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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:59 pm
Finally a few people I guess higher up then Shinji came in. "So what did you want?"
"1 Can someone untie me! This is not fun! Ok 2 more important I wish to apolgize for my part in Shinra I didn't know they were lying cheating dogs in fact I'd very much wish to join the resitance and clear my name."
"We will discuss this." Eveyrone began talking.
"We've decided you may join but on two conditions one you become our technical geek and second you work under Shinji."
"Fine. NOW FRICKEN UNTIE ME BEFORE I SMACK SOMEONE OR SCREAM LOUDER!" Finally someone did. "Thank you." Then they walekd away. Shinji sighed. "Am I that bad?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:04 pm
Shinji rubbed the back of his neck. "I don't think so... It's just that everyone here has a grudge against Shinra. I think they just took it out on you."
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:10 pm
"Everyone's got a grudge against something besides i'm used to being hated in Shinra if you had the stigma well....they treated you like crap you got sent on the hardest jobs with the worst conditions. Sometimes they'd even kick you and punch you.....but you got through it becuase if you didn't complain or cry they'd give you a handler then they treated you poorly then you got promoted then you just got insulted with every step you took. So it's just burn in my memory. If I'm just insulted and hated I can live with that but I don't want to be hit. I have a phobia of pain because of that." I rubbed my shoulder with the stigma.
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:14 pm
(That's harsh. Why would anyone do that?) Shinji didn't often care about other people's sob stories, but this one got to him. He couldn't help but feel angered. He tried not to show that this disturbed him. "Well, we don't really treat our own that way here. You'll be fine from now on."
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:19 pm
"oh ok that's good." (Your telling him this why exactly? As if he would really care anyway quit being self centered!) "Is there any place I can take a shower here?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:24 pm
"There's a room down the hall that's used for showering. Everyone who goes in there has to put a sign on the door. I'll take you to the room. While you're showering, I'll get you some fresh clothes."
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:32 pm
"thanks preferably I'd like a short cut skirt and a tank top. Maybe a jacket." So i put a sign on the door and went in. I undressed and I looked in the mirror. I faintly passed over the stigma discolorations. The thing that set me apart from alot of people. The thing people were hated for having. The thing that could kill me any day. I felt some strength pulse through me I punched the mirror without even thinking. I felt it shatter around my hand. I recoiled pieces were lodged in my hand now I was bleeding pretty good. Crap I don't know medical stuff.
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:39 pm
Shinji went to get a towel and some clothes. There weren't many clothes to spare, so he had to take some of his own clothing. He had a pair of jeans, a long sleeve shirt and a combat vest. As he reached the door, he heard a thump and the tinkling of glass. He knocked on the door. "Are you ok?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:48 pm
"Ah sort of......" Was the only reply I could think of.
"Sort of?" I wrapped a towel on.
"I punched the mirror and broke it. Then it lodged it's pieces in my hand." He blinked with a look that asked "Are you serious?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 5:53 pm
As much as he figured she needed privacy, he couldn't let her possibly bleed to death. He ran for a portable medkit he had stashed in his footlocker. Then he made his way in. "Cover up, I'm coming in!" He opened the door. "That hand of yours needs to be taken care of."
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:02 pm
I put a shirt underclothes and pants on, he fixed my hand up.
"Please don't so that again Deneria" I looked at my hand.
"It didn't hurt...." I said slowly almost trembling. That's what always happens withen two months of dying you won't feel pain anymore. OH my god how long do i have left? Normally you get about 15 years. Lets see 4 plus 15 is 19 I'm..... OMFG I'm almost 19. DAMN!
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:09 pm
"You say it didn't hurt but the wound tells a different tale. If I hadn't barged in here with the medkit, you could have been in serious trouble. Now don't do that again."
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:18 pm
"I probably won't get another chance." Was I really as far along then I had thought? Well the only thing I can do is help these guys as much as I can in the two months or so I've got left. Finally Shinji left i didn't feel like explaining what I had said to him because it didn't really matter. I showered dressed. Then flew past him to find a computer. I was goign to this slow and carefully. Run som easy test first then decided on a course of hacking. I didn't know if Shinra had good protection or not so I'd have to be very careful. I only needed one test to tell me. I sent a simple diagnostic virus. It enters the computer scans files catches the spy were's attetntion then it manages to come back and give me the details.
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:28 pm
Shinji decided not to ask what she meant. He left the room and gave her a chance to be alone. He returned to his own room and gazed out the window. It was always dark outside. The upper levels blocked out the sun for those underneath. It was like living in the shadow of death. Many people on the lower levels were poor, some had become criminals, others became something worse. It was a meaningless existence down here. And it was because of Shinra.
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:38 pm
Two straight hours of reading data. I finally found out Shinra had virus protection lots of good spywear this was gonna be hard. I grabbed a big piece of paper. I was going to write up my plan. I had a computer, a cardkey, hacking ablities, and the data. That was enough. A rough idea Shinra is really dumb most of their weapons are electronic based so they have to charge them up every night. So Major black out this will shut their mainframes off freak out their security de charge their weapons second I'll have to rewire old feds into their camera system incase they use genraters to bring their computers back online. Thrid take some files on the floor layouts. Also we have to get some card files pics and id tags for our guys to sneak in and set off bombs and cause fake emergencies.
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