Welcome to Gaia! ::

The School of Dedicated Roleplayers [closed]

Back to Guilds

A general roleplay guild with emphasis on improving RPers. 

Tags: Roleplaying, Tutoring, School, School of Dedicated Role Players, RPing 

Reply 01 SDRP Academy
[COMPLETE] SDRP Academy: PSY 101 Spring 2012 Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2 3 ... 4 5 6 7 ... 12 13 14 15 [>] [>>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Bourgeoisie Alice V

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 3:12 am


Little Alice glared up at Puppeteer Alice and thought to herself, Why couldn't you just do this part for me? I hate talking about myself.

Alice took a deep breath, trying to stay calm before she had to make a fool out of herself... Again. She mentally went over all the people who had mentioned her: Tombstone, D'cund and Mr. Vay. She nodded to herself and took another deep breath, though it didn't help to calm her much.

"I-I..." she cleared her throat and started again, "I'd like to thank Tombstone for his kind words about my introduction." She smiled a little smile and continued, "I take pride in my grammar and spelling skills." She beamed a bit. "Though I must admit, I do make mistakes like everyone else sometimes." she quickly added to make sure she didn't sound too full of herself. Alice tapped her chin, thinking about the last thing he'd said. "I'll get to that comment about being exciting a bit later..."

"Next is... D-D'cund? ..Right?" Alice scratched the side of her head, hoping she had pronounced his name correctly. She started playing with a few strands of her hair and bit her lip a little before she began talking again, "W-Well... D'cund is right. I am a bit nervous... I'm not a big fan of talking in front a big group of people with.. all... their... attention..." She felt a chill go down her back and her mouth go dry. "Uh.. ahem. W-with-all-their-attention-on-me." she finished her sentence as fast as she could, smushing all of her words together. Alice decided to just close her eyes and get the rest of this assignment over with, so she did just that. "And yes, I guess, I was a bit of a recluse before I came here. I just felt more comfortable in my room than out in the world. There was no one there to judge or make fun of me. Just me and my books. It was peaceful." She opened her eyes and had a strange look on her face. She shook her head and cleared her throat again.

"Finally, Mr. Vay." Alice said, looking up at her teacher. Smiling, she laughed a bit, "Heh, yeah... I'm not very good at descriptions." Her smile dropped a little as she continued, "Cliché, huh? ...Ah. That reminds me of Tombstone's "not exciting" comment. I wanted to say a little something about that..." She tapped her chin, looking for the right words. "I suppose I do seem a bit one dimensional at the moment but... I think as time goes on, the more interesting things about me will come out. It's like... When you first meet someone, you don't know everything about them immediately, just by looking at them, right? You have to get to know them. Spend time with them and stuff... And then you, like, learn stuff about them that you didn't know before. For example, say you meet a regular lookin' guy one day and slowly become friends. Then, when you guys get close enough, he confesses his deep dark secret to you that he's actually an alien who took on the form of a normal human to study planet Earth. You would've never guessed that he's actually an alien by looking at him or just talking to him once. Finding out all the nuances of someone's personality takes time. That's all I'm sayin'." Alice explained, with a few excited gestures thrown in here and there, not yet realizing how much she'd relaxed in the last few minutes. She nodded very matter-of-factly when she finished, leaned back in her chair and took a bite out of the vanilla cupcake that Mr. Vay had poofed onto her desk.

It took a few moments for Alice to remember that there was still one step left in the assignment. She straightened up in her chair, snapping back into Honor Student Mode. Taking out a piece of paper and a pen, she began writing down what she felt made a character "good". After writing for a while, she finished the assignment and put her pen down on the desk, pleased that she'd completed the last part quickly. Alice looked over her neat handwriting and smiled at how orderly it looked. She carefully re-read what she'd written, checking for any spelling or grammatical errors. When she was content that there weren't any, she slowly got up and gently placed her completed assignment on the teacher's desk. As she settled back into her chair, she thought to herself, I hope that was what he wanted from me.

Alice looked down at her desk and realized that she hadn't finished eating her cupcake yet. She happily finished it off, savoring its flavor. She had a bit of a sweet tooth but there weren't very many sweets at her house, so the cupcake was a welcome treat. When she was done, she wiped some crumbs off of her face and the desk, folded her hands in her lap and waited quietly for the next person to speak.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:42 am


Getting a little impatient, Mr. Vay tapped his watch again but didn't bother to look at it as he walked back toward the front of the class to flip through the papers on his desk.

“I'm seeing an interesting thing in this assignment, other than half the class's inability to turn it in,” he muttered slightly then looked up to the class. “It seems there's some blurring of the line here between what makes a good character and what makes a good player. There is a difference. To break it down simply: the character is the design aspect while the player is the execution of that design. A good player can take a bad character and still do good things with it, conversely a bad player can utterly ruin a good character. There is separation between the two,” He leaned back against the teacher's desk to look over the students with a slightly flat look then shook his head.

“And I'm getting tired of waiting for late work. Most of you have done the oral part now. Keynir, Venom, jump in with yours when you get around to it. For now, let's take a look at what the few of you that turned something in actually said,” he paused shuffling though the papers briefly before continuing.

“The most common answer across the board seems to include, in some form or other, that a good character must be consistent,” Vay looked out over the class a touch expectantly. “Yeah. There's that blurring of the line. While consistency is of utmost importance to the player it's actually not all that important to the character. Sounds like an odd thing to say, don't it?” he paused to shrug off his irritation and give them a friendly smile. “Well, have you ever met anyone who was bi-polar? Or even contrary? Maybe just someone who's simply inconsistent? Take my wife for example.” Vay snapped his fingers and in a big puff of smoke a dark haired woman in a pinstripe skirt suit and combat boots appeared at his side with a stumble.

“What tha-” she gasped straightening up with a confused little glare in dark chocolate eyes as she looked out over the class. Then she turned that glare on the teacher and it heated. “Making example of me already?” she only half asked in a grumble as she stood taller than him and looked a touch threatening.

The teacher grinned wide and patted her shoulder lightly, “You remember to get the car registered?” he asked rather non sequitur.

“Umm. . .” she blinked with a slight blush and the gruff demeanor completely changed to something shy and adorable, hands clutched in front of her and booted feet turned in as she raised her shoulders in a little shrug with a sorry smile.

Vay just grinned and patted her shoulder again then looked to the class. “It's called a 'mercurial personality' or sometimes 'chameleon' and is a trait of good actors, and by extension con-men and other manipulators. Most women have the capabilit-”

“Hey!” the woman cut him off with an offended look for that but Vay just returned it with a flat challenge and she couldn't really argue so just looked away with a huff.

“Capability to suddenly switch moods for no apparent reason,” he continued then gave a little wave to the woman, “My wife can completely shift personalities to meet the needs of the situation and often does so unconsciously. While these personality shifts are mostly surface, the core traits underneath are rather inconsistent as well.” He turned back to the woman with a smile, “What's your favorite color today, darlin'?” he asked lightly.

She gave him a pouty glare and seemed to consider not answering before she rolled her eyes with a sigh. “Think I'll go with turquoise and a dot of goldenrod today,” she answered with a little sneer.

“Yesterday it was chartreuse,” Vay glanced to the class then returned his attention to the woman with a polite little smile. “So, would you be willing to go to a concert tonight? That band you liked last week is playing at the stadium.”

She blinked then considered a moment, “The one with the banjo?” she asked and Vay nodded patiently then smiled when she curled her nose in mild disgust, “Naaah, I don't think I really like them all that much. I mean, I know I said they were great but that's just the novelty of it. Ya know. How often do you hear banjo in a death metal band?”

“You told me to get tickets if they came to town,” Vay told her gently.

“I did?” she furrowed her brow at him and got that shy look again as he nodded slowly.

“Don't worry, I know better,” he patted her shoulder again then turned back to the class. “My little ball of chaos,” he waved at the woman with a wide smile.

“You do it too,” she huffed under her breath at him.

Vay just grinned with a little nod as he went on to the class, “Some inconsistency in a character's design can actually be beneficial as it can lend a humanizing touch to the character - after all isn't everyone a little inconsistent sometimes?” He gave the woman a winking grin then snapped his fingers and she disappeared in another puff of smoke. “Just don't go overboard with it or you risk tripping into the realms of 'crazy' which is, in most cultures, socially undesirable,” he paused, “We'll talk more about 'crazy' later. For now just consider it a bad thing.”

“For a player though,” Mr. Vay stepped to the blackboard and drew a large 'T' on it then labeled the left side 'Good Player' and looked back to the class, “As I said earlier, consistency is of utmost importance to being a good player.” He scrawled 'Consistency' under the player side. “Even if inconsistency is a part of the character design, the player must be consistent in that inconsistency. It's harder than it sounds actually as we do tend to fall into certain patterns after a while and forget to be inconsistent. But inconsistency in the player is never a good thing.” The teacher turned back to the board and drew another 'T' labeling the left with 'Bad Player' and underneath writing, 'Inconsistent' then turned back to the class.

“Inconsistency in players usually manifests in what most of you mentioned: changing the character's traits in the course of the RP, usually to benefit from the situation. Note the usually. Sometimes character shifts happen by accident simply because the player's own personality is far removed from that of the character and the player overlooks this going with their own, gut reaction rather than taking the time to think of how the character would react in a given situation. Both are bad. And here's why: It's important for the GM and other players to be able to at least vaguely predict what your character's reaction to a given situation will be. If they can't do this then they can't trust you and trust is the basis of all relationships. If another player can't trust your character to have their back in a fight then you're not getting invited to the fight. If a GM can't trust your character to do the right thing to further the plot then you're getting left out of the plot. Not to mention the general annoying-ness of being that guy who always says/does/has/is just the right thing at the right moment. No one likes that guy. Everyone wants to be that guy but no one wants to watch him one up them at every turn,” Vay paused to look over the class then flashed a wicked little grin, “Last reason not to be inconsistent - some GMs are nicer than others but most good ones will punish an inconsistent player. I've been known to kill their characters with their own inconsistency.”

Mr. Vay paused to let that sink in then he stepped aside so they could see the board and gave them his polite smile again. “Now then, since I'm still missing most of your papers, we're going to try something else for this.” He paused briefly, “I'll take one trait from each of you. It can be good or bad, for player or character. Feel free to use something from your paper if you actually did it. Let's try this one at a time. Someone please stand up and give us a trait to put on the board,” he nodded back at the T-charts.

Roll Call:

Bourgeoisie Alice V
Alice Valentine: a girl with a few mental disorders trying to find someone to understand her and not call her "crazy".


Currupted Dart
Garret Thorngage: a boy with low self-esteem and what little confidence he has was earned through hard work and success.


DragnGuy7
Alex Rider: a down on his luck slacker pushed into enrolling by his nagging parents.


Jikial
D'cund Vospa: a brutish male rock hominid hailing from parts unknown.


Keynir
Levi Jemison: a home-schooled and neglected boy determined to make something of himself.


Kobochi
Mayura: an easy-going girl with the hopes of making friends and having some fun and adventure in her otherwise boring life.


Setses
Basira Itzli: a sometimes meticulous, sometimes lackadaisical girl that does not do well under pressure.


StealthNeko
Fang Caligon: an adventurer, looking for a place to belong.


Venom3001
Lloyd "Tombstone" Sanetha: an elf gunslinger from a postapocalyptic Wild West.

Ivaylo_Sai


Keynir

Shirtless Tycoon

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 1:36 pm


All the while, Levi had been scribbling furiously, crossing out sentences and replacing them. He didn’t have a school background, and already seemed to struggle with putting his thoughts to paper. Trying it from memory was something he considered, but he was convinced he forgot to mention things. He felt really disappointed with himself, already screwed up so early, but he was determined to catch up. He’d finished right before the teacher started explaining, and had to wait while he listened and took notes. When the teacher was done, however, Levi rose from his seat, clutching the piece of paper in his hand. “Ehm, mister Vay? I finished the introduction analysis, I’m sorry it’s so late.”

His knees were a bit wobbly now, but he forced to focus on his paper, from which he immediately started to read, quickly droning up what he'd written down.
“For the people with no eyes, Tombstone looks like an elf cowboy, with all the characteristics one can think of. His ears are pointed, on top of them rests a cowboy head. He is dressed in a duster with tan pants and cowbot boots. Around his waist are two guns, which I am not an expert in, but I guess they are pistols. He is supposedly very, very skilled with them. I suppose this is how he earned his nickname.
Now to continue with what I am guessing from what I saw and heard. His demeanor is one of a confident alpha male who knows he is at the top of the foodchain. He is confident and disciplined, I don’t see him lose control quickly, if ever. He also seems a bit detached, like he has seen so many things regular people would call abnormal, he’s just very hard to be phased. This could also fit the bill of self-control, though, which I imagine he has plenty of.
He didn’t say much regarding his background, except that it’s likely a wasteland, which means he suspects it will be right now. This could explain why he is so detached, if he is, as a way to cope seeing all those places go to waste. Given the dirt on his clothes I guess he came straight from there.

This concludes my analysis of his introduction but then again, I am not quite done talking about it; I also think his introduction was the best at the moment. I don’t know any technical reasons to back this claim up, it’s mostly instincts. The way Tombstone is described, I can just picture it, more than I could with the other introductions. It’s complete, from the way he acts to the way he talks to the way he looks. It was very solid to me.”

Levi put the piece of paper down on his desk, shifting a few other pieces to find some more notes. His knees had gotten steady again, him being more at ease now he'd stood up addressing the class for a while with nothing bad happening. When he found the notes he needed, he cleared his throath. "I'd like to continue immediately with the next assignment, too, if you don't mind."

Holding the paper close to his face, he started to read again.

“What Garrett said about how I looked is irrefutable, I’m afraid”, Levi admitted with a blush when he ran a pale hand through his now even more disheveled hair. He hadn’t really had the most healthy couple of weeks lately..
“I wouldn’t say I am a traveler, though”, he continued, “but I can see how you thought I was. I feel mostly like a fugitive, running from home like I did. It’s true my father was the main agressor, he didn’t know when I left but I am sure as hell he does now” he said with a smirk on his face.
I tried to come over as disinterested as it is my way to stay on guard. If I can’t show others my true face, they hold no power over me. I suppose I did this a little too well in my introduction, so he could hardly have thought of that. Deep down I’m more insecure with a huge drive to prove myself and get well-educated.” Levi’s fist tightened as he reminded himself why he was here, he couldn’t forget. He stood for a moment longer until he remembered himself and sat down once more to finish up the third part of the assignment.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:06 pm


Mayura heard D'cund ask about her first language, but then others started speaking and she didn't want to interrupt, taking a few notes and listening to what the professor was explaining to them, trying to understand as much as she could.
She thought about it for a moment after Levi gave his late assignment, and when she saw no one was getting up she took a deep breath and stood up with out saying anything and walked to the board, and wrote down 'lack of descriptive abilities' she turned to the teacher giving him a nod and then looked up at D'cund as she walked back to her seat " my first language is Spanish by the way" she said with a smile and sat down.

kobochi


Currupted Dart

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:30 am


Garret smiled a little when he heard Mayura's first language was Spanish, this was the only other language he had managed to learn sufficiently. In high school he did significantly better in Spanish than he did in English, perhaps because it was his first language, but he forgot it after moving back to America when he was young, so maybe it was the support he got from his mother to learn it.

Garret briskly walked up to the board once Mayura had taken her seat again. He knocked over his chair but chose to ignore it as it slammed to the ground. It was a bit loud but he maintained his bearing nonetheless. On the board he wrote in his tall letters: Strengths and Weaknesses. Under the "Good character" section. Then quickly moved back to his seat which he moved back into position swiftly, almost toppling it the other direction.

"De donde eres tu? Mi madre soy de Espana." Garret spoke to Mayura from his seat in a low whisper, his American accent was slight but very noticeable to a native speaker. His mother would always make fun of him for it.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:18 pm


Alex didn't say a word as he got up from his seat and made his way to the board. Under the Bad Character section he wrote 'static characters' in a quick hurried style. He returned to his seat and noticed that he couldn't even read his own writing. He shook his head, sighing as he made his way back up to the board and erased his chicken scratch. He rewrote his subject, this time taking his time to make sure the writing was legible. He made his way back to his seat and nodded to Mr. Vay.
With his assignment done, he pulled a piece of paper out of his bag and wrote a message on it. He expertly folded the note into a paper airplane and gave it a gentle toss forward towards the front of the class. The plane gently glided to a stop on Alice's desk and Alex allowed himself a smirk. He may not have been able to do many things well but he had always had a knack for useless little talents, like making paper airplanes and learning how to throw and accurately determine flight paths.

DragnGuy7

Friendly Explorer

6,800 Points
  • Conversationalist 100
  • Money Never Sleeps 200
  • Somebody Likes You 100

Bourgeoisie Alice V

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:36 pm


Alice blinked a few times at the plane that flew out of nowhere. She stared at it for a minute, turned to see where it had come from and unfolded the plane to read the note. She quickly wrote a response, hoping the teacher wouldn't catch her writing notes in class. Then Alice folded it back into a paper plane and threw it back towards Alex, watching it crash sadly into the floor beside him. She frowned at her failure and slunk down into her seat a little.

Origami she was talented at, flying planes she was not.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:21 pm


A pen flew through the air as Levi let out a small gasp. He'd been writing much, and furiously so, the past couple of hours. Something his wrist wasn't accustomed to at all, which it reminded him to by stinging sharply. From the sting, Levi's hand twitched up and the pen shot out of his hand. His face flushed as he watched the pen fly and disappear over the edge of the desk and heard it clatter on the floor.

Grabbing his wrist with his other hand, he leaned forward over the desk to see if he could locate it. Luckily, it didn't fly away too far, just a few seats over. He chose to let it be for now and leaned back into his chair, reading over what he'd just written. This way he'd just casually swoop it up when he returned from handing in the assignment and everyone had forgotten about his pen falling. He opened and closed his hand a few times in an attempt to get the blood running again while his eyes flew over the words.

When he was satisfied with his character assignment and his wrist had stopped tingling, he grabbed the paper and stood up from his chair. He chose to stick to the walls this time and went around the edge of the first desk up to the front. His eyes were trained on the ground so he wouldn't somehow trip and make an even fool of himself, as he believed they already saw him that way. When he reached the desk of the teacher, his head perked up as if he were surprised to have made it and he placed the assignment carefully on the pile already there. He nodded to the teacher, his face giving way to a small, curtious smile. He picked up a piece of chalk and wrote "Convincable" on the good side of the player T-chart in a neat letter. He wrote it slowly and careful, the resistance of the chalk on the board felt odd to his hand and the last thing he wanted was to leave messy handwriting behind.

When he'd finished that, he turned around and navigated through the desks to where he thought his pen lied. He tried to avoid desks with people sitting behind them, especially Tombstone's, as Levi was slightly freaked out by him. As it turned out he wouldn't be able to avoid everyone, as he found his pen in front of Basira's desk. He eyed her nervously, not wanting to look longer than necessary to avoid coming over rude. He murmured a "Hi" while he bent down and picked up his pen. He clicked the top a few times and found it still working perfectly. His hands fumbled with it while he walked back to his chair, starting to take it apart and put it back together again. He'd done it so often he could do it blind by now, but his hands just had to be doing something. It had always been like that, especially when he felt awkward. He had it disassembled and almost put together again when he reached his chair a few desks over and sat down, looking over the classroom.

Keynir

Shirtless Tycoon


DragnGuy7

Friendly Explorer

6,800 Points
  • Conversationalist 100
  • Money Never Sleeps 200
  • Somebody Likes You 100
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:12 pm


Alex watched Alice and gave a friendly salute as well as a friendly smile when she turned to see where the plane had flown from. He was glad when she bent over the note and her pen scribbled a response. She didn't seem like she was going to hand it back to him, and was surprised when she threw it back. Its flight was perfect except she had aimed a bit to the left of him. He noticed that she sunk into her seat because of it. He picked the plane off the floor next to him and read the note. He scribbled a response back, inquiring about any particular series she enjoyed. He flicked his attention to her and remembered her failed flight. He added a second part in his note about throwing a paper airplane and not to worry if things turned out wrong. Sometimes the winds weren't friendly, sometimes they were.
Finished with his note, he aimed the plane back to her desk and gave it a throw. This time it landed on her lap, a much more difficult spot considering her position and the lack of space it had versus the desk.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:49 pm


Maayura was surprised as she hears Garret whispering to her, and in spanish she quickly turned around and the stopped hoping she had not caught too much attention from others, "I'm from Mexico" she whispered, not that you could tell by her accent, people seemed to never guess she was from there, Russia, France, South America and even Morocco was in her list of places people had ask if she was from, yes that is how weird her accent was.

kobochi


Ivaylo_Sai

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:20 pm


The teacher had wandered back to his chair and was reading his book with his feet propped up on the desk again. He looked up over the edge of the book to watch Levi give his late assignments then gave the boy a nod, “Don't sweat it, kid. Yer not the only one. Just try to get it done sooner next time.” He paused briefly before looking down to his book again with an added, “And watch the paragraph spacing. There should be space.” He half muttered into his book and went back to reading.

When Mayura, then a few others, got up to write their suggestions on the board, Vay tilted his head with a slightly arched brow and watched them. When the boys started communicating with the girls, he stifled a wry grin and got up from his desk. “Don't think I don't see that, guys,” he shook his head and walked to the board to give it a look over. “Ok, what've we got so far. . .” he trailed off then tapped Mayura's 'lack of descriptive abilities' with an idle finger.

“Let's open this one up a bit,” he commented lightly as he erased it then wrote 'Bad Writing' under the Bad Player section. “This is why we offer the LIT classes. Yes, LIT covers more than just grammar and spelling. The whole art of good writing, technique as well as style, is important to being a good RPer; much like the ability to run is important to being a good, say, football player. It's not the whole of the game but if you can't do it yer spending a lot of time on the bench.” He gave the class a smile then shook his head, “Now since we've got a whole department devoted to this I won't go into it more than that. Just know it's very important. Also I'm still seeing the kind of bad grammar that's going to get some of you put into LIT 101. Clean it up guys.”

Mr. Vay turned back to the board and erased Garret's 'Strengths and Weaknesses' then wrote 'Balance' instead. “Just to be a bit more specific. I believe that's where you were going with that,” he gave Garret a briefly questioning glance but didn't wait for an answer before looking out over the rest of the class. “Some of you mentioned this in your written assignment, one way or the other, and it is indeed very important,” he paused briefly to watch the class and make sure they were paying attention. “While it's sometimes fun to play the golden-boy, superman, he who can do no wrong, it is not fun to play with him and even less fun to read about it. Things just get boring when you're perfect and it's the imperfections that really make a person who they are. Everyone has weaknesses, some are just better at hiding them,” he flashed a wry grin to Lloyd then looked out at the class again. “On the other hand though, everyone also has strengths and a good RP character should have some good ones. That's not to say that every character needs to be able swing a sword and out-think evil geniuses but they do need some sort of redeeming value or there's not much point to their existence. Advanced players can prove me wrong there but it takes skill to turn pathetic into a good character. The best characters have a decent balance of strengths and weaknesses to create a well rounded personality,” Vay traced a circle in the air with the chalk then turned back to the board.

“This one,” he tapped the 'static characters' under the Bad Character chart and pondered a moment before erasing 'characters' but leaving the first part. “Just a little redundant,” he gave Alex a grin then looked to the rest of the class. “The only constant in life is change and while this one seems to contradict the first rule of being a good player,” he tapped the 'Consistency' under the Good Player chart, “it is important for a good character to change, more specifically to grow, through the course of the story. Some stories require it more than others but generally if the characters are at the end of the story exactly as they were at the beginning then what's the point of the story?” Vay paused but not long enough for them actually answer. “Now then this is a hard one to get down on a character submission and just about impossible to do in an intro but it is something you should keep in mind when making your characters. Know that there needs to be room for growth and try to have a plan for where you would like to take them. You should share this plan with your GM (a good one will ask for it on the character submission) so they can make sure it happens, and is appropriate,” the last was a slight mutter as Vay turned back to the board to look at the last, so far, item.

“I think we'll go with 'Convincing' on this one,” he erased Levi's 'Convincable' and replaced it with 'Convincing' instead. “Same basic meaning, I believe, and this one kind of goes under both Player and Character,” Vay scrawled it under both headings then turned back to the class with a smile. “This was part of the point of the introduction and refutation exercises as they made you look at how convincingly you introduced your character. That's the player aspect there - the ability to actually portray the character as intended. This is of course most difficult when the character is far removed from the player's own personality or 'comfort zone' of things they are familiar with. It's hard to play a doctor when you don't know basic first aid and you're not going to make a convincing gunslinger if you can't tell the barrel from the chamber.” He paused with a grin, “And that's why we offer the KIN and to some extent the HIS classes.” Shameless plug inserted, he went on.

“As for the character aspect, a better word might be 'believable' but we'll stick with convincing,” Vay tapped the word on the board. “Part of the reason for the balance thing is believability. While some measure of fantasy is fun,” he waved a hand at D'cund and Lloyd, “going too far with that will alienate your readers, which in an RP is your GM and other players. These are people you don't want to alienate as they have considerable sway over your character's well being.” The teacher paused a moment to watch the class again before going on, “Now there's no hard rule on what's going too far - that really depends on your GM and the world you'll be playing in. But in general just ask yourself 'Is this really plausible?' If the answer is 'No' then you've gone too far.”

Mr. Vay gave the class another look over then settled his eyes on the students that had yet to come to the board, “Give the rest of you some time to get your work in but we're not waiting all week. Now come on, don't be shy.” He waved back at the board with one hand and held out the chalk with the other to any who might take it.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 9:31 pm


As Basira was rounding up her last few thoughts on the subject of character, her professor snapped. Well s**t. If I can’t finish these assignments I’ll never get the damn cupcakes… “Damn, fuggin’ cupcakes…” With more grumbling Basira crumpled up her paper into a ball and dropped it into her bag, along with the other balled up pieces. Her bag was overflowing with unfinished ideas. Okay. New plan. ******** cupcakes. Bludgeon the quiet one with a brick AND TAKE THE CUPCAKE! Her brows raised, her eyes widened and a grin from ear to ear emerged. “Bricks. I’ll need bricks. And a bag, and, hrm, paper or plastic, or that canvas sh--” The collision of a tiny object jettisoned Basira from her single-manned conversation. She looked down at the bottom of her desk. “Weird. Who just goes throwin’ pens aroun’ ? A bit ridiculous if you ask me. No one’s really askin’ me. That’s a weird turn-a-phrase I suppose.”

The scratching of the chalk to the board beckoned Basira’s attention. She squinted her eyes a bit and leaned forward. “Good, bad, right.” Soon another student turned and began walking toward her desk. She kept her gaze fixed on him, her jaw sliding back and forth just to knock her teeth together as she thought. He sounded like a baby bird. Just a small chirp of an hello. “Well hi!” Basira dwarfed his voice with her own, but he was already on his back to his seat. “I tell ya boy, really strange, real strange. Cupcakes, boys ain’t say real words, I mean has the world gone haywire?” Basira looked down to her little scale bar. “At least your listenin’ right? Lets go turn this little s**t in uh?”

Before rising to go to the front board Basira crossed her arms and racked her brain for a moment. Part one was to determine what the assignment was, and once completed to find an answer. She pushed the chair back with her back legs and strutted up to the board. “Only 5 minutes late for this one.” She grinned as she plucked the piece of chalk from Mr.Vay’s hand. On the side for good player she wrote down ‘Word Choice’ She looked to Mr.Vay and gave a nod. “Like, instead of jog you say gallop! And it brings a whole new world of image right? Does that count? Its kinda under badwriting, but, that’s not all encompassing right? How else are we supposed to write if the good stuff was taken already?! It’s not fair.” Basira dragged her feet back to her desk and plopped back down behind it. “now I ain’t never gettin’ that cupcake” she mumbled.

Setses

Wheezing Gawker


Jikial

Distinct Hunter

PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 10:19 pm


D'cund stood up wearily. He shuffled his way up to the board careful to avoid bumping into anyone or anything along the way and succeeded in doing so. As he walked through the class his tallness became apparent, though he was hunched over D'cund stood at a good 6'10". Just as noticeable as his height was his slow gait. The rock monster got to the board and stopped. His hand headed for a piece of chalk left along the bottom and met it whereupon D'cund, as delicately as he could, crushed it into a fine dust between his thumb and forefinger.

"Ho there big guy," rasped a voice from within him, a different voice from before as Sigma had slowly assumed his true self, "hold me up to the board and I'll handle this."

Sigma came out from D'cund's mouth and made his way down the rock's arm, then to his hand.

"What is it you wanted to write?" Sigma asked with seemingly no response. "Alright, take us over to the 'player' side." and so with one stride D'cund reached the other side of the board. The rock monster moved his arm to allow Sigma to grab a piece of chalk and then small man awkwardly drew letters on the board.

When the pair stepped away a small word could be seen under "Player", but most likely not read by anyone who wasn't close to the board.

That word was "flexibility".

Then D'cund moved to the "Character" side and faced it, where scribblings and utterances of Sigma could be heard. When D'cund stepped back Sigma had already retreated inside and the word "context" became a new addition to the that side.

D'cund, in a few long, slow strides, reached the back of the class without disturbing anyone and sat.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:24 am


Vay handed over the chalk to Basira with a friendly smile and stepped aside to watch her scribble on the board then have a little rant. With a patient smile the teacher just gave a slow nod as he watched the girl slump back to her seat and mope. He stepped father aside to let D'cund to the board as he talked to the class.

“Yes, good diction (a fancy term for word choice) is beneficial to being a good player but it does fall under the writing category. Again, since we've a whole department dedicated to that, we're not going to focus on that aspect of RP here. If you're interested in improving that check out the LIT classes.” Vay paused to give Basira a gentle smile, “And don't get worked up. Life isn't fair but there's always another chance to make good if you keep your eyes open for it and don't let yourself get bogged down in past failures.” He watched the girl a while before adding, “There's also plenty of good things left and we might be doing another round so rack that brain of yours for something to put on the board,” Vay nodded as he stepped aside to let D'cund back to his seat then turned to squint at what the pair had written on the board.

“One for each of you I see,” Vay gave the monster a grin then tapped the first, 'flexibility' under the Player side. “Good to make note of this as Jikial has already displayed it for us in making changes to his creepy little hand dude,” he gave D'cund a nod then looked to the rest of the class. “Flexibility is really just a good quality to have in all aspects of everything. It's important to getting along with others and necessary to getting things done. As the Chinese philosopher Lao Tzu said 'the flexible overcome the adamant, the yielding overcome the forceful' and that there is the basis of the Taoist religion, which he founded. For a western perspective we've got good old Charles Darwin's well known quote: 'It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the most intelligent that survives. It is the one that is the most adaptable to change.' How's that importance for ya?” The teacher gave the class a wry grin as he paused briefly to move from the board a bit.

“Putting it in relation to RP, flexibility is needed when things don't go your way. Whether it's a disagreement with another player over what the group should do next, an argument with the GM on if something is possible, a bad turn of events within the game's action, or even a character trait that is causing problems, you will encounter difficulty and flexibility will be required to overcome it. Inflexible players quickly piss people off and a good GM will punish them for it,” the teacher gave them a warning look then turned back to the board and tapped D'cund's second item.

“Hmmm. . . coming from you I'm going to guess you're talking about a background,” Vay glanced over his shoulder at the rock monster then up to the player pulling his strings. “All fancy worded, let's dumb it down a bit for the rest,” he put a slash after 'context' and added 'background' for clarity then turned to the class with a smile. “A few of you mentioned this in your papers and it truly is the heart of a good character. As the popular idiom goes 'x can not exist in a vacuum' where x is whatever subject you are talking about. In this case characters. No one comes from nothing and the old amnesia cop out can only be used so many times before you just gotta buckle down and give your character a back-story. Most good GMs will ask for this on the submission. Better GMs will actually use it in the course of the RP. The best GMs will help you with it, thus weaving little bits of their plot into your character's life. Now for a GM to do this you first have to make a good character, with at least a vague background, to give them something to work with. GM preference varies here but generally the better ones like as much background as you can give them. That is not to say you should write a book for your background, GMs are busy people and don't have time to read all that, but a timeline with explanations of important events will do the job nicely for most.”

With a nod and friendly smile the teacher held out the chalk again, “Come on, there's still plenty of good things left to put up there. And quite a few bad ones left as well.”

Ivaylo_Sai


Bourgeoisie Alice V

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 7:17 pm


Alice was impressed by Alex's perfect aim with the paper plane. She picked it up out of her lap, sat up straight in her seat, and placed the little airplane on her desk. Alice did her best to smile as innocently as possible at Mr. Vay while he was talking about the things the students had written on the board, pretending like she didn't have an obvious note in the shape of an airplane on her desk.

When Mr. Vay held out his chalk again, Alice decided she'd give it a try this time. She got out of her chair, took the piece of chalk, and walked up to the board. Doing her best to ignore the fact that she was standing in front of the entire class again, she wrote 'etiquette' in neat letters under the 'good player' side. She placed the chalk down on the edge of the teacher's desk, looking at the ground as she walked back to her seat. The good part about having a seat in the front row, she thought, is the short walk between the board and the sweet salvation of my seat.

Alice sat back down in her chair and shuffled around a bit, trying to get comfortable again before she gently unfolded Alex's note. She read the note and replied with a list of her top ten favorites. After tapping her chin in thought, she added something at the bottom of the note about trying something different this time. She then proceeded in folding the note into the shape of a little boat, complete with a sail in the middle. Alice placed her little boat note on the floor and slid it over to Alex, the smile on her face showing how obviously pleased she was with her handiwork.
Reply
01 SDRP Academy

Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2 3 ... 4 5 6 7 ... 12 13 14 15 [>] [>>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum