.



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PostPosted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:59 pm


RPer's Name: Nachosamurai
Character's Name: Riku Dragneel (will create him if accepted)
Character's Rank: Genin
Wanted Bijuu: Hachibi

What are your plans for the Biju? My plans for the Biju are to cooperate with it to get more powerful in order to protect the village of Sunagakure, I then plan to hopefully befriend it and use it to teach the current generation the pain of being a Jinchuriki so that future Jinchuriki do not suffer the way he has

What is a Jinchuriki's purpose? A Jinchuriki's purpose is a two part piece, ultimately killing two birds with one stone. They are to seal away dangerous beasts that could cause havoc in the ninja world; and they are also living weapons created to protect the village and fight in wars. Due to such reasoning for existence they are abused and feared.

RP Sample
Word count: 1500+(apparently)
Blue text=Riku
Red text=Hachibi
Green text=NPC (thought it'd make it easier for you guys ^^)
It was just another day for Riku, a normal day that most people just couldn't handle, and in truth he struggled too. He'd started off the same way everyone else did, he woke up, dressed, ate and washed. However the moment he left the house, well, it all went downhill for him; the villagers of Sunagakure glared at him and constantly yelled abuse, occasionally he'd get items thrown at him too. He lay in bed looking at the ceiling "Why get up today?... It'll be like yesterday, and all the days before that" He rolled onto his side seeing the picture of him and his parents from when he was a small child, it was cracked and dusty; yet it was precious to him. Y'see he didn't have much left anymore, he lived on his own, he didn't have friends, no relatives, nor any pets. Each and everyday becoming more painful, to him it was a world of malice and torment, how... Just how did the others see joy.

Then the voices came back, there was a conscience inside him beside his own, that he was aware of; a voice with no figure, maybe he was haunted or had a devil in him. He'd heard stories from the other academy students "Maybe he has the Ichibi in him... Like the old Kazekage" this he knew was a lie, he'd tried but the best he could do to manipulate sand was simply throw it at someone's face. The story that felt most likely to him was that he was haunted by a ghost or possessed by a demon, maybe the Kazekage knew about it after all he was called "Sunagakure's demon tamer". "So you gonna get up yet brat?" Oh the demons voice, it was an odd voice, it sounded angry, serious and in pain yet sounded as if it enjoyed it's position. "Yeah yeah, why am I taking orders from a demon anyway? I bet you're coated in ectoplasm you slimy freak" he questioned in his head. He heard a laugh in his head followed by a snort "Ohoh well aren't we feisty today, and you take orders from me simply because you are a brat" it laughed again "And yes I am slimy, it's kind of nature considering the type of "demon" I am". Riku smiled as he got up and dressed, it was funny he hated the demon but at the same time he couldn't help but love him; well love him as much as a human can love a demon.

He prepped as usual, threw on his clothes from the day before and headed out; then THUMP. "Ouch what the ********?!" He turned round to see a bunch of kids throwing and catching rocks snickering; "Hey demon boy, you still here? I'm surprised you didn't kill yourself like your mother did!" His heart stopped dead, "Not another reminder please" he begged to himself in his head. The memory was from when he was at the tender young age of six. It was a tragedy and it scarred him mentally, and he remembered it as if it were yesterday... His father had come at his precious son, the son who meant everything to him with a blade. All Riku could do was sit there and watch in horror, too scared to move or even breathe, then the blade had stopped mere inches from his face, turning his head Riku saw his mother she had grabbed it with her bare hands. She begged and pleaded the father to stop but he didn't, he kept pushing and pushing, then he slipped and fell, the knife piercing between his ribs. The tears welled in both Riku and his mother, he had died in front of them, the rest of the day was blank, all he remembers after that is waking up to his mother hanging by a rope. She had left a note saying "I'm sorry for not telling you the truth, and please don't blame me or your father, there's a demon inside you Riku and he was scared. He didn't want you to live the life of the cursed. I'm leaving this note to say sorry I can't stay with you, but I can't live with this anymore... I'm so so sorry" the note had tear drops on it from his mother as she wrote it and fresh one's as Riku cried as he read it. He remembered it, tears starting to flow.. He ran, to an empty space in the desert and just sat there crying.

"OY YOU SHITTY DEMON BRAT" someone yelled, he turned tears still streaming and before he knew it he was on the ground, tears now not the only thing flowing. He was bleeding from a split in his lip, he noticed a larger man looming over him, he must have hit Riku in the face. Riku begged him and said "Please stop... Why are you doing this?!" Then the man slammed his left foot into Riku's stomach, causing him to wince in pain on the floor holding his stomach region and struggling for breath. "Because if I don't kill you now, you'll kill us all" the man had now picked up a large rock and started beating it against his head "******** die" the man yelled as he beat at the young boy causing him to bleed furiously. Then everything went black, maybe it'd happened maybe he'd died at last, was he free of the worlds torment? He pondered what had happened for a while as he lay unconscious, when he awoke he saw the man in a pool of blood and a black substance, a mix of Riku's blood, the mans blood, and ink from . "W-what happened here? D-did I kill him?" The demon smiled to itself and said "Oh no no, nearly though, and you nearly died from blood loss" Riku was shocked, he couldn't have... Or could he? "Y-you, you possessed me didn't you?" The demon just chuckled "No no... I wouldn't do that, I suppose I did lend you a hand though... Thick skin and what not, heck if it weren't for the skin you'd be dead now" He rubbed his head, there was a large scab there now, but the injury by comparison to a normal person should be much worse "W-what just... I can't deal with this I'm going home"

It was roughly 3PM now and as he walked home he got the usual sly remarks, abuse and occasional object thrown at him, then he accidentally knocked an elderly blind man over. "O-Oh I'm sorry sir" he helped him up. The elder gave him a gentle smile and said "lost in our thoughts were we?" Riku sighed and said "Yep just contemplating my demons" The old man prodded at Riku's chest with his walking stick "Now remember this young man, we all have demons deep inside of us, some are just bigger than others" the man gave a solid hmph and walked off. Riku turned back to see the old man leave and smiled "Thank you..." he then headed back to his house, yes it was early but the injury and blood loss had made him extremely drowsy and he needed to call it a day there. Plus he already had plans for tomorrow, top of the list ask the Kazekage exactly what this demon was and if he could remove it and second being getting his own squad to work in.

He got home and threw his sandals off his feet into a heap in the corner, he then turned on a small tv and sat on the couch watching it. Then he reached for the remote noticing a black substance on his sleeve, he remembered it from earlier "Hey... Demon you sure you didn't possess me?" the demon snapped back "I said I helped, ungrateful brat if it weren't for me we'd both be dead now!" This comment had Riku lost for words, wasn't the demon already dead? Hence why it was a demon. He contemplated this for roughly 20 minutes until passing out on the couch. His dream was a strange one, he was in a large room filled with swirling smoke; and a large beast loomed over him, a silhouette of an odd creature... Was it the demon? "So you see me boy?" he replied honestly not wanting to anger it "N-no.. I just see your shadow, there's too much smoke to see you" The beast laughed loudly and it echoed through Riku's dream "Oh what a shame child, if you could see me you'd know exactly what I am" Riku paused and moved closer before hitting a cage with his face "Ouch" he rubbed his nose "W-what exactly are you then?" The beast smiled to itself "All you need to know right now is I am your saviour and your worst nightmare rolled into one" At that point the silhouette and the cage rolled away with the smoke, then Riku fell into his normal recurring nightmare, the one of his parents deaths. In his nightmare he witnessed every person who'd tried to kill him now, just how many people was it? He had honestly lost count...


OOC: Just noticed it was 5 am when I posted this, what the actual heck is wrong with me? xD
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 4:01 pm


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As much as I appreciate your willingness and application, Nacho. I'm afraid that I'm going to have to deny your application on the grounds that it would be unfair for you to be a biju host considering the skill level of some of the people who could potentially come after you. Although it is very strong in some aspects such as the defining of different people etc and this is good. It is also a little hectic, messy and lacking. Given time I believe you would make a fine Jinchuriki, you're committed and well liked. However, I think after a bit of tutelage from probably me, as I'm your Kage, you could possibly re-apply again with a better sample.

Sorry dude, I have to be fair and honest though. No matter how much I like you as a person.



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 4:12 pm


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As much as I appreciate your willingness and application, Nacho. I'm afraid that I'm going to have to deny your application on the grounds that it would be unfair for you to be a biju host considering the skill level of some of the people who could potentially come after you. Although it is very strong in some aspects such as the defining of different people etc and this is good. It is also a little hectic, messy and lacking. Given time I believe you would make a fine Jinchuriki, you're committed and well liked. However, I think after a bit of tutelage from probably me, as I'm your Kage, you could possibly re-apply again with a better sample.

Sorry dude, I have to be fair and honest though. No matter how much I like you as a person.


It's fine Rox, seems like a few assessment and I actually agree ^^ and thanks I'll probably re-apply at some point when I get better ^^

Hey it's no problem at all, and it's just one of the signs of a good captain, thanks for reading over and replying
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Good luck.



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PostPosted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:14 am


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 8:26 pm


RPer's Name: kesuke uchiha
Character's Name: kazehime
Character's Rank: gennin
Wanted Bijuu: shukaku

What are your plans for the Biju?
I intended on having her controlled strictly by the village near broken and used as a weapon of war. yes it would be happier for every jinchuriki to have the same enthusiasm as naruto. But some you win and some you lose. Kazehime will be damn near just an object due to the abuse and experiments trying to make a controllable Jinchuriki. Though she will be better and better as the time goes on seeing that she is to be saved and slowly recovering but the psychological damage is permanent.
Though I have not made her yet. How this application goes will determine if she exists or not ^_^

What is a Jinchuriki's purpose?
A prison for a great evil and to be a tool for war. To feed the birds of the lands the flesh of the enemies of the one great sovereign nation.
To house the power that is needed while the cold hurt soul searches for belonging

RP Sample
"As promised lord Kazekage...we have finally achieved it....the perfect Jinchuriki..."
the elder pushed the girl forward under the watchful gaze of the kazekage who seemed quite skeptical at the time. she stared with a blank face trembling in fear and pain. The elder Kuroharu one of the Kazekage's father's best of friends had not been given permission to do this. He was crazed beyond patriotism to a point of near religious fanaticism.
Kuroharu smiled dropping his left hand letting the kuni come to bare. He held it over the girl’s throat and with a quick jerking motion drew it to one side. The sand instantly gripped it so tightly the iron cracked and the blade was pulled from his hand, but no attack came.
“…see….the perfect Jinchuriki she is unwilling to attack her keepers even when they threaten her life. No genjutsu no lobotomy ….she is just broken….”
The Kazekage was disguised but he knew full well this had immense advantages. If she grew out of control she would not prevent them from killing her though at the same time he could not believe that Kuroharu would go this far.
“….Child….what is your name?”
She weakly looked up at him
“…I…I don’t….have one sir…”
“she was purchased from the underground connections….no clan no loyalties but to the sand…no one to come and “save” it from us…no one to claim it as their own….this…”thing” belongs to us….and it is perfection…..”
He tapped her shoulder and pointed at the cup on the desk. Without moving a muscle the sand gently obeyed her command through her cruel master, lifting the cup moving it to the water dispenser and filling it to a comfortable level before returning it.
“…control stability….its perfection I tell you…”
It was now too much to bear. The kazekage stood leveling his eyes at Kuroharu.
“….Kuro sama…..you where a great friend to my father…and have served for a great many years…..but …what you have done here is evil….you created an abomination…look at her….this is NOT what we do in the suna….”
Kuroharu was taken back, confused from the reaction.
“What do you mean?....can’t you see it…this is what we need…what we call peace here in the hidden sands is a lie…. It doesn’t matter what kind of peace the other countries spew from their mouths….war is behind every corner….this helps us…”
His teeth gritted he kneeled down gently holding the girl’s face in his hands looking with pity at her broken
“…..I am sorry….princess of the wind…..but…I wont let this go on…..”
He stood not seeing the small trickle of tears flowing from the girl.
“….Koruharu…..this is more than enough to confirm what we have feared……you have been lost in your madness…..I am sorry old friend…..but we have to take you in….”
The old man’s eyes went wide.
“WHAT?....after all that I did for you…for your father?....you will just toss me away….after I have given you my masterpiece….my perfection…..NO…..NOT AFTER ALL I HAVE DONE!!”
The Kazekage’s eyes leveled and his hand fell to his Kuni pouch as all the guards readied. It was then the old man noticed the disadvantage. But still he smirked nearly laughing at the kage.
“…looks like you need more convincing……Tankui Nairi no Jutsu…”
The Kazekage looked at the man baffled but watched in horror as the girl shivered raising her hands into a hand seal tears still streaking down her cheeks with her broken eyes
“….Tankui Nairi no jutsu…”
Instantly the windows burst inwards blasting in with sand clinging to her body faster than gravity could bring the now completely asleep girl to the floor. Next came the ravaging storm of razor like wind and sand.
The Kazekage stood atop the large building looking down at the rising sand as it formed. Only one of his guards escaped unscathed. Another bloodied and half eaten away by the raging currents of sand and wind lay dying in his brothers grasp.
“…..I don’t mean to cut your morning short…but this is an emergency….Naku…he is dead…we cant save him…raise the alarm…I will keep this….busy….but I need everything we have….Shukaku is not an easy foe.”
The shinobi nodded gently placing his brothers head onto the floor laying him to rest and fleeing away just in time to see the emerging ichibi. Shukaku roared raising one razor like clawed arm.
“….I would hurry if I were you….”
He bit his lip and spat onto the ground before quickly pressing his hand into it
“Kuchiyose no jutsu Ohitsujiza Ryū.”
A massive dragon instantly erupted from the spot surrounding the area encasing the kage and the massive shukaku. Though its head popped into the cage it had made with its massive body
“…I TOLD YOU NOT TO SUMMON ME!!”
“…calm down….I had to…take a look”
The Kazekage was already latched onto the dragon’s snout using his chakra to hang gently from his feet. As he pointed at the shukaku as its blow had already demolished the building he was just standing on.
“…I am not blind and neither do I care….you should really consider yourself lucky you can even summon me..”
“…calm down…sheesh..just help me here….there is a person in there…and I am not for killing them…I just need to wake em up…”
The Shukaku looked up taking in a great breath.
“…hey…its your own damned problem not mine…I am not fighting a Biju for you…I don’t care who you are I am no-“
The Kazekage jumped again as the massive ball of wind smashed into Kowloon’s face sending the dragon into a rage, as it began sending bursts of fire down at the shukaku the Kazekage quickly ducked and weaved between obstacles getting closer and closer
“Keruberosu!...”
His blade whirled quickly at the tailed beast’s head from behind. Enchanted with his Fūton chakra, it tore through the sand ripping a massive hole before becoming lodged just in time for a follow up Katon igniting the previous jutsu. The blast swung around the spinning blades lodging them into the neck of the great beast letting him swing faster and faster as he moved down then further up coming full circle. The fire blasts now behind a massive sand shield the very angry and very surprised Ichibi could only think of the small creature hurting its head. Ten explosive tag filled kuni smashed down into the wound blasting it wider until he found what he needed. As the sand retreated one area failed to move. A small sphere reinforced with stronger minerals than just sand. He pivoted and lunged throwing his hand out smashing against the sphere.
“Fūja Hōin!”
The sand burst free revealing a sleeping girl propped up in the sand held fast by the very same sand. He pulled his open hand again to repeat the technique when a blade blasted into his back and out his chest
“….not so fast there boy….”
Koruharu smirked, his blade arcing through the kage.
“…thought you would have been better than this….your father would be upset with you….”
Blood seeping from his teeth he smiled
“…I am better that that…”
His body erupted blasting outward in razor like shards of wind chakra as the wind bushin detonated throwing the old man back. The kage flash stepped into place holding the girl gently watching the elder fall from the great height
“….Fūja Hōin….”
Her eyes snapped open and the sand instantly became unstable falling in one massive burst.
“…its ok….princess of the sand….its ok….you have a place now….”
He held the crying girl gently kissing her forehead and placing her gently onto the sand walking over to the quickly dying Koruharu.
Blood erupted from his mouth as he let out a wet cough
“…bloody fool….you will be the death of this nation….the DEATH OF THE SAND….”
He coughed again barely able to catch his breath.
“….no….you are the fool here…I am sorry you have fallen so far old friend…..we will morn your loss….though..honestly…we should have mourned it 10 years ago when you started down this damned path…..I should have acted sooner….I am so sorry…”
He kneeled cradling the man’s head into his lap
“…I don’t need your damned pity boy…..just do it…”
“…the man you were deserves better….but not the man you are….”
The kage closed his eyes and quickly yanked to one side. Breathing in deeply he set the old man’s head down. His neck limp and sagging, he looked up just as the massive dragon opened his mouth once more. He ended the summon and the giant vanished in a massive puff of smoke. Now back in the village he had protected from the majority of the fight, half the village was already gathered to launch a support attack though all they could do is marvel at the man walking out of the ruined section of the village holding a young girl.
“….Lord Kazekage!....what happened….and…who is this?...”
He forced a smile and answered looking at the girl who gave a slight blush triggering a greater smile from the kage
“…..Kazehime…..the villages little princess….”

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 8:38 pm


Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi
PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 8:46 pm


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Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:16 pm


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Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

No, we just chose those three to be available for Genins to have sealed in them. The others ones can be caught in the open by Mod decision if we want to use one for a later arc.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:32 pm


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kesuke uchiha
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Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

No, we just chose those three to be available for Genins to have sealed in them. The others ones can be caught in the open by Mod decision if we want to use one for a later arc.

lol ok...though this really isnt falling under sealing one into a gennin....it was someone finding it and sealing it into a child so they could use her as a weapon....just a happy accident that she would end up being a gennin lol
though....did you read it?

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:45 pm


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kesuke uchiha
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Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

No, we just chose those three to be available for Genins to have sealed in them. The others ones can be caught in the open by Mod decision if we want to use one for a later arc.

lol ok...though this really isnt falling under sealing one into a gennin....it was someone finding it and sealing it into a child so they could use her as a weapon....just a happy accident that she would end up being a gennin lol
though....did you read it?

Not really sorry. I'll look at it later.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:55 pm


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kesuke uchiha
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kesuke uchiha
Groganofthewasteland
Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

No, we just chose those three to be available for Genins to have sealed in them. The others ones can be caught in the open by Mod decision if we want to use one for a later arc.

lol ok...though this really isnt falling under sealing one into a gennin....it was someone finding it and sealing it into a child so they could use her as a weapon....just a happy accident that she would end up being a gennin lol
though....did you read it?

Not really sorry. I'll look at it later.

ok then...though two things
first can we give a talk to consider making it an option. I dont expect a yes on that one I am just hoping lol ^w^
and second....just for the rp can I make this character and have the same story as in this only the shukaku gets removed without killing her so she will just have sand based jutsu no massive chakra no going out of control just a girl the kazekage can adopt?

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 12, 2013 11:04 pm


kesuke uchiha
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kesuke uchiha
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kesuke uchiha
Groganofthewasteland
Shukaku is not available to be sealed into a character. As of right now, only three are: Kyuubi (already taken) Hachibi, and Yonbi

awwwwwww
umm..are we just not ready for the Shukaku?
and can we just keep this sucker in reserve for when the position opens?
and finally...you did read it right?
rather epic huh? ^w^
lol writing these always gives me the warm fuzzy >w<

No, we just chose those three to be available for Genins to have sealed in them. The others ones can be caught in the open by Mod decision if we want to use one for a later arc.

lol ok...though this really isnt falling under sealing one into a gennin....it was someone finding it and sealing it into a child so they could use her as a weapon....just a happy accident that she would end up being a gennin lol
though....did you read it?

Not really sorry. I'll look at it later.

ok then...though two things
first can we give a talk to consider making it an option. I dont expect a yes on that one I am just hoping lol ^w^
and second....just for the rp can I make this character and have the same story as in this only the shukaku gets removed without killing her so she will just have sand based jutsu no massive chakra no going out of control just a girl the kazekage can adopt?

I have no idea to either. I'll bring it up tomorrow to the mods, but the answer to both is likely going to be no
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