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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:15 am
Hey Dylan! Since Louis' picture is in black and white, it might be helpful if you state his hair color and eye color and things for people in the description area. =3
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:06 am
StrawberryZ0mbie Hey Dylan! Since Louis' picture is in black and white, it might be helpful if you state his hair color and eye color and things for people in the description area. =3 Done and done ^^
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:16 am
Seraph-Dylan StrawberryZ0mbie Hey Dylan! Since Louis' picture is in black and white, it might be helpful if you state his hair color and eye color and things for people in the description area. =3 Done and done ^^ Okay--I'm going to approve him. =3 He'll be staying in Malachite Dorm. You'll need to go post a profile thread and such like. And familiarize yourself with the school system. Today is fifth period. ^^
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:40 pm
Character Information: Student
Name: Rosalynda Liven
Species:Illusionist
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance description: She is a pale girl with long black hair, Dark brown eye very close to black. She’s on the short side, 5’3. Averagely built, maybe a little on the skinny side if you asked someone. Personality: -Shy -Secluded -Guarded -Caring (To people she knows) -Honest
Bio: Rosalynda when she was a child had spent a lot of time with her family, learning to control her powers. Sadly at a young age her parents and baby sister died. Her parents were killed in a crash and her sister had been kidnapped. A few years later, when she returned to home, she was so broken mentally Rosalynda allowed for her to stay hidden and never leave the house. Rosalynda had stopped learning to control her magic, so after a few years she started to go a little crazy, not know if something was real or if it was just part of her imagination. She had become a living ghost story in her small town. No one knew what happened to her. Kids would dare each other and run up to touch her house or ring the doorbell. She got so fed up with it she look for a school that would accept her and one that would help her control her powers.
Skills and Abilities: Her powers are what they are called. She can make illusions, things that appear real but are not. Her powers are limited to small things. She can make things appear to be anything she wants and other people can see them too. But since she is poorly trained her illusions only last a couple seconds.
Character Flaws: - Complex-Her ideas and how she thinks is hard to understand sometimes. -Her Bipolar Disorder-She can go from a high to a low in a blink of the eye. -Indecisive-She could spend hours trying to decide on what she wants to do. -Overthinks-Ties in with the indecisive, But more about what people think of her and what she does. Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single Likes: - Day dreaming - Dancing in her room - Drawing scenario (Ex. A grassy field) - Reading at night
Dislikes: - Self-ish people - Rainy days - Thinking about her family
Extra Information: Ay Nothing C:
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:30 pm
Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte The first flaw about her forgetting how to eat which causes her to sleep anywhere can't really be considered a flaw. Forgetting to eat causes a lot of complications, but all you really addressed was that it makes her sleep. To make her not eating a valid flaw, you should do something similar to "because she often forgets to eat, she's always hungry which causes her to be cranky."
If you fix that, she can be accepted. I edited the flaw.. Sorry for the late feedback. >.<" What I meant to ask is what is the resulting factor of forgetting to eat. I myself forget to eat a lot but I really don't think it's a flaw about myself but rather a habit of mine. To make it a flaw, you need to address what about forgetting to eat affects her personality in a negative way.
Hopefully that helps?
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:52 pm
Sorry for the wait! I didn't notice that you posted a character!
Now fr her abilities, as long as you use it responsibly, it should be fine. Excessive use can be a bit distracting and might annoy some of the RPers.
Rosalynda Liven is accepted! She will be staying in the Amethyst Dorm! ^^
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:29 pm
xLieselotte Sorry for the wait! I didn't notice that you posted a character!
Now fr her abilities, as long as you use it responsibly, it should be fine. Excessive use can be a bit distracting and might annoy some of the RPers.
Rosalynda Liven is accepted! She will be staying in the Amethyst Dorm! ^^Oh, I mean she can see her feature not everyone else. That would be hard to do in a roleplay.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:31 pm
Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte Sorry for the wait! I didn't notice that you posted a character!
Now fr her abilities, as long as you use it responsibly, it should be fine. Excessive use can be a bit distracting and might annoy some of the RPers.
Rosalynda Liven is accepted! She will be staying in the Amethyst Dorm! ^^Oh, I mean she can see her feature not everyone else. That would be hard to do in a roleplay. Um... that was for someone else. ^^" Yours is above hers.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:34 pm
xLieselotte Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte Sorry for the wait! I didn't notice that you posted a character!
Now fr her abilities, as long as you use it responsibly, it should be fine. Excessive use can be a bit distracting and might annoy some of the RPers.
Rosalynda Liven is accepted! She will be staying in the Amethyst Dorm! ^^Oh, I mean she can see her feature not everyone else. That would be hard to do in a roleplay. Um... that was for someone else. ^^" Yours is above hers.Well I feel stupid, I clicked my notice and just read bottom sentence of the wrong quote. vv; I'm kind of embarrassed.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:40 pm
Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte Sorry for the wait! I didn't notice that you posted a character!
Now fr her abilities, as long as you use it responsibly, it should be fine. Excessive use can be a bit distracting and might annoy some of the RPers.
Rosalynda Liven is accepted! She will be staying in the Amethyst Dorm! ^^Oh, I mean she can see her feature not everyone else. That would be hard to do in a roleplay. Um... that was for someone else. ^^" Yours is above hers.Well I feel stupid, I clicked my notice and just read bottom sentence of the wrong quote. vv; I'm kind of embarrassed. Don't worry about it! It happens sometimes! ^^
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:39 pm
xLieselotte Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte The first flaw about her forgetting how to eat which causes her to sleep anywhere can't really be considered a flaw. Forgetting to eat causes a lot of complications, but all you really addressed was that it makes her sleep. To make her not eating a valid flaw, you should do something similar to "because she often forgets to eat, she's always hungry which causes her to be cranky."
If you fix that, she can be accepted. I edited the flaw.. Sorry for the late feedback. >.<" Okay, I change it to where it would make her moody What I meant to ask is what is the resulting factor of forgetting to eat. I myself forget to eat a lot but I really don't think it's a flaw about myself but rather a habit of mine. To make it a flaw, you need to address what about forgetting to eat affects her personality in a negative way.
Hopefully that helps?
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:47 pm
Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte Indigenous_BlueDot xLieselotte The first flaw about her forgetting how to eat which causes her to sleep anywhere can't really be considered a flaw. Forgetting to eat causes a lot of complications, but all you really addressed was that it makes her sleep. To make her not eating a valid flaw, you should do something similar to "because she often forgets to eat, she's always hungry which causes her to be cranky."
If you fix that, she can be accepted. I edited the flaw.. Sorry for the late feedback. >.<" Okay, I change it to where it would make her moody What I meant to ask is what is the resulting factor of forgetting to eat. I myself forget to eat a lot but I really don't think it's a flaw about myself but rather a habit of mine. To make it a flaw, you need to address what about forgetting to eat affects her personality in a negative way.
Hopefully that helps? Good job! She's accepted. ^^ She'll be staying in the Amethyst Dorm.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 12:50 am
Character Information: Student Name: Annie Yōsei
Species: Fairy/Human
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance description: - She presents herself very cautiously so she always appears to have her hands up and folded over her chest.
Personality: - Annie is a very curious soul. She holds herself back in public because mundane and ordinary things spark her interest. Her outgoing personality is usually hidden by shy traits because she is afraid of the spotlight. She is usually very nervous once meeting people but doesn't seclude herself from making friends. She is not conceited nor does she enjoy being anywhere near the center of attention. If she is, her skin turns an unnatural pink and she begins to stutter more often.
Bio: - Going way back to her roots, she came about in a traumatic way. Her father was a sylph. He was an air fairy who could become invisible as the air and he used his abilities to force himself upon women. He stumbled across Annie's mother who was half human, half Veela. Being naturally attracted to her, he raped and impregnated the poor girl. Since her mom was human, Annie grew up like a normal human girl, except with wings. She kept them hidden from people, because she was embarrassed of her father. Annie stayed mostly indoors, picking up books and magazines to read as well as invest in art. She had few friends. As she got older and her Veela blood became less dominant and more dormant, he mother heard of Rosentale and sent Annie there, in hopes of making her more outgoing.
Skills and Abilities: - Because her father was an air sylph, she can create small gusts of wind or large torrents of windstorms. This does affect her energy so she usually just uses it to cool herself down during the summer. - She can render her wings and herself invisible. This isn't completely developed yet so when she is invisible, any slight movement will show her as more of a transparent state.
Character Flaws: - Annie has a lying problem. In coercion with making up stories in her head, she also creates fictional fantasies about what her life was like before Rosentale. She makes things sound better than they were and it causes most people to distrust her. - She's out of shape. She isn't fat or skinny, but her stomach does protrude a bit. Enough to make her out of shape. The special doctors she meets would tell her over and over again to exercise more or diet but she never listens. Therefore, while she runs or has to perform manual labor (such as fighting) she sweats a lot, especially under her arms, and embarrassingly becomes easily winded. (No pun intended.) - Her invisibility is in development still, as stated above. Since this is still a work-in-progress, Annie sometimes starts "sputtering." That's her term for it. Basically, she flickers between invisible, transparent and solid very rapidly and it gives her a huge headache and usually hurts others' eyes. She feels as if she should come with her own epileptic warning.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: - Fuzzy animals, especially rabbits and panda bears. - Clear, sunny, breezy days. - Making elaborate scenarios in her head about what's happening around her. - Her wings. - Comedy.
Dislikes: - Being the center of attention or conversation. - Thunder. - Men who treat women as if they're just objects. - Stuttering.
Extra Information: Annie has a stuttering problem that she tries to keep under control. Her stuttering, she found, normally goes away while she sings. (In her bathroom shower.) Other than that, she finds it difficult to have a conversation without her stutter. It's not a characteristic of her shy personality, just an actual speech impediment.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:10 am
Her attraction aura was mentioned often in the bio and even found a place in her dislikes. I hope it won't be able to function in Rosentale since it's better for the other RPers to decide whether they think your character is attractive or not. You could say that the attractive aura eventually wore off which allowed her to go to Rosentale Academy or something like that.
A stutter wouldn't be able to be a flaw if she can get by just fine with it. What can make it a flaw is if it makes it so that she has trouble communicating with others and it makes it hard to understand what she's saying.
Clumsiness would be a valid flaw, but we've seen people just play it off as a cute aspect of their character while others have ignored it and I've yet to see one of our clumsy characters trip and fall on their faces in an unfashionable manner. So we've stopped accepting that as a flaw. You may keep it as extra information, but we won't count it.
A quiet demeanor also can't be a flaw. It's more like a personality trait. It would kind of be offending to those who have a quiet demeanor and they don't consider their personality as some kind of flaw. I wouldn't recommend shyness as a flaw to cover for this though because we've had people use shyness as a flaw, but it always disappears when their character makes friends.
If you need some guidance, you can refer to Character Flaws - Doing it right in our Resource subforum.
Just remember, flaws aren't meant to make your character look good or cutesy. It's something about your character's personality that makes them ashamed about herself and would probably keep her from being able to be liked by all. Sorry for the super pickiness and I hope the advice helps. ^^
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:44 am
xLieselotte Her attraction aura was mentioned often in the bio and even found a place in her dislikes. I hope it won't be able to function in Rosentale since it's better for the other RPers to decide whether they think your character is attractive or not. You could say that the attractive aura eventually wore off which allowed her to go to Rosentale Academy or something like that.
A stutter wouldn't be able to be a flaw if she can get by just fine with it. What can make it a flaw is if it makes it so that she has trouble communicating with others and it makes it hard to understand what she's saying.
Clumsiness would be a valid flaw, but we've seen people just play it off as a cute aspect of their character while others have ignored it and I've yet to see one of our clumsy characters trip and fall on their faces in an unfashionable manner. So we've stopped accepting that as a flaw. You may keep it as extra information, but we won't count it.
A quiet demeanor also can't be a flaw. It's more like a personality trait. It would kind of be offending to those who have a quiet demeanor and they don't consider their personality as some kind of flaw. I wouldn't recommend shyness as a flaw to cover for this though because we've had people use shyness as a flaw, but it always disappears when their character makes friends.
If you need some guidance, you can refer to Character Flaws - Doing it right in our Resource subforum.
Just remember, flaws aren't meant to make your character look good or cutesy. It's something about your character's personality that makes them ashamed about herself and would probably keep her from being able to be liked by all. Sorry for the super pickiness and I hope the advice helps. ^^ Thanks for the tips o: ! I edited my post some for review again (: To be honest, I'm glad you guys monitor the profiles like this. It's also fun to come up with new things, so editing isn't a problem. :3 I also want to point out that I don't think the second one is a very good flaw... but I kind of just thought about my own flaws for that lmfao.
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